New Story- Long Weekend at the Spa- by JB57

**Johannesdk** · July 24th, 2019, 06:07 AM

Dear JB

finally I've had the time to read thru your entire exciting new story. I'm amazed how you've brought the descriptions of the intimate details to new, almost poetic, levels.

You use so many words to tell, exactly what's going on as the two women fight for sexual supremacy, that the images are brought so clear into my brain, that my blood pressure rose to an almost dangerously level.

It's not easy to describe so juicy details in a fluent language, you are are true master in that art.

Thank you so much
Johannes

**JB57** · July 24th, 2019, 06:24 AM

Originally Posted by Johannesdk

Dear JB

finally I've had the time to read thru your entire exciting new story. I'm amazed how you've brought the descriptions of the intimate details to new, almost poetic, levels.

You use so many words to tell, exactly what's going on as the two women fight for sexual supremacy, that the images are brought so clear into my brain, that my blood pressure rose to an almost dangerously level.

It's not easy to describe so juicy details in a fluent language, you are are true master in that art.

Thank you so much
Johannes

Johannes - thanks so much! I think some other people do this at least as well as I do. I was re-reading some of Angeldawn's stories the other day and really enjoying the movie-like detail of her sex scenes. As I've described before, I let my stories play out in my mind's eye then try to describe what I am seeing in as much detail as I can (hopefully without being too repetitive) in an effort to pull the reader into the scene. It's nice to hear from you that this is a successful technique!

As I've said before, however, the "less is more" school of writing also has its merits. Some of the best, most erotic stories on the board say very little but just enough to paint a sketch that captures the reader's imagination completely. That is not a technique that can work for me, however, as I require the extra detail to keep me going!

Thanks again,

JB

**chuangchuanglin** · July 24th, 2019, 11:16 PM

thank you so much !i like your story very much , why not your add some stockings and nylongs element into your story ,that will be perfect , thanks again

**Johannesdk** · July 25th, 2019, 08:37 AM

While thinking about suggestions: maybe the resort would have a sexy woman at the reception, who due to other guests complaining about noise from Pat's room, knocks at the door and, because Pat thinks it's Marsha, opens the door standing nude and with dried cum and red marks all over her body, she opens, and the receptionist is turned on by the sight ... and then, yes! you all guessed it! - ending up nude on top of Pat on the bed.

JB, I know you sometimes have more than two women in your stories (thinking of New Girl).

Anyhow, it's just my fantasies playing. As you know from my story with the tugboat captain, I do find it interesting with more than two, not on the same time though.

Whatever, your story is amazing!

Johannes

**JB57** · August 10th, 2019, 06:09 PM

Part V of "Long Weekend at the Spa" is now up. The rest of the story is done. I will post it over the next few days.

Enjoy reading!

JB57

**Johannesdk** · August 12th, 2019, 07:06 AM

It's unbelievable how this fuckfest goes on and on. I'm amazed over your ability to pour out endless words describing such sexual warfare.

It's a great pleasure to read!

Johannes

**JB57** · August 12th, 2019, 10:40 AM

Part VI is now up! One more part to go.

JB57

**Johannesdk** · August 13th, 2019, 11:31 AM

Just read part VI - wonderful - and it ends with "TO BE CONCLUDED" - Oh my god! I thought the sexfight in the Limo, was the conclusion. I'm amazed over your fantasy and looking very much forward how you'll manage to conlude something thats's more or less unconcludable.

My blood pressure rose, when I met this phrase: “It was wonderful to have you stay with us,” the gorgeous blonde receptionist told Pat as she checked out.

Or, may be you just teased me (if you read my suggestion of a sexy receptionist getting involved), or maybe it was just a coincidence.

Thanks again!
Johannes