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    Dezerai 5 Part 1

    Chapter One
    KJ and the X-Rated Journals

    “KJ, you know I love you, but I don’t know about this! I mean me and Delesha, all of our erotic stories placed in memoirs like a book or journal!” Dezerai shook her head…. “and you’ll make it in erotica like form?”
    “Look Mama Dee, you and Auntie Delesha already went down the X-rated erotica path when you made that video of your wedding 28 years ago! People are still talking about it and after I saw the re-mastered version myself, this journal should be a piece of cake for you two.”
    “Yeah but, we weren’t trying to be porn stars, we just wanted to turn each other on and make a point in the process.”
    “Well, you definitely made a point and though you didn’t become porn stars, people still remember that wedding. It had a serious domino effect, for both family and friends, 28 years later!” Kenny Jr. paused…. “I just wish I could have been there, I would have loved it.”
    Dezerai looked at the 27-year-old Kenny Jr. and laughed. The older he get’s the more he looks like his father. She sighed, even at 80, she and Delesha were still going strong and in spite of their wild reputations, were highly respected and revered by both family and friends alike.
    “I’ll talk to Dee…. but you know how she is, she won’t be as open to the idea as I am.”
    “That’s why I came to you first, if I ask her, she’ll just say no and end the conversation, but if you ask her……”
    “SHE’LL STILL SAY NO!” Dezerai laughed as she cut him off……. “but I’ll try…… I’ll call you in a couple of days and let you know what she says.”
    Kenny Jr. got up and kissed her goodbye.
    “Use your sexy magic Mama Dee…. you know how persuasive you can be when you want something.”
    Dezerai laughed as she watched him leave. She had doubts about this project of his, but she had to admit, Kenny Jr. has become a brilliant writer, publishing a couple of novels and written incredible articles in various leading publications. If anybody can make an ordinary story extraordinary he can.

    **********************

    Kenneth Rasheed Davenport Jr. sat down with his wife Akusua, business partner and best friend eating lunch at “DWs by the Sea” a seafood restaurant opened by Delesha and Dezerai right after the death of his mother Latoya. DW stands for Davenport/Washington and was opened to preserve the catering legacy of his Great Aunt Delesha. Her catering staff after working for her nearly 30 years were the initial partners in the business and with all of them getting older it became too difficult to run a successful catering business. A restaurant was the obvious next move for them, so they could get better investments and hire additional staffing. They purchased a spot in the Marina just outside of Culver City and with Shalitha and Karmen’s law firm handling all the legal leg work and using Delesha’s incredible recipes, they have run a successful business for the last seven years. Five years ago, Delesha and Dezerai retired from the grind of everyday work, but her staff and their descendants are more than capable of running it. Dezerai handled all the initial marketing and management duties and turned it over to her trainees when they retired together. With Dezerai’s full pension and retirement from the County of Los Angeles and the restaurant and the family’s considerable resources they were very comfortable and it was time to leave the grind to the younger folks. They now live a life fulfilling their bucket lists and relish each and every day they have together as a couple.
    “Whatever time we have left, we make sure it’s side-by-side with each other!” Is the motto they live by.
    Their love and commitment to each other is an erotic journey, from their days of competitive and sexy animosity as 18-year olds, to the wild erotic drama of adulthood, to the smooth blessed transition of senior hood, they are affectionately known to the family as “Momma Dees” and are considered sages and wise-women to all the generations of Davenports, Washingtons, friends and colleagues. Kenny Jr. loved them dearly, particularly his Aunt Delesha who was always like a second mother to him. So, the idea of putting her life and love in this family journal/book he was calling ‘The DW Memoirs’ was exciting. Though erotic this was also about the legacy they would leave for the family, albeit like Momma Dezerai stated……….an X-Rated one………but what the hell…. who’s judging!
    Kenny Jr. or KJ as he is affectionately called by the family is 27-year-old ex-NBA basketball player. Immediately after his father Kenny senior’s death, KJ transferred from the University of Connecticut to UCLA to be closer to his Mother Latoya. But her death just eight months after his father’s funeral was a jolt to him. He married his sweetheart Akusua Nosakhere and made the jump to the NBA without playing a game at UCLA. He lasted just 3 years, tearing his ACL twice in his left knee. It seems ACL tears are common with Davenport athletes. But by his own admission after the death of his parents his mind was no longer on basketball. Also during his first year as a pro, he began drinking heavily and within two years had his first ACL tear. During the rehab on his knee, his drinking went out of control. Akusua his wife moved out with his child and KJ in his own words sank in a dark depression and his drinking spiraled out of control. After completing rehab on his knee, he made an attempt to return to professional basketball, but by then he was a full-blown alcoholic and hid his addiction from his team and especially himself.
    “I was killing a 5th of Tequila a day and could no longer function without it.”
    Being separated from his family, he became caught up in the wildness of NBA life and soon Akusua filed for divorce. By the middle of his third NBA season he tore his ACL again in the same knee and he knew this time coming back would be more difficult.
    “I rehabbed poorly after the first tear and tearing my ACL again was pretty much inevitable.”
    After the second tear, he in his own words “hit his bottom.”
    “I had lost my father and mother just 3 years earlier and my wife and child this last year and now my NBA career. It felt like a part of me died.”
    For the next several months he drank and sunk lower and lower. But everything changed when his best friend Tyrone Ellison was killed in a DUI accident………. Kenny Jr. was the drunk driver! They came home late after a night of drinking at a bar and KJ decided he was sober enough to drive home. Kenny Jr. missed the red light and swerved in the intersection and was T-Boned by an oncoming car. Tyrone was killed instantly and Kenny Jr. was devastated. The Ellison family was very close to the Davenport family in Ladera Heights in Los Angeles. The guilt was overwhelming and Kenny Jr. was sentenced to 8 years for 2nd degree involuntary manslaughter. Shalitha and Karmen were able to get his sentence reduced and he was paroled in 2 years and once home, turned his life completely around. Through all of this, his sister Shalitha Davenport was always in his ear, telling him he was an alcoholic and trying to share her own experiences. Of course, she was only his older sister so what the hell did she know? But after his release KJ leaned on her. He now regularly attends AA with his sister and as of this writing has three years sobriety, remarried Akusua and went back to UCLA and got his degree in Creative Writing and Journalism. In prison, he took up a creative writing class and loved it so much, he decided this is what he wanted to do for the rest of his life. He became an editor and contributing writer for several publications and AA after his release from prison and soon published two novels. It seems strange that this 6’7” professional athlete, with multiple black belts in multiple Kung Fu disciplines, would love writing novels and editing books and magazines. But this is exactly what happened and with his family’s connections and resources he became quite good at it.
    “Sooo what did Mo-mah Dee say?” Akusua asked him, becoming an adept publisher herself.
    “She’s anticipates Auntie Delesha saying no, but I think the idea of the erotic journal intrigues her.” KJ nodded….. “if she’s in, I think Auntie Delesha will be in.”
    “Yes, if there is one thing I’ve come to know about Mama Dezerai, if she want something, nooo one can resist her.”
    “Yeah she can sweet talk blood out of a turnip. I remember growing up, she could talk me into anything…and I mean anything!”
    “Just look at this beautiful restaurant…as soon as I heard she was to be the mar-ket-ter, I knew this place would soc-ceed!
    Kenny Jr. looked around….
    “She has put her special touch on this restaurant, not only as a marketer, but a designer as well.”
    “Sooo we wait un-till two-daze from now to hear from Mo-ma Dezerai?”
    “Yeah, but I’m beginning to agree with your idea; we should make this journal not just about them, but the whole family.”
    “OOOOHHHHH….so you like my idea, that thee whole fami-lee storee be told!”
    Kenny smiled, “every last one of us…. even you and me.”
    “And we will pub-blish this as erotica?”
    “Yes and no, I’m still not sure. Remember originally, I wanted this journal to be for us and us alone. A family archive of our history and how we got to be who we are.”
    “BU-UT?”
    “You know but.”
    “You like my idea to make it a leetle more X-Rated?”
    Kenny Jr. smiled and nodded.
    “So, you finally admit that thee idea of thee ‘DW Memoirs’………is no longer just a story of thee fami-lee, but erotica is more appealing!” Akusua smiled at KJ as he smiled back and nodded agreement. She continued, “and who better to start this then Mo-ma Dees? Their story is sooo intense and wild and shrouded in mystery!” she grinned conspiratorially, “then perhaps we finally uncover the biggest mystery of them all?”
    “JAMAICA!” they said together!

    *****************************

    Two days later Kenny Jr. got the call from Mama Dezerai and Auntie Delesha was a go.
    “I knew if anybody could do it, Mama Dezerai could” he smiled at Akusua.
    “I just wun-der what she do to make Mo-ma Delesha say yes? Maybe she’ll tell us hmm” Akusua mused.
    “And we put it in the journal” Kenny added.
    “So, you tink she use a leetle X-Rated persuasion, to convince Mama Delesha?”
    Kenny Jr. thought about it.
    “Naw, they 80-year-old ladies, those days are probably over by now.”
    Akusua looked at him like he was crazy.
    “You are such a man!”
    “What does that mean?”
    “It means Mo-ma Dees are two powerful Wy-Myn, do not underestimate them…age is only a number…. you can see they still sexy and strong!”
    “You right they are strong; they are still avid weight lifters and still go to the Dojo and work out.” He looked at Akusua, “But sexy…nooooo…..they’re 80-years-old baby!”
    “I pray for you!” Akusua laughed.

    *****************************

    Thursday night Kenny Jr. and Akusua sat with Momma Dees at their dining room table with the recording equipment already set up.
    “I have no idea what we can tell you that that the family doesn’t already know” Delesha brought some coffee and cakes for everyone.
    “Well we will chronicle your meeting in Atlanta, Georgia back in 1984 and what were your initial thoughts when you first met.” Kenny Jr. began.
    “I hated the bitch……. but everybody already knows that.” Delesha had a look of boredom as if this were one big waste of time.
    “Hate is a strong word” Dezerai chimed in……. “let’s just say there was a lot of animosity……but we quickly remedied that didn’t we?”
    Delesha perked up with that.
    “Yeah…. you were a horny little slut, it was like you had a disease." She looked at Akusua, "she was contagious and passed her germs to me.”
    Dezerai looked at Akusua and smiled.
    “It wasn’t germs or a disease I passed to her……….IT WAS FEEEE-VAHH!”
    Delesha started laughing….
    “It did get a little hot…. didn’t it!”
    “A little hot????” Dezerai giggled, “Had we kept going for 10 more seconds we would have both burst into flames!”
    “But we didn’t burst into flames did we, nor did we keep going.” Delesha smirked…… “I got away just in time to save my precious virginity from your villainous clutches.”
    “You got lucky lady, besides I still got all that fire later…………. DIDN’T I?”
    “Or you sure it was you who got my fire or vice-versa?”
    “Ain’t no vice’s or versa’s girly; I was the huntress and you the huntee!”
    “Nooooo, I was more like the spider and you the fly!”
    Kenny and Akusua was enjoying the bantering back and forth, but this was not what they wanted, because as Auntie Delesha said, the family already knew that. He decided to test the waters a little more.
    “Sooo after that first night in the cabin, was it then you fell in love?”
    “Truthfully” Dezerai came in, “we were in love after our first kiss at the track 18 years earlier.”
    “Well, I would say we were in intense intrigue” Delesha cut in.
    “Love”
    “Intrigue”
    “Love”
    “INNN-TREEEGG” little girl.
    “You still tripping, even after 62 years” Dezerai grinned then looked at Kenny Jr. and whispered, “she was in love, but too scared to admit it!”
    Delesha cut in……
    “Noooo, I was intrigued, but you got sprung!” she looked at KJ and Akusua, “I sprung the poor child……. my kiss wuz too much for her!”
    Dezerai broke out laughing….
    “The only springing that took place between us, wuz when we sprung into each other’s arms and kissed the hell outta each other!” Then Dezerai leaned over and whispered, “But truthfully, she wuz repressed, so I had-ta spring my love trap to free her scared little mind. Let her know, it’s OK to feel good.”
    “More like seduce!”
    “Free!”
    “Seduce!”
    “Free Dee…….my kisses set you free and you know it little girl.”
    “Free huh? Later tonight…. we’ll see who’s free!”
    Kenny Jr. looked at them and asked…
    “Later tonight? You two still don’t?”
    They both turned and looked at him like he was crazy…
    “YES?”
    “But you both are…. are….
    “EIGHTY!!!!”
    They spoke out loudly and boldly!
    “Young man are you trying to say, 80-year-old women cannot have good sex?”
    “Nooooo…. nooo……I’m…I’m…. I’m not saying that…. it’s just…. just….”
    “JUST WHAT?”
    “You’re…… you’re……”
    “OLD?” Both Delesha and Dezerai cut in.
    “Yes, that is exactly what he say” Akusua cut in! She was filming the entire thing. “Please forgive him, he only a man…. he know, no better!”
    “OK, OK…. I admit the thought of you two 80-year old women having sex is kinda weird!”
    “IT’S NASTY AND DISGUSTING!” Tanya came in the living room interrupting everything.
    Tanisha followed looking amused.
    “THESE TWO HAVE BEEN GETTING NASTY AND FREAKY SINCE HIGH SCHOOL AND I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU ARE GOING THROUGH WITH THIS SO-CALLED FAMILY JOURNAL PROJECT OF YOURS. THIS AIN’T NOTHING BUT ANOTHER NASTY FREAKY X-RATED SHOW ABOUT THEM AND THEIR WILD SEX LIFE. HELL, I TOLD YOU THAT WEDDING 30 YEARS AGO WAS BAD ENOUGH, NOW YOU WANT DETAILS OF THE FREAKY STUFF THEY DID AFTERWARD!”
    “Forgive her” Tanisha came in and hugged everybody.
    Tanya looked at her…
    “WHAT DO YOU MEAN FORGIVE ME? I AIN’T THE ONE MAKING VIDEO TAPES AND CDs OF ME AND YOU GETTING NASTY, THEY ARE!!!!” Tanya then turned to Kenny Jr. “SPEAKING OF GETTING NASTY…. WHEN YOU GONNA TELL THEM WHY YOU REALLY HERE?”
    Kenny Jr’s eyes got big.
    “We had not yet gotten to that part yet….”
    “Well get to it now!” Tanya looked at Kenny Jr. smiling in a you just got busted sort of way.
    “What is he talking about?” Delesha cut in.
    “KJ’s not interested in just writing a sexy family journal about you two” Tanisha answered her. “They’re interested in writing erotica! A collection of sexy and erotic stories from all of the family. Your story is only one part of a much larger project. All of us have agreed to help, except Tanya of course.”
    “Erotic stories…. please…. this ain’t erotica, this is porno! Why you think he call it the DW Memoirs…. he trying to get all of us to fess up our nasty little secrets. He wants to add a little soft-porn, to his growing collection of freaky little novels…………he ain’t slick! And noooo…. hell, to the nooo will I tell his nosey ass anything.” Tanya was now laughing.
    “But why us?” Dezerai cut in…. “You already know our story.”
    “Not all of it…. Momma Dee” Tanisha looked at her.
    Suddenly Momma Dees froze and looked at each other…. then turned their attention to Kenny Jr. and glared angrily……
    “Why you, sneaky little con artist………all this was an act to find about….”
    “ABOUT JAMAICA!!!!” Tanya interrupted glaring and grinning at the busted Kenny Jr.
    “WELL?” Momma Delesha asked outraged.
    Kenny Jr. sighed in resignation.
    “OK…. OK…. I admit…. We wanted you to tell the whole Jamaica story and give up the CDs!”
    “CUZ WE KNOW YOU MADE SOME……. CUZ THAT’S WHAT YOU FREAKY OLD BROADS DO!” Tanya blurted out pointing and shaking her finger at the grandmothers.
    Tanisha was grinning and looking at the mothers expectedly….
    “We know you have them….and we’ve been over this house from top to bottom for almost 30 years and never found them…. but we know they’re here!”
    The mothers looked at them shaking their heads….
    “Is this for real?” Mother Dezerai asked.
    “Believe it Momma……and not just us…. Karmen and Shalitha took this place apart several times and came up empty” Tanya had her hands on her hips.
    “I KNOW THAT’S RIGHT…………SEV-ER-RAL TIMESS!!!” Shalitha blurted out as she walked in the dining room.
    “We used metal detectors, Geiger counters, radiation sensors, you name it, we brought it all and found nothing………. come on Grannies we know you have em, it’s time to reveal your secret…………WHERE ARE THE JAMAICA TAPES?” Karmen came in with Shalitha.
    Both Dezerai and Delesha looked at each other, then the children and grandchildren and started laughing.
    “They really are serious about this Dee” Dezerai laughed.
    Delesha giggled.
    “Apparently so………. WAIT A MINUTE……. WAIT ONE FREAKING MINUTE!!! Dee are you sensing what I’m sensing?”
    Dezerai nodded yes, “You no good…. collaborating slick undercover con artists……you’re in this together…. ALL OF YOU!!! In fact, you four were waiting in the living room seeing if KJ and his sneaky wife could break us, make us reveal the CD whereabouts!” Dezerai was looking at them outraged.
    “Come to think of it Dee, I never heard the front door open…they probably all came in the house together…. ADMIT IT YOU LYING, TWO TIMING SCHEMERS!” Delesha was incensed.
    “What else do you expect Momma Deeeeees, we been asking you about what happened in Jamaica for years now and you never tell………NEVAH TELL!!!!” Karmen glared back at them with icy eyes.
    Shalitha pretended to cry……
    “And we their grandbabies K, and they do us like this!”
    “The shame of it!” Karmen pretending to cry with her.
    They both looked at the grandmothers, pretending to be outraged.
    “HOW COULD YOU?”
    Delesha and Dezerai were laughing now!
    So, what do you think Dee, should give it to em” Delesha asked?
    “HELL NOOOO!” they both blurted out at the same time and roared with laughter!
    “You know what, don’t make us go Watergate on you, after all we are attorneys!” Karmen threatened.
    “We will have you old ladies locked up on trumped up charges if you don’t give up the secret tapes right now” Shalitha got bold!
    Momma Dees looked at them and held out their arms as if to be handcuffed….
    “Do your worst little girls…. call the cops…. cuff us……chain us……lock us up…. say we’re drug dealers…. money launderers………old lady gang bangers……help yourself!” Dezerai called their bluff as she and Delesha laughed, loving this game.
    Karmen and Shalitha stared evilly at them, then suddenly broke down crawling to them on their knees.
    “PLEEEEEEEZZZZZ Grandmother………. PLEEEEEEEZZZZ……. we’ll wash all your dishes for a month……. all your clothes………we’ll give you mani’s and pedi’s and facials…. hell, we’ll even chauffer you wherever you want to go…. for an entire month………just tell us where the CDs are???”
    Tanya and Tanisha just shook their head….
    “Ya’ll are pitiful you know that! I can’t believe we raised such pitiful children” Tanya scolded them.
    Karmen and Shalitha looked back at her…
    “Please…begging the grandmothers has worked for us all our lives. Every time ya’ll said no, all we had to do was go to them crying and sweet talking and they always caved in…. ALWAYS!”
    They then looked back at Momma Dees.
    “PLEEEEEZZZZZ………we promise to love you forever!”
    Dezerai and Delesha were laughing harder now………this game is delightful……except for the part where the grandchildren used them to get their way!
    “Hey Dee, what if we make it a game……we give them two days to figure out where we hid the CDs. We were thinking about going to Vegas this weekend anyway…. the house will be theirs…. let em have at it. If they find it, we'll pay for a two-week vacation to the place of their choice, but if we win, they pay for our vacation and service us!” they looked at the everybody.
    “SO, WHAT DO YOU SAY…. WE PROMISE NOT TO REMOVE THE CDs FROM THE HOUSE, YOU HAVE TWO DAYS TO FIND THEM, IF YOU WIN, WE PAY FOR YOUR VACATIONS ALL OF YOU, BUT IF WE WIN YOU PAY FOR OURS AND SERVICE US, FOR A MONTH! DO WE HAVE A BET?” Dezerai called them out.
    The children and the grandchildren paused too scared to answer.
    “What’s the matter children…. these old ladies too smart for you?” Delesha dug in the knife.
    “YOU’RE ON OLD LADIES!” Karmen blurted out feeling bold…. she then looked at Shalitha, and was suddenly full of doubt and uncertainty….
    “We can do this…. right?”
    “Uhhhhh…. y-yessss…. we can do this……. YOU’RE ON OLD LADIES!” Shalitha boldly and foolishly blurted out.
    “Ya’ll out you’re damn mind” Tanya cut in…. “you can’t win against these two, they both professional con-artist! They wouldn’t make this bet unless they knew we couldn’t find those CDs, hell no I ain’t agreeing to nothing…. but I’ma still look and if I find em…I’m destroying em!”
    “So, what are you saying Tanya, you agree to help look, but too scared to bet?” Delesha looked at her challenging her.
    “Noo…. noo…. I said I ain’t agreeing to take the bet…. don’t do that to me Momma Dee…. you ain’t slick…. I said noooo betting!!!” Tanya then looked at her mother Dezerai, who looked back at her smiling. Tanya then looked at Tanisha, who smiled and said…. “I’m in…. this should be fun!”
    Tanya then looked at Kenny Jr. and Akusua who were also smiling….as they were recording all of this…. loving every drama filled, novel making minute of it.
    “We’re in!”
    “You know what…. all a ya’ll are crazy!” …. “I WILL HELP, BUT NO BETTING!!!! and I’m warning ya’ll if I find em, I’m destroying em! Bet or no bet, novel or no damn novel…….IS THAT CLEAR?”
    “Tanya dear” Delesha spoke sweetly.
    Tanya knew that voice and glared back at her……. “WHAT?” she tried keeping a straight face, but cracked and started giggling knowing Mama Delesha was now playing her.
    “No bet….no help!” she laid the ground rules.
    Tanya again glared at her.
    “You know what, when I first met you, I thought you was a nice down to earth lady, who would help my slick crazy ass mother calm down…. but it’s been the exact opposite…. you as slick as she is.”
    Delesha looked at her waiting for an answer.
    Tanisha whispered to Tanya “you know you can’t win this Tee.”
    Tanya ignored her as she and Delesha were having a stare-down……. but alas poor Tanya was out-gunned as she finally flinched.
    “You evil Ms. Delesha.”
    “So, you’re in?” Delesha grinned at Tanya.
    “Maybe” Tanya scowled back.
    Delesha waited.
    “Alright dammit…. I’ma regret this.”
    Delesha smiled sweetly and looked at Dezerai.
    “See how reasonable she can be.”
    Dezerai nodded, then she and Delesha looked at Tanya and grinned. Tanya looked back at them as if they were two evil entities able to warp the minds of mere mortals. She shook her head then glanced at Tanisha.
    “You know they playing us Tee, all of us!”
    “Yep” Tanisha had to agree as she also stared at the mothers.
    Both Grandmothers smiled a nice sweet grandmotherly smile and nodded….
    “This was fun children, so we’re all in agreement?”
    No one answered. Everyone unsure what to say, as this rabbit hole was tunneling deeper and deeper.
    “Make sure you clean up when you finish…. don’t eat up all the food and feed the dogs” Delesha ordered.
    “And don’t break anything, if you break it, you fix it….IS THAT CLEAR?” Dezerai added.
    “That depends on whether I find them CDs or not” Tanya came in. “If I find em, all kinda shit liable to get broke!”
    “We promise to clean up behind ourselves and fix anything we break.” Karmen came in. “But like Mom said, I’m beginning to think you’re playing us.”
    Satisfied both Delesha and Dezerai looked at everybody and again smiled that sweet grandmotherly smile.
    Dezerai then chimed in….
    “Is there anything else?
    No one answered, all of them staring at the grandmothers with a growing sense of mistrust!
    Dezerai grinned again…. “GOOD!”
    She looked at Delesha and both of them nodded and looked at the family and smiled. Both grandmothers then spoke clearly and distinctly….

    LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!!!”

    To be continued
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    Great News. They are back!

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    Quote Originally Posted by eprog35 View Post
    Great News. They are back!
    Hey eprog35

    The Dezerai series is now over. School begins again in August(graduate) so my sexfight story writing days are probably over. What better way than to have the two who started it for me going at it....Dezerai vs Delesha.

    Be well and thanks
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    Understood. Definitely one of the best series ever put together. Thank You!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by shak7 View Post
    Hey eprog35

    The Dezerai series is now over. School begins again in August(graduate) so my sexfight story writing days are probably over. What better way than to have the two who started it for me going at it....Dezerai vs Delesha.

    Be well and thanks
    Shak

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    Quote Originally Posted by eprog35 View Post
    Understood. Definitely one of the best series ever put together. Thank You!!!
    Thank you eprog35 for your kind words.

    Be well

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    I see that things got cleared up with the stories. So, I got to read this today and MY WORD! Shak! What a great, warm, sexy and often side splitting funny "family" tale this is!!! Both Momma D's are amazing!

    With my age related limited attention span, it was a bit difficult to keep up with all the subtleties of each character, but SO WORTH the effort! I HAVE TO get more into this wonderful tale. My thanks to you, brother! You made my day!

    A. Penman

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    Quote Originally Posted by apenman View Post
    I see that things got cleared up with the stories. So, I got to read this today and MY WORD! Shak! What a great, warm, sexy and often side splitting funny "family" tale this is!!! Both Momma D's are amazing!

    With my age related limited attention span, it was a bit difficult to keep up with all the subtleties of each character, but SO WORTH the effort! I HAVE TO get more into this wonderful tale. My thanks to you, brother! You made my day!

    A. Penman

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    What's up Man
    Thank you for your encouraging words. I don't get a lot of people reading my stuff, so when I hear this it stirs my creative juices to keep exploring this type of writing. I wanted D5 to be different and funny and wild; with each chapter wilder than the previous one. If you're just starting out, chapter 5 is probably the craziest and chapter 6 a very different and unusual kind of sexfight. Also the subtleties of the characters is the key, but honestly the ideas for this came from you. When I saw you integrate writers from this board in your stories, it made me look at writing from a broader perspective. I can't wait to see what the Great One, Lady Doctor Jackie T has planned next. But I must beg you, find it within your heart to keep the Nun involved, dirty old degenerates like me love Nuns!!!
    Lastly my father left me his electric piano when he died several years ago. I just pulled it out listened to a little Herbie Mann. I think I'll start there!

    Shak
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    Hot and - mostly - very promising !!!

    Oh i like so much your stories my old friend...

    As age has started to turn me sensitive to a lot, every time i read your stories, my mind also "travels" to those days at Sexfigting and Kissing forum...

    You are linked with a beloved part of my history !!

    Be well !!

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    Re: Dezerai 5 Part 1

    Quote Originally Posted by Giannis-CB View Post
    Hot and - mostly - very promising !!!

    Oh i like so much your stories my old friend...

    As age has started to turn me sensitive to a lot, every time i read your stories, my mind also "travels" to those days at Sexfigting and Kissing forum...

    You are linked with a beloved part of my history !!

    Be well !!

    Ya know Giannis
    I think the old sexfight board was like a family, all of us were in this "new" genre and were writing and blogging and sharing info back and forth. It was a lot of fun and I have to admit, it broadened my sexual perspective. I'm grateful for those days and I especially appreciate the way you contributed to that site. But it was twenty years ago my friend, we were 30 and 40 year olds.....things have changed.........WE OLD!!!

    Always your Brother
    Shak
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