Sory rewriting
Last edited by Cybermouse; September 10th, 2018 at 09:01 PM.
Hello, and welcome.
To start things off, your fanfiction actually partially fills a void left by stories not being created about this lore. That being said, while I'm thanking you for the offer, I'll pass on trying it, my brother played it and a lot of MOBA players have a short fuse. Wonderful material for catfights, not so much for teamwork.
As for the language, it's actually very close to Vernacular American English, so if you hadn't brought it up, I'd just thought the author is using everyday text.
The home of my multi-part work: [URL]https://www.patreon.com/powelltothepeople[/URL]
The place where I can be commissioned: [URL]https://www.fiverr.com/cflover40[/URL]
What I use to "feed my birds": [URL="http://"https://twitter.com/powelltothepeo1/"]https://twitter.com/powelltothepeo1/[/URL]
Finally, the one where I'll post my e-books: Lulu, once I post the complete first episode of my story
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