The Adventures of Angelica, Private Eye Chapters 62-63

[Giannis-CB]

I have an update for all of you. As you already know, I have decided to replace the 'model pictures' with digital art. The 'model pictures' presented several problems that I was not comfortable with. .. the possibility of copyright infringement being one of them. I really love the new digital art. However, the new digital renders presented a few new problems. Some of the characters new look did not match up perfectly with the character descriptions that I had written. I am in the process of editing my story from the beginning, changing the physical information about the characters so they will match the new digital art. The first eight chapters are completed.

If you want to read the new physical descriptions for all the girls .... and look at the new images for all of the characters, you may do so here.

The Adventures of Angelica, Private Eye Chapter 1-4

You care about all the details. This is good even if you spent time to this. I praise you for your being a perfectionist. One more we have in common.

However, i have to ask : does this send your new chapters back ? Any idea when we will read the next chapters of your HOT / PERFECT / AWESOME / FANTASTIC / MUST TO BE READ BY EVERY SEXFIGHT AND TITFIGHT FAN / MARVELOUS story ?

[Angel Dawn]

My Dear Giannis .... It only took me a couple of hours to edit the first eight chapters, re-write a few of the previous physical descriptions of the characters and add the new digital art. I will resume editing my story after the story is completed... there will be new chapters posted next week. Thank you for your kind words (Hug)

Update: I have now updated the story though chapter 33. I have re-written what was necessary and have replaced the existing images with new digital art. I have also completed the Michelle/Veronica chapter and am now writing the Jennifer/Amber chapter. Love y'all

[Anubisx]

Seeing the new pictures, now Jennifer is my favorite, because she reminds me of one of my muses: Emily Didonato. It's funny that the name of Jennifer's rival is casually Emily

[dwcole]

Again, two hot, hot, hot chapters.

And what I call a huge plus, is Angel gives her

readers a glimpse into future chapters. And even

these are just as hot.

Speaking of a plus, the new art work is - WOW.

Angel just gives and gives and yes - gives.

[Angel Dawn]

Awww, ... Thank you so very much dwcole. I really appreciate your kind words. I am so delighted that you are enjoying my writing. ... and I am glad you like the new digital art. You get an Angel Kiss?. (Kiss)

[deensmith]

Just finished reading .Wow Angel !!!!
Outstanding!!!

[Angel Dawn]

Anubisx.... The Jennifer/Emily name connection is very cool. Thank you deensmith. I have been a fan of your writing for a long time. "What John Saw" is classic. Thank you for your very kind words.

[Maurita]

Angel, as Toni says it is difficult to find more adjectives to your stories... I want to say that the fuck fight between Wendy and Jane is undoubtfully one of the more masterly stories I have read. Al my body was excited, sweaty... and more, all the time... My orgasm was spectacular.

Besides, the "mystery" of the end... Jennifer and Amber... Wendy, Jane and Angel... OMG... continue, please...

I hope you don't mind that I am getting ideas from you for my stories... No, never steal or copy... just getting ideas, like your nipples orgasms...

MMMMMMMMMMM...

Thanks Angel

[Angel Dawn]

My sweet friend Maurita.. thank you so very much! It is indeed a treasured compliment that you would want to borrow ideas from my writing. I am very flattered. I hope to read more of your continuing story very soon! Again, thank you Maurita. (Big Hug)

[Maurita]

Funny! I posted a comment this morning and when posting they said impossible to post because it was a repetition of the same post in the last five minutes. Not true or it would be posted.

Anyway, Angel, I wanted to congratulate you and to express my admiration for you last two chapters. The fight between Wendy and Jane is a master work of lust for the readers (and I am sure also for you when writing it).

Then, the suspense of what would happen when Angel arrives... mmmmmmmmmmmm..

Simply thanks