The Adventures of Angelica, Private Eye Chapters 59-61

**Anubisx** · June 19th, 2016, 03:19 AM

Another great, great part of this amazing story

**dwcole** · June 19th, 2016, 10:56 AM

Angeldawn30

What, o' what, o' what a twitching cliff hanger chapter 61 has - WOW.

To me personally, one of the best on the board in a long, long time.

And now not one, not two, not even three. But four hot women will have

this magic, so hot.

The Ashley/Joy story line just gets better and better.

Can not wait till Michelle comes back into the story too.

Thanks AngelDawn30

**zquareman** · June 23rd, 2016, 06:35 PM

I feel like the only person that has been waiting for the Jennifer/Emily fight but that is seriously what I've been looking forward to since the characters were introduced. I've always been one for tertiary characters, I guess (to say nothing of busty coeds), but that is the match up I've been looking to each update but it seems like no one else is. Not even a mention in the comments or the closing. Will that be in the next batch of chapters? It's gotta almost be Saturday now, right?

I'm just busting your chops, of course. An excellent series of stories that remember the most important thing about erotica: that the reader wants to get off on it. It doesn't matter how complicated the plot, intricate the characters, convoluted the relationships, if I can't get off on it it's failed at its job (in my opinion at least). I also appreciate the usage of images to shortcut the descriptive process, though I'd have preferred you choose all pornstars so that, yknow, I can find images of their naked bodies and them getting railed and tribbing and stuff, but whatever, the images you chose are of beautiful women. Also, I don't really care about the magic stuff, and to be honest don't really care about the over arching plot beyond establishing a framework for conflict between the characters. My favorite chapters are by far the ones with real dislike or hatred between the characters; I don't care much for when the women like each other or just want to fuck, that's not why I'm on a Sexfight forum, I want hate and violence and dominance, which you provide so don't let me sound like I'm complaining. I especially like your usage of dialog in these encounters, and some violence and domination. All very good, doesn't go too far (broken bones and such), and is very hot. I've always liked lots of dirty talk and name calling and your style fits that well. I also like the incest scenes and wish there were more of them, between the sisters, between the cousins, between the mom and daughter, whatever. I know it's not everyone's thing but I think it's dirty and sexy within the context of a sexfighting story.

So thank you for contributing to the community, you've established yourself forever within the limited annals of the fetish and were you to stop right now your story would be read 20 years from now. It's not immortality but hey, it's more than a lot of people have. And thank you for the personal enjoyment you've brought me, I'll leave it at that. And thanks in advance for what I am sure will be an excellent match up between Emily and Jennifer and TOTALLY NOT a lame cop out where they fall in love halfway through OMG PLS DONT. I want to read one of these girls crying in shame as the other watches and laughs. That is my hope at least.

zquareman

**Angel Dawn** · June 24th, 2016, 09:08 AM

spartwow186... thank you for your kind comments... I noticed that this was your first post. Welcome to Hostboard and I am thrilled that you are enjoying my story. As always, thank you Anubisx for your kindness. You are such an unselfish friend. (Hug). I am always pleased to read your comments dwcole. I think that you make me feel like a princess more than anyone, so here is a Big Hug for you. zquareman... my goodness you had a lot to say.. and I appreciate every word. Thank you! I also love the rivalries and have attempted to create several of them in the story. (You will not be disappointed with what I am going to write with Jennifer and Emily).

As I have mentioned before, I have tried to create this little 'fantasy world' with some interesting characters... my goal was to introduce all of you to Angel and Wendy and Jane, Joy, Ashley, Amber, Lisa.. and all the rest.. Yes, I know there have not been as many hateful confrontations as some of you may like, but when this story is completed, and I have hopefully brought all of these hot sexy women to life, then the fun will begin as I write future stories with these characters.. much more confrontations.. much more competitive sexfighting.. with characters that you already know. So thank you for being patient with me and allowing me to create this 'fantasy world'. If you have enjoyed reading the story half as much as I have enjoyed writing it.. then I am very pleased. Oh, zquareman.. I am really glad that you have 'enjoyed' reading the story (Evil grin). Thank you all for accepting me, for treating me with such kindness... and for respecting me as a girl. I love all of you! xoxoxo Angel

**clash11** · June 24th, 2016, 10:17 PM

Wow what an amazing story . I really like the way you have a visual to help us imagine your characters and the mirror image is so hot to me . I only have one problem .... as a new comer now i have to go back and start reading from chapter one lol .

**Angel Dawn** · June 27th, 2016, 08:28 AM

Thank you clash11. I am happy that you are enjoying my writing. When you mentioned visuals, I assume you mean the links to the photos. Thanks! I really do not like the way it works.. (It is not a Hostboard issue... I am the one with the issue) I wish it would just go to one picture... but I am working on a new way to have images displayed. Again, thank you for your kind words and welcome to Hostboard!

**Coldrin25** · June 27th, 2016, 09:20 AM

Been going through your stories and they are amazing. I love how descriptive you are, and I can't wait for the next chapters.

**Angel Dawn** · June 27th, 2016, 09:52 PM

Thank you Coldrin25. I appreciate your kindness. (Hug)

**NCX_81** · June 29th, 2016, 11:54 AM

One of the most intense stories in this forum! Thank you!

**zara03** · June 29th, 2016, 03:15 PM

I love Angel, she is such a nice friend and a great writer. As much as i enjoyed this part i can't help but suggest something. This story line is becoming quite cheesy and romantic in the last few chapters. The feeling of competition and fighting is gone. Angel's encounter with Sara was amazing and fantastic. There should be more encounters like that and not love stories. Making these as love stories is slowly draining the epicness out of this Fantastic series. But It is just my opinion.