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    Re: Brandi's opus part 19

    Alright my young patient lay down take a deep breath and relax.......now tell me everything!!!
    I'm actually talking to myself, not you Mr/Dr AP!

    Honestly the thought of........GOD.......... slithering up a womans panties, groping her.......grabbing his dick and orchestrating a porno session......WITH A FREAKING NUN NO LESS!!!!!!!!
    Well that's a tall order for anybody to swallow......but hey......I AM A HEATHEN........not as bad as you....Mr/Dr. AP.......OR NOT!
    But yo brotha-man.....this was one of the most provocative stories I ever read......a stone cold head scratcher..........THANK YOU!!!
    For this Dr. Shak's gonna have-ta give Brotha-man a cupple-la free sessions.......on the proverbial couch.......weed......Prozac....green tea......all are welcome! But no cognac.......I don't do well with alcohol!
    But this story has given I....the renowned Dr Shak a wild idea.......and I think you Mr/Dr AP are the author of it!
    WHAT IF THE LADIES FROM VARIOUS STORIES INTRUDED IN EACH OTHERS STORY AND MET EACH OTHER WOMAN TO WOMAN???
    I mean think about it, Angelica Johannson ain't the only PHYNNE as WYNNE lady to intrude, invade and bitch-fuck the bitchy protagonist of other stories. Anubisx can choose a woman, to face JB57s, to face AngelDawns, to face yours, to face..........well you get the drift!!!!!!
    You had this in mind when you brought Angelica Johansson in your stories.......right...........RIGHT???
    Well...Dr. Shak is signing off now..........but you did have that in mind............RIGHT?

    Shak

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    But this story has given I....the renowned Dr Shak a wild idea.......and I think you Mr/Dr AP are the author of it!
    WHAT IF THE LADIES FROM VARIOUS STORIES INTRUDED IN EACH OTHERS STORY AND MET EACH OTHER WOMAN TO WOMAN???
    I mean think about it, Angelica Johannson ain't the only PHYNNE as WYNNE lady to intrude, invade and bitch-fuck the bitchy protagonist of other stories. Anubisx can choose a woman, to face JB57s, to face AngelDawns, to face yours, to face..........well you get the drift!!!!!!
    You had this in mind when you brought Angelica Johansson in your stories.......right...........RIGHT???
    Well...Dr. Shak is signing off now..........but you did have that in mind............RIGHT?

    Shak


    Hi my crazy friend Shak... I really don't recall whose idea it was to 'borrow' characters and insert them into our own stories... but it has been a pleasure to have Brandi be part of "Private Eye".. and I have certainly enjoyed Angel being in "Brandi's Opus". Anna the Marine Chick has included 'Angelica Johansen' in her stories.. which has been wonderful! Of course I would certainly ask for permission before I included anyone's character(s) into my writing, but the idea of Hooking up one of my "Private Eye" characters with one of the "Weather Girls".. or a girl from one of JB's amazing stories is very intriguing. I also must agree with you Shak. Brandi's Opus is, with all due respect to the other talented authors, perhaps the most well written story that I can ever remember reading on this forum. The story is excellent... the characters are very life-like.. and the sex is sizzling! Oh! And one more comment, if I may...Angelica Johansen is certainly not the only "PHYNNE as WYNNE" character in the stories that are posted here... However... some "whynne" is a little 'phynner' than others. (smile)

    A.P. No future plans for Grace? Hmmmmm.... perhaps she might move to Texas and take a position as a teacher at San Francesca University? There is something about Grace that is extremely erotic... and I think I know how to 'unleash' her on some young unsuspecting college students!... Just sayin' ... (wink)

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    Re: Brandi's opus part 19

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    A.P. No future plans for Grace? Hmmmmm.... perhaps she might move to Texas and take a position as a teacher at San Francesca University? There is something about Grace that is extremely erotic... and I think I know how to 'unleash' her on some young unsuspecting college students!... Just sayin' ... (wink)
    Well, I ain't lettin no freakin lesbo nympho nun into my girl's college that's for sure, and shame on you Angel for suggesting anything so....so...wait - that actually sounds kind of erotic ...doh!

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    Well, I ain't lettin no freakin lesbo nympho nun into my girl's college that's for sure, and shame on you Angel for suggesting anything so....so...wait - that actually sounds kind of erotic ...doh!
    RagnarOk ... Yeah, you made me laugh!! I may have to bribe the Honorable Mr. Penman.... perhaps another lap dance will do the trick!! But one way or another.. Grace will be mine!! (evil laugh)

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    RagnarOk ... Yeah, you made me laugh!! I may have to bribe the Honorable Mr. Penman.... perhaps another lap dance will do the trick!! But one way or another.. Grace will be mine!! (evil laugh)
    Oooohhhhh! so you want to start a bidding war now, do you?!? Well, I can offer Grace her pick of the hottest, most sexually frustrated girl college fighters this side of er... the Vatican in Rome. So sit that in your lap and dance on it, woman with evil laugh.

    Ragnar0k

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ragnar0k View Post
    Oooohhhhh! so you want to start a bidding war now, do you?!? Well, I can offer Grace her pick of the hottest, most sexually frustrated girl college fighters this side of er... the Vatican in Rome. So sit that in your lap and dance on it, woman with evil laugh.

    Ragnar0k
    My Dear RagnarOk .... This is not about what can be offered to Grace ..... She is the property of one Mr. A. Penman. Now I am just guessing... that I might have a few certain 'assets' that might possibly be more appealing to such a strong, vigorous, potent man as the very handsome Mr. Penman. .... Just sayin' ... (Evil wicked Laugh)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Angel Dawn View Post
    My Dear RagnarOk .... This is not about what can be offered to Grace ..... She is the property of one Mr. A. Penman. Now I am just guessing... that I might have a few certain 'assets' that might possibly be more appealing to such a strong, vigorous, potent man as the very handsome Mr. Penman. .... Just sayin' ... (Evil wicked Laugh)

    TIME OUT.......TIME THE FREEEEK OWWWWTTTT!!!!!

    I will call the on-line POE-LEEECE to arrest any thief who would dare kidnap, confiscate or unlawfully detain Mr/Dr APs dearly beloved Sis Grace! Oh wait he has no future plans for her sexy usage........oh well steal away! But hurry up before I unleash one a my sistahs on that repressed cute little Unholy Catholic Fire Bitch! Hell even Mr/Dr APs God would want a front seat at that one............no the better idea would be Valencia and Veronica double teaming her at their gym or better yet a CONVENT..................DAMN!!!!!
    OH WHAT DEPRAVELY TANGLED WEB WE WEAVE!!!!

    Dr. Shak

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    Re: Brandi's opus part 19

    Quote Originally Posted by shak7 View Post
    Alright my young patient lay down take a deep breath and relax.......now tell me everything!!!
    I'm actually talking to myself, not you Mr/Dr AP!

    Honestly the thought of........GOD.......... slithering up a womans panties, groping her.......grabbing his dick and orchestrating a porno session......WITH A FREAKING NUN NO LESS!!!!!!!!
    Well that's a tall order for anybody to swallow......but hey......I AM A HEATHEN........not as bad as you....Mr/Dr. AP.......OR NOT!
    But yo brotha-man.....this was one of the most provocative stories I ever read......a stone cold head scratcher..........THANK YOU!!!
    For this Dr. Shak's gonna have-ta give Brotha-man a cupple-la free sessions.......on the proverbial couch.......weed......Prozac....green tea......all are welcome! But no cognac.......I don't do well with alcohol!
    But this story has given I....the renowned Dr Shak a wild idea.......and I think you Mr/Dr AP are the author of it!
    WHAT IF THE LADIES FROM VARIOUS STORIES INTRUDED IN EACH OTHERS STORY AND MET EACH OTHER WOMAN TO WOMAN???
    I mean think about it, Angelica Johannson ain't the only PHYNNE as WYNNE lady to intrude, invade and bitch-fuck the bitchy protagonist of other stories. Anubisx can choose a woman, to face JB57s, to face AngelDawns, to face yours, to face..........well you get the drift!!!!!!
    You had this in mind when you brought Angelica Johansson in your stories.......right...........RIGHT???
    Well...Dr. Shak is signing off now..........but you did have that in mind............RIGHT?

    Shak
    Shak!

    You're crazy, bro! But...hey! I'm laughing my ass off right now. I just might need a little proverbial couch with some weed and a decent Italian red wine and some Eric Dolphy.

    Angelica was kind enough to let me borrow her PHYNNE AS WYNNE self for an early chapter. Things (good things) just kind of took off from there. Suddenly Brandi was in Dallas getting all hot and bothered watching a bunch of hot women having tit fights. And I had the distinct honor of being a judge!!! Fictional life is so strange.

    But seriously, I'm enjoying writing this stuff and I'm glad that you found it so "provocative." As for the other stuff..humm...

    A.P.

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    The longest A. Penman story, and one of his best non-male stories yet.
    Great build up AP, good girl vs. bad girl - super hot.
    Look forward to reading more about Jackie and her newest friends.
    Really like professor Jackie.
    I think we all wish we had a teacher like her, back when we were in school, ha.
    And hope read about where sister Grace, or should I just say Grace.
    Where she goes from here. Hopefully she and Jackie will hit it off again
    down the road
    Thank you friend.
    DC-
    Thanks again for your always encouraging and kind words. As you may have read further down the line, I had no further plans for Grace. But I might have to reconsider as a certain tall Texas blonde and a noted psychologist from L.A. are making unreasonable demands... Jackie's new adventures will take priority, however.
    A.P.

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    Re: Brandi's opus part 19

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    Shak!

    You're crazy, bro! But...hey! I'm laughing my ass off right now. I just might need a little proverbial couch with some weed and a decent Italian red wine and some Eric Dolphy.

    Angelica was kind enough to let me borrow her PHYNNE AS WYNNE self for an early chapter. Things (good things) just kind of took off from there. Suddenly Brandi was in Dallas getting all hot and bothered watching a bunch of hot women having tit fights. And I had the distinct honor of being a judge!!! Fictional life is so strange.

    But seriously, I'm enjoying writing this stuff and I'm glad that you found it so "provocative." As for the other stuff..humm...

    A.P.

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    DC-
    Thanks again for your always encouraging and kind words. As you may have read further down the line, I had no further plans for Grace. But I might have to reconsider as a certain tall Texas blonde and a noted psychologist from L.A. are making unreasonable demands... Jackie's new adventures will take priority, however.
    A.P.


    Ok so let me get this straight

    Jackie takes priority.......RIGHT?
    Well you know the old saying.......one man's priority is another mans........huh.....huh.....wait give me a moment?
    One mans priority is another Blondes..............TOY?.........SEX OBJECT?........PLAYTHING? (AngelDawn help a brotha out)
    Look man........I'm like Ragnar0k.............Vatican City baby.......lift the gowns and bring the heat..........leave the habit on!
    Have you ever unleashed a repressed religious person........................it's like a freakin exorcism!!! (I'm goin to hell for that)
    Pray for me!

    Shak

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    Quote Originally Posted by shak7 View Post
    Ok so let me get this straight

    Jackie takes priority.......RIGHT?
    Well you know the old saying.......one man's priority is another mans........huh.....huh.....wait give me a moment?
    One mans priority is another Blondes..............TOY?.........SEX OBJECT?........PLAYTHING? (AngelDawn help a brotha out)
    Look man........I'm like Ragnar0k.............Vatican City baby.......lift the gowns and bring the heat..........leave the habit on!
    Have you ever unleashed a repressed religious person........................it's like a freakin exorcism!!! (I'm goin to hell for that)
    Pray for me!

    Shak
    I don't know Shak. Many years ago I tried to "unleash" a few Mormon gals in Southern Utah. My success rate was.. how can I say it?...DISMAL...
    AP

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