Originally Posted by
Ginny38
I'll offer a couple of ideas trying to answer your question/concern.
First, as a writer, I wouldn't suggest you kill of your "heroine" (it really ruins the possibility of a sequel, although a prequel is still possible, I guess). But you could kill her "victim/opponent/competition" I guess, if you planned to continue with her character. If you don't plan more stories with her, then forget #1.
Second, I'm (personally) opposed to killing off any even 'halfway decent' character in any story. We already have too many stories with weak, or downright awful characters... so the loss of any ONE character makes the world a sadder place.
Third - getting serious now, unless you like/want to write "snuff" stories, I don't see where it's necessary. You're posting this on a "sexfight" board and your subject is a sexfight, so unless you plan to write about one/both of them trying to "fatally orgasm" the other then it's not really that germane. (If that's what you had in mind, then for God's sake.... write THAT! I can imagine how if it's well done, it has potential be an AWESOME and memorable story!
Fourth, you said and I quote: "To break this stalemate, both women decide on a sexfight..." which implies that neither really is intent on doing fatal injury to the other. If they were, at least one of them would have argued for "less than lethal" means of resolving their dilemma.
Of course, when you're writing the story, you would probably cover several of these issues anyway, with their back stories, assignment - if any - personal histories, etc. So if you have those in mind, don't pay any attention to me.
HERE'S AN IDEA THAT OCCURRED TO ME about using "explosive strapons" (perhaps with timers set to blow in x minutes) turn it into a whoever climaxes first is blown up; or whoever holds out longest is blown up contest. Or have someone else (a jealous rival, the villain, a third country?) has set the timers and laid down the rules - but neither knows if she should allow herself to orgasm, or to resist as long as possible. The mental strain would be incredible on both women!
Now you've got me thinking of James Bond villainesses who'd use a strapon to seduce a Bond Girl, have sex with her and then a bunch of knives or razor blades shoot out of the strapon and.... UGH! (see what you've made me do!)
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