Off to another great start! The setup for this story looks very good - you have a knack for very quickly creating and establishing scenarios that set the level and reasons for antagonism between your female protagonists. You also have a great way of setting up the tease. The next part is a flashback, further dragging out the sexfight you are building up to and tantalizing your readers even more. I hope that the next part of this story is up relatively soon.
As an aside, I'm sure I speak for many people when I say that I am waiting with bated breath for the next chapter in your "A Quiet Affair" story. The battle between Amber and Maggie is fantastic and, I hope, just getting started! There is so much the women have not yet done to each other and so many other ways to carry their rivalry to the next level!
JB57
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