Fantastic story and great character development! You have made me even more excited for the next Maggie-Amber story, especially now that you have re-established their mutual hate/animosity, with a heavy dose of much more complicated feelings. At the least, there is a lot of room here for lots of great, hate-filled competitive sex!
The end was a bit of a tease! I kept hoping Amber and Maggie would stop yelling at each other and get right into some violent, vengeful sex right there! You ended on a real cliffhanger. I also can't believe that Maggie had the self-control to keep herself from being sexually satisfied all day, especially after Bianca had worked her into such a lather. In fact, to me, she carried it even a bit too far - having Bianca "service" her after it was clear that Maggie won would have been a good way out of that predicament. But maybe she just didn't have the time.
So, you've laid the groundwork for a whole series of stories centered around the women at the library. Great! And, as I recall, Teagan from "The Perfect ingredient" also had a book to return to Maggie and that story also had a visit from some of the women from your "Sorority" story. You're laying the foundations of your own universe here!
Yes, it would be fantastic if you could finish "The Perfect Ingredient" - it's one of your best stories. But that's just a suggestion. I know that every writer needs to focus on what he/she finds most interesting.
Looking forward to a lot more of Maggie and Amber. Will they find some way to overcome this obstacle in their relationship? Will they be able to resist attacking each other and seeking each other out? Can't wait to find out!
JB57
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