New Story in the Dezerai Series

**shak7** · August 30th, 2016, 03:24 AM

Hello Everyone

After I completed the last Dezerai Series I had some request to do another. I also felt like their was unfinished business from Book 3. The two girls Karmen and Shalitha as 12 year olds were obviously too young for sexual competition, but I found myself obsessing over what they would be like as full grown women. So for the last Month I played with the idea of them being 32 year old women and going at it! Eventually playing with the idea turned into a full grown story. So I am now coming to the completion of Dezerai part 4; it will be titled "Long Live the Queen!" It's about 20 years of hatred between the Karmen and Shalitha coming to a head at age 32. This story is also very different from the others. I didn't want to say the same thing with different characters....this time I wanted something completely unique. I hope this accomplishes that. Also as always I try to get into the life and thoughts and emotions of the characters. This story goes into the Souls of Karmen and Shalitha much deeper than the previous stories. I hope I have made them interesting and unique women. Finally this story has a longer buildup. There is no sex in the first 4 chapters, but I hope the story leads to stronger anticipation. Since I have a Martial Arts background, their encounter is brutal in the beginning. Towards the end it gets more sexual. It finishes with the emotions between them finding genuine love and sisterhood! I hope to become a writer soon and this is my attempts at that. The story should be ready for posting within 1-2 weeks after editing.

Shak

**badmax** · August 30th, 2016, 04:57 AM

I'm a fan, Dezerai story is my favourite of this forum with ccfight's stories.
So im happy

Can't wait !!

**Angel Dawn** · August 30th, 2016, 07:51 AM

This is a very pleasant surprise! I have enjoyed reading your Dezerai stories over and over for a long time... and I will be anxiously be waiting for Dezerai Four.

**balover** · August 30th, 2016, 09:10 AM

I have and still enjoy your writing I look forward to more, I like to share, for me I pictured it continue with the four of them at it, say mother's in the kitchen and the girls in the living room, or all four in the same room.

I hope the best for you and look forward to many more of your writing.

Thanks

**Giannis-CB** · August 30th, 2016, 09:13 AM

Originally Posted by shak7

Hello Everyone

After I completed the last Dezerai Series I had some request to do another. I also felt like their was unfinished business from Book 3. The two girls Karmen and Shalitha as 12 year olds were obviously too young for sexual competition, but I found myself obsessing over what they would be like as full grown women. So for the last Month I played with the idea of them being 32 year old women and going at it! Eventually playing with the idea turned into a full grown story. So I am now coming to the completion of Dezerai part 4; it will be titled "Long Live the Queen!" It's about 20 years of hatred between the Karmen and Shalitha coming to a head at age 32. This story is also very different from the others. I didn't want to say the same thing with different characters....this time I wanted something completely unique. I hope this accomplishes that. Also as always I try to get into the life and thoughts and emotions of the characters. This story goes into the Souls of Karmen and Shalitha much deeper than the previous stories. I hope I have made them interesting and unique women. Finally this story has a longer buildup. There is no sex in the first 4 chapters, but I hope the story leads to stronger anticipation. Since I have a Martial Arts background, their encounter is brutal in the beginning. Towards the end it gets more sexual. It finishes with the emotions between them finding genuine love and sisterhood! I hope to become a writer soon and this is my attempts at that. The story should be ready for posting within 1-2 weeks after editing.

Shak

Hello Shak my old friend,

I was one of those who asked you for a next chapter in your legendary story. So now i look forward to read it, being sure that it will be as good and hot as the previous ones !

Be well !! Have fun !!