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February 28th, 2019, 05:08 PM
#1
Senior Hostboard Member
One Style to Another = Betrayed/Disappointed?
Let's say that you're reading a story that is one type of fight (IE catfight, sexfight, titfight), and then somewhere in the tale it organically switches to another style, how does it make you feel? Betrayed? Annoyed? Indifferent? Excited?
For this, I am asking that you assume the transition is well done and feels natural.
Keep in mind, I might use your responses not only to guide my future stories but also on my blog, so if you'd like to remain anonymous or not be quoted at all, just let me know!
Last edited by Rivals_Rapture; February 28th, 2019 at 05:15 PM.
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February 28th, 2019, 10:09 PM
#2
WriteThisWay
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Re: One Style to Another = Betrayed/Disappointed?
If it's the original author and they're able to make it seem natural, then it's fine.
The problem is when people rewrite/continue something that isn't there's and completely change the tone/tenor of the story because they can't write anything other than their own style and preferences.
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March 1st, 2019, 04:17 AM
#3
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: One Style to Another = Betrayed/Disappointed?
Depends. If the story flows and moves from one genre to another "logically", everything will be fine. Obviously, depending on one's taste, this can be more or less liked. For example, if someone prefers stories without sex and the protagonists end up having a sexfight, that person will find the story less interesting, but still, if all is well written, no one should feel betrayed. However, I believe that the story must always be giving clues to where it is going, so that the internal credibility of the story is sustained, and so that the reader is not negatively surprised.
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March 3rd, 2019, 08:22 PM
#4
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: One Style to Another = Betrayed/Disappointed?
Honestly,
I like when things escalate between all types.. maybe it was a little titfight that neither was winning and their emotions got to them and they started catfighting. Mixing between them all within reason is nice!
If you watch violent love by California Wildcats, they start with a titfight, that gets too rough before having a small catfight/hairpull fight before remembering they were supposed to be sexfighting as one says ?it doesn?t work that way.. it?s a sexfight remember?!?? Before slamming her pussy into the others.
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March 4th, 2019, 04:53 PM
#5
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: One Style to Another = Betrayed/Disappointed?
It CAN work...if the writer does it well. I think a good example, in my OPINION, would be the story Homewrecker by Catharsis. It flowed well from a catfight to a titfight back to a catfight then finally a sexfight. The main problem, speaking as mainly a titfight fan, is that a lot of the time it feels like the titfight portion is just something to lead to the inevitable sexfight.
Like the writer isn't really putting much effort into it since it's not going to last beyond more than a paragraph or two. At least that's my opinion.
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