I'm not too sure what you mean! My concept is an idea, friend. :3
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I enjoy the story, but I think I'd enjoy it a biiiit more without the Gotham inserts! Not that I have anything against Gotham, just, would prefer characters original to the story.
I am a huge fan of mutually assured destruction, when it comes to sexfights featuring death, so I love the alternate ending you give! I think I may show this to a roleplay partner, and maybe, just maybe, we'll write it up! It does sound VERY fun, and got me thinking about deadly sexfights in general.
This is a really interesting idea.
Would love to see something come out of it.
As Sarah rightly says in a different post, writing this stuff requires a lot of time, commitment and juggling with real life priorities - so its only natural that people will want to write about stuff they connect with the most.
Personally, I think the tentacle rapewar style-discussions contain a lot of interesting ideas and once I've given up writing about school girl bimbos maybe I'll try my hand at one .
In the meantime, perhaps people who want to see more of this type of thing should try their hand at writing some, as Hemmie has done so well recently - we need more stories of all varieties on Hostboard to cater for all kinds of titfighting and sexfighting tastes!
Just my 2c.
Gotta say, I'm personally less keen on lethal damage in sexfights than y'all seem to be.
Monsters do provide more justification for nonlethal damage though, so maybe keep your eyes peeled.
Last edited by Hemmie; February 28th, 2017 at 03:07 PM.
I'm not as blood thirsty as I seem, I promise! T_T I enjoy a nice wholesome sexfight as much as the next person.
Though... I think there is something so deliciously primal about a sexfight. I know I've said something along these lines on here before, but "fighting and sex are human nature, and it is logical to mix them." I think a sexfight can easily walk a dangerous line of angry fucking, to actual sexual violence.
I don't like it in all of my stories, but sometimes that peppering of it in there can be healthy for you. Put some hair on your chest. :P I would never tell someone "nice story, but wouldn't it be better... if someone diiied?" Of course not! But, I would also not say it is a bad ending either!
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