I've recently started a profile on a freelance site, where an academic provider got pissed over how many people offer to do homework assignments for others, even though I've added to myself privately, regardless how much she's pissed off, some tutors earn 200k a year for preparing rich kids so they get into Ivy League schools. In other terms, I'm very pleased with your setup (and took the redhead's character as a person in transition from a wallflower into a potential succubus) and support stories which have an interesting buildup.
Yet when I went to school, around the dawn of the internet, we really needed library trips as most of the information wasn't available online, but that's not the case today. This is me strictly saying only that if this had been my idea, I'd have added in something about an essay on the physical strain of cheerleading based on studies only accessible through a paywall. You have already established that the blonde is not in a sorority, so it would stand to reason she has to rely on the guy. Frankly the internet has also helped us in killing stereotypes, like the greasy nerd who helps the pretty girl in the hopes of "getting some". Thanks to Gates and co. they're influential now (but as inept with women as jocks are), whereas playing sports is only viable through a short term, in other words it's not impossible to write them as boyfriend and girlfriend.
I'm looking forward to what you will do with the story in the next installment, and until then I will wear my tinfoil hat because it seems you can steel my type with a red hair and green eyes Jokes aside, the biggest irony which will befall the Anglosphere is that mutations like the natural blond hair, light eyes, red hair and light eyes were adaptations to changes in climate, but our current contribution to our climate is that endangers gingers literally, bearing the possibility of seeing none in a century.
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