I'm like the other readers on this futanari theme stories, not a huge fan.
This story was pretty good though, with both women being equally built.
Even if they both had big dicks.
To me, if both were your every day huge busty hot woman, who were freaks of
nature with equally big cocks - born that way. Some how these two women find
out about the other and what they have in common.
Jealousy sets in and a tit/sex - - - cock fight just happens to breakout.
Down the road they bond.
A hot busty woman who just happens to have a big cock hooks up with a big cock
hunk. The hunk finds out that her gift is as big as his gift. Again jealousy breaks out
and now we have a cockfight/sexfight going on. The hunks bi-side comes out and they
bond too.
Had some time to kill.
Originally Posted by dwcole
I'm glad that everyone is enjoying the story. I wrote it to the specifications of the client that hired me to write it so it might not fit everyone's likes. It's always good to have feedback, though, and there's really no such thing as bad criticism so it does help to improve my craft.
As for the dude I quoted. That's a very interesting story idea that you have there. It's always good to see someone with a creative mind throw out their ideas.
thank you all for the love of this story! I do indeed like the rather extreme side of competition, with special abilities and what not, but of course both opponents will always be even!
More stories perhaps to come in the future!
how much do you charge for a story this long? I might be interested in another one with everything you have here.
Wow very hot story. I loved the equalness between them both made it all the more intense.
I really should look at these comments more often. To answer your question (being the writer of this story) I charge by the word count. Seeing as how this story looks like it was over 8k words which is around $50 USD. If you have an idea for a story send me a message. I'd love to hear about it and from there we'll set up and outline and then determine the word count and pricing.
Ooch! Reading that description made my dick hurt and I don't even have a dick! That was VERY descriptive and brutal and I absolutely LOVED it! Such naughty vivid images in my mind.
Haha! Penis fencing, would love to see more! Are there rules and what are the target areas? Personally, I think the flick is a terrible addition to modern fencing (where you intentionally bend the foil around and touch your opponent's back), but with penis fencing... I suppose with a long enough dick a futa girl could feign for the pussy, then execute a flick and go for the butt!
Aren't your stories in the archive thread? I can't find them. Where are they if not there?
Never mind, I've discovered they are a few under Dracologist, although this specific story isn't here.
Last edited by PalomaJara; August 20th, 2017 at 06:52 AM.
I'll have to message Anubis to get it uploaded.
Loved the story, thanks for taking the time to share it
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