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TSP139
Ugh, just wrote out a long effortpost effusively praising this, then it got eaten by the site (apparently I got logged out automatically for some reason so it rejected the post). The gist was, your stories are awesome, you are awesome, thanks a million for surprising us with not just a new BFS but also a new J&E in quick succession! This was a superb, classic Jen and Ellen throw-down, with some very hot new features (the 'kissing duel', the risque trash talk, the post-match photography) that show how the characters are continuing to develop their relationship and explore their dominant/submissive sides. I always particularly enjoy the way you have characters act out their newly-established dominance and submission after the match ends, and this was one of the best ever on that front. It was also great to see new chapters being set up; I've sometimes worried that you'd gotten tired of these stories and might just stop updating them at some point (no disrespect, I realize how much work you must put into these given how long and detailed they are) so it's encouraging to see new plot threads being foreshadowed. Out of curiosity, do you have complete arcs and conclusions planned for this and BFS, or do you just take them one section at a time?
Anyway, thanks again and keep up the amazing work in 2018!
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