Originally Posted by
Jon Grey
Hello All...
I'd like to thank everyone for reading the story! I've had some concerns as of late in terms of how to manage the story, and I think that is one of many reasons (and trust me, there have been many) that my updates are so sporadic. I tried writing another story. It was terrible.
I've read the criticisms, and while I don't respond directly often (part of me is reluctant on my own stories ? feels weird) I thought this merited, as I'm going to run an idea by you guys. The next week in the timeline (BFS 33) is the Beta-O Hooter's oil wrestling event. The following week is Spring Break. I have a special kind of one-off for the break on the cruise. If I publish it as BFS 33a, would that be ok, with an understanding that BFS 33 might be out of order?
And I'd like to say thank you all for the feedback, positive and negative. I have tried to listen and consider it. I strive to be better, especially with my writing, and the commentary and discussion have helped. Thanks DTHooters for the constant read throughs and commentary ? I have been reading, and listening, though I'm sure it seems as though I am ignoring it a lot. I will say the shift with Sabrina, though background now 1) won't be long, and 2) was a direct result of your points (mirrored through others as well).
Since people have been asking, Tiff's mom is going to factor in here, with some surprises for other characters that have been hinted at previously (vague!). There is a plan. I make no promises that it's a good one.
So the short version. Would everyone like a small break from Beta-O v Hooters? If so, I'll write the cruise stuff first.
Thanks again to all who have read my stories. I hope you enjoy them!
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