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March 5th, 2017, 10:03 AM
#11
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Re: Copycat Struggle
Last two chapters added. I hope you enjoy this quick story.
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March 5th, 2017, 10:38 AM
#12
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Re: Copycat Struggle
This story gets hotter and hotter,
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March 9th, 2017, 12:50 PM
#13
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Re: Copycat Struggle
Good work, my friend! Some things I would like to highlight:
-The mention to the pills (I suggest you use it again in the future): "Weaker and stronger at the same time", a very interesting concept.
-The "mirror moment" and the scene in the copy room.
-It seems like you take your time to think about good titles. The last one is cojonudo (fucking awesome).
-Making the duel public is not usual in your work (I guess they will be fired after the scandal, a good reason to "discuss" again )
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March 9th, 2017, 01:27 PM
#14
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: Copycat Struggle
?Gracias, amigo!
Yeah, the last part (public fight) was a different thing I want to try. And I think this two girls HAVE to fight each other again
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March 9th, 2017, 07:44 PM
#15
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Re: Copycat Struggle
Just read this and was very impressed. I loved how you wrote the two women's thoughts and mindsets.
Particularly, I enjoyed how they were discovering a new side of themselves throughout the story.
On a side note, I would love to read a short story of their rugby match in college. I'm sure there were plenty of satisfying collisions for the girls!
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March 13th, 2017, 12:13 AM
#16
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: Copycat Struggle
Thanks for creating and posting another masterpiece! I especially like how you take the time to stoke the embers of hatred between the two office rivals from a long simmering feud into open warfare. Once again you met and then exceeded the high standard for excellence that your past stories and artwork have set, especially the insults the women hurl at each other before, during, and after the fight. I am hoping for a rematch. Great Work!
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March 13th, 2017, 06:21 AM
#17
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: Copycat Struggle
Thanks everyone for the nice words. I really enjoy writing this one
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March 19th, 2017, 05:58 AM
#18
Hostboard Member
Re: Copycat Struggle
would love more to follow this fantastic story??
Twins / Doppelgangers / Lookalikes is my big fetish both men and women. No rivalry is as intense as two identical/similar rivals.
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