Originally Posted by
zara03
This was great. I love every character. Especially the lead Nora. The set up is very different and the background of Nora is one of a kind. I don't think i have ever read a story with a similar build up. Just one request. The size of Nora is a little small. Now i know that not everyone likes big size breasts but since it is a titfight series i would love it if Nora was a large D cup or even better a DD cup. She is tall and that size would be perfect for her. As an advice due to constant fights and aerobics it is possible for Nora to grow her breasts to a DD it would not be unnatural. Another thing is that in the fight with Megan it was pretty even at times between the 2 and i absolutely loved it. In other fights it is one having the advantage over the other at all times mostly. Still It is getting interesting with every chapter. The creativity and writing style of the writer is excellent. I can't wait for new chapters.
Job well done.
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