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    Eurasia -An epic sorcery & sword adventure saga -Chapter1

    Note: -All characters in the story are above the age of 18.

    This is an epic sorcery and sword adventure saga set in the 5th century set in the land of Eurasia an amalgamation of 18 continents

    The themes here are sorcery, intrigue, spy craft, heterosexual & lesbian sex, epic lesbian and heterosexual sexfights. This part of the saga takes place in the region of Eurasia which covers the kingdoms of Norwegia, Germania, Alexsia, Indica, Nippon, Zhang, Hangul, Northumbria.

    Here is a list of preliminary characters with background information.
    There are many characters which will appear and the relevant background information will be given in the story and added here as well.
    Please do feel free to comment and share feedback

    Character Background -

    Freya Esperanza Trudr is the daughter of an Norwegian diplomat warrior and mage and a Spanish( from the Spanish virgin islands) sorceress, scholar, economist and keeper of the peace. Both her parents were scholars apart from being skilled in intermediate martial arts. Freya is a kind, loyal learned skilled practitioner adept in conventional, battle magic, sexual magic and intermediate martial arts.

    She is an healer, a skilled political strategist with knowledge of economics who has a HUGE sex drive. She is very busty and an adept sexfighter with sustained sexual stamina and imaginative sexual skills skilled in the art of long drawn sensual titfighting, tribfighting. Freya is in a deep loving relationship with the trainee diplomat Alexander Larsen who is currently heading the intelligence spy network of the kingdom of Norwegia.

    Freya has defeated and fought many busty women and also men in sexfights. Freya is locked in battle with a mysterious covert organization of men and women who seek to establish dominance over the world. She has also received mysterious sexfight challenges from women and men who she suspects to be from this organization

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    Maneka Gupta is a Indian trader from the prosperous Gupta dynasty. Who is an diplomatic assignment to Norwegia to enhance economic and military ties. Maneka is schooled in the art of statecraft, economics and sexual skill and sexfighting in her native country. Maneka is a medium which means that she has the ability to be like a link between sorcerers through which a combined amplified magical attack can be carried out against a mighty adversary.

    She also absorbs the powers of a mage or a sorceress she has defeated in a sexfight for a week. She is empathetic but fierce when it comes to the protection of citizens of her Norwegia and her home country. She is a very busty, competitive sexfighter and loves to sexually dominate other busty women and male sexfighters in very competitive aggressive sexfights. She has fought Freya to a draw in a competitive sexfight /tribfight and is Alexander?s good friend.

    She shares a warm, friendly but sexually competitive relationship with Freya. Maneka has defeated multiple busty women and also men in sexfights. She was defeated and dominated during a sexfight with a mysterious busty woman trader in a one-night battle during a stopover in a Norwegian city and continues to seek her out to exact her revenge. She is working with Freya to track and stop a mysterious covert organization who seek to establish dominance over the world and fantasizes about sexually dominating them. Maneka is currently unattached and is however looking to enter into a polymarous open sensual relationship.
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    Rebecca Lamberton is a mid-tier member of a secret covert organization which aims to conquer and dominate the world step by step. She has a mixed heritage of a British sea captain and trader and an Alexsian sorceress and wine merchant. Rebecca has had a dominant power play streak in her and intends to conquer the nine kingdoms in Eurasia and eventually the world beyond. She has trained her sorcery skills and dabbled in dark magic and battle magic tutored by her mother who is unsatisfied with her place in the world and is mentoring Rebecca alike.

    Rebecca has an insatiable sexual appetite capable of wearing out the best of sexually skilled men and women and met Romi and Volkan during a threesome during a celebration of Alexsia?s annual festivities.
    Rebecca is also a dominant sexfighter and her power urges became stronger after she entered into a polygamous relationship with Volkan and Romi. Rebecca however has a constant love hate relationship with Romi as she sees Romi as a strong rival in her global ambitions.

    Rebecca has lost to Romi twice in a marathon sexfight which angers her and she is constantly looking to defeat her. She has an even sexfight record with Volkan and two males in the covert group.
    Rebecca is also a skin changer and a skilled assassin and covert operative. Rebecca has heard of Ariella?s sexfight prowess and intends to start her harem with Ariella and her love Casper Hansen as her sexual slaves.
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    Archana Maurya ?A mysterious Indian origin busty sexual gorgeous woman who is part of the gypsy like migrating clan which acts as cross country trading clan. Archana's background remains mysterious and she has only revealed that she was in a convoy of a heavily protected group of shadowy smugglers and a couple of sorcerers of the purple order when mysterious forces attacked and overwhelmed her convoy in the night while the travelers were resting.

    Archana only escaped because she was involved in a lengthy sexfight with a woman who was angling for her man a smuggler. Arcana is a long haired very busty dusky beauty who is known for her weaving skills apart from being a skilled archer. She loves battling men and women and besting them in lengthy sexual contests. She is an accomplished tribber and a specialist in tribfighting. She is in a polymarous relationship with Dee and Cesar members of the clan.
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    The Gifted- The gifted are men & women who possess special abilities. The gifted possess one unique ability each. Apart from being spread across various professions the gifted are also recruited as spies, special teams of soldiers to carry out cover operations and the other spectrum of the gifted are thieves, smugglers, mercenaries and part of the cross country covert organization determined to conquer the world.
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    The feared Six are a cabal of powerful magicians & despots (3 men and 3 women) who intend to conquer the 18 large continents in the known world and had managed to subjugate 8 of these to their rule. They entered into a reluctant alliance to subjugate the known world. They intend to harness their power together to open a dimension into another parallel world and embark on multi world domination. They were defeated by an alliance of mages, sorceresses, gifted and a cabal of spirits and genies, supported by warriors and sealed magically in six secret locations across the world.

    The memories of the alliance were wiped to prevent any organization from attempting to free the six. The six are practitioners of dark magic, sexual magic and thrive in complete physical, mental and sexual domination. They are also known in researching dark magic and using alchemy and dark magic and conventional magic to create powerful multi ability beings called the Dominica. The surviving Dominica are believed to be in disarray and in hiding.

    The feared six are experienced sexfighters who feed into the sexual energy of their defeated opponents however the rules of sexual combat prohibit the use of magic to gain an advantage.
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    Alexander Larsen is a Norwegian diplomat who is being groomed for a senior advisory role to the king and is currently heading the intelligence network of the Norwegian kingdom in a temporary assignment. He is an intelligent, empathetic man who deeply cares for Freya Esperanza a sorceress, scholar, warrior and economist.

    He is a mutual caring relationship with Freya. He has a strong sense of fairness and is a skilled strategist he is a dual gifted which is rare. He is a spirit walker who can project his consciousness through a certain distance. He is vulnerable towards magical barriers and has to link with a sorcerer with the same power to pass through magical barriers. He also has an ten rimes enhanced strength of a warrior an ability which he can call upon during specific moments however these moments sap his energy for a brief period during which he is vulnerable.

    He is a skilled lover capable of handling the insatiable Freya and enjoys her sexfights with women and men in marathon contests. He has fought in underground sexfights against women and possesses a 6-2 record. He and Freya often indulge in MFF threesomes with various partners and they are exploring the chances of a polymarous relationship.
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    Caspar Hansen is an upcoming learned, intelligent merchant who deals in the trade of goods across the 9 kingdoms. He is a skilled sea captain and has business interests beyond his borders. He is a pragmatist and a bit of a visionary who looks out for maintaining the peace in the mix of the various races, clans, wizards, gifted, villains, and spies.

    Caspar believes rightfully believes peace is good of business and prosperity of the people and has a semi intelligence network of his own through smugglers, tinkers, artists, travelling trading clans and mercenaries which is independent of the official spy network of Norwegia. He is a intense loving sexually voracious relationship with Ariella who is a rich, successful handicrafts, wines and farming businesswoman. Ariella has been schooled in trade and commerce and is a representative of the merchant & worker folk while assisting Alexander Larsen in running the intelligence network of Norwegia.

    Caspar and Ariella are unaware of their spy background yet even though they work for the same side. He enjoys the intense sexfights Ariella participates in and often provokes with women leading to an often-hot sex between them in the aftermath. He often serves as male sexfighting sparring opponent to Ariella as part of her training for matches with men.
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    Ariella Cruz Andersen is a rich, successful handicrafts, wines and farming businesswoman of Norwegian and South American heritage ( her father was a Spanish trader who traveled and settled in Norwegia. Ariella has been schooled in trade and commerce and is a representative of the merchant & worker folk while assisting Alexander Larsen in running the intelligence network of Norwegia and has a lot of male and female friends in the kingdom and beyond due to her trading network. Ariella is in an intimate loving relationship with an upcoming merchant called Caspar Hansen. She is a fair employer and recognizes that peace leads to prosperity. Ariella Is a clairvoyant and an empath who can link up with a person facing a psychic attack and assist him or her in confronting her fears and fighting back.

    Ariella is a very busty (among the bustier women) sexual alpha who thrives in proving her sexual dominance of female and male sexfighters in the kingdom. She has trained in the art of sexual expertise and is the current sexfight champion of the city circuit.

    Ariella gets on well with both Freya and Maneka and is however aware that both of them are training independently to dethrone her as the sexfighting champion. Ariella has two different sides to her one being the warm friendly one and the other being deeply sexually competitive and desire to dominate her opponent?s side but is able to keep things separate and thus retain her friendships with Freya and Maneka.

    She is smart and fair and a patriot and has a deep bond with nature and animals. She has a pet wolf who she adores.
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    Victor Berger is a learned Germanic businessman who runs trading posts and outfits with his wife amber at the border while owning establishments in the city .Victor is a mind walker who can probe a person?s thoughts and secrets after that person is drugged through a psychic invasion which makes him an valuable asset for the spy and police network of Germania.

    Victor however seeks for a magical mentor who can teach him to battle and plow through the strong magical barriers that sorceresses and wizards develop mentally to prevent such a invasion. Victor Berger is in a loving open relationship with Amber. Victor understands her sexfight needs and gets off on it as a watcher. Amber von is a Germanic diplomat, warrior and trader. She is the daughter of a aristocrat and adviser to the king and queen of Germania and her mother is a learned economic scholar and sorceress.
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    Amber Von is a Germanic diplomat, warrior and trader. She is the daughter of a aristocrat and advisor to the king and queen of Germania and her mother is a learned economic scholar and magician and a high ranking member of Germania?s spy network. Amber has been schooled In the disciplines of governance, intelligence gathering and trading. She is training in alchemy and battle magic and is also a proficient warrior who is trained in Germania?s martial arts.

    She is a busty sexual being with a huge sexual appetite and is the current sexfight champion of the local sexfighting league. She thrives on sexual battles with men and women and is a sexual artist when t comes to tribfights with women. She is a empathetic woman who cares for people and wouldn?t hesitate to go on quests to combat dark forces magical and otherwise. As of now the existence of a covert network which intends to colonize the world is unknown to her.

    She has heard whispers of Romi?s sexual dominance as a sexfighter and a group of other male and female sexfighters expertise a across countries and intends to conquer them all sexually. Amber is in a loving relationship with victor Berger who understands her sexfight needs and gets off on it as a watcher. Berger is a business man and her childhood friend who runs trading posts and inns along the border.
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    Dominious is a former sea captain in the royal navy of Norwegia who is a prosperous farmer and trader of spices. He is also a gifted his powers being enhanced speed and telekinesis. He is in an loving relationship with Adelle and adores her. Dom is a skilled warrior who specializes in smuggling covert agents across hostile territory.

    He was a former sexfighting hobbyist who now enjoys to see another side of Adelle the dominant yet sportive sexfighter who tests her skills in the local sexfighting league. Adelle is a sensual caring woman who is a skilled sexual healer. She is also a skilled archer and spars with Dom and Freya on learning combat techniques although she is an pacifist.
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    Adelle Bridgette Johanssen is the daughter of the kingdom?s chief advisor (father) and a prominent teacher (mother) who teaches economics and statecraft and heads the teacher?s council. She is a kind beautiful woman who has many admirers in the kingdom. She is training to be a teacher and an advisor to the king on diplomatic relations. She is Freya?s best friend and confidante cum advisor on international studies and relations. She has magical skills bordering on promising and is being trained by the chief mage of the kingdom.

    She is in a relationship with her childhood friend Dominicus Eriksen also affectionately called Dom by her. She is a sensual caring woman who is a skilled sexual healer. She is also a skilled archer and spars with Dom and Freya on learning combat techniques although she is a pacifist. She also is an interested sexfighter and participates in matches with women and men if only to test her sexual skills and is a sportive sexfighter although she can get intense when she faces trash talk. She adores nature and animals and has a deep bond with her two dogs.
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    Volkan is a mysterious mercenary and mid-tier member of a secret covert organization which aims to conquer and dominate the world step by step. He is a skilled saboteur and spy specializing in covert operations.

    He is a proficient martial artist and a skilled swordsman who is ambidextrous. He has a hidden dangerous ambition to be a supreme dominant force and is frustrated by his mid-tier status in the group. he shares the dominant urges that his partners in a polymarous relationship Romi and Rebecca. The trio share a very intense sexual relationship and a voracious appetite for sexfighting thriving on their power obsession and share an sadistic outlook. Volkan is a mage
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    Romi Von Aurelius is an powerful businesswoman and citizen of the nation of Alexasia and mid-tier member of a secret covert organization which aims to conquer and dominate the world step by step . Her parents are a powerful merchant (father) and her mother is a key ranking sorcerer and strategist to the chief advisor to the king and queen of Alexasia passing her skills as a powerful sorceress to Romi by birth.

    Romi is a skilled ambitious unscrupulous warrior who dreams of being the empress of the world starting with the nine nations of Eurasia. She is a busty sexual alpha force who is skilled in the art of love making and thrives in the physical, mental and sexual dominance of her adversaries male and female which are among the council of members of Alexsia who have their own ambitions. Romi has bedded many lovers male and female but is attracted to Volkan & Rebecca ( members of the covert group ) in a erotic polymarous open minded relationship.

    She also has an scorching sexual tension with Freya and Ariella as sparks fly during the two alpha?s meet during a trade negotiation and fantasizes about sexually dominating them in a sexfight and intends to take Alexander Larsen as part of her male harem. She also is a high-ranking combatant in the local sexfighting contest battling both men and women and gets off on the sexual dominance.

    She usually has a condition attached to her victory magically binding the loser to be her sexual slave and continues to sexually battle with them offering their freedom as a bait. She has many likeminded friends across the covert organization?s members across nations. She loves to pit her body, mind and sexual prowess against men and women and lives for the rush of dominance.
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    Cesar is an skilled tool maker and a craftsman who is a member of a of a gypsy like migrating clan which acts as cross country trading clan. He has of mixed heritage which is Norwegian and Italian. He is also secretly an mid tier member of an secret organization which keeps tabs on dark forces magical and non magical and takes covert action assisting nations in secret to keep the peace.

    Cesar has the ability to possess animals and birds and look through their eyes and males for useful surveillance. He also has the ability to handle magical artifacts which would ordinarily greatly harm anyone except the creator. Cesar is in a polymarous relationship with Dee a skilled tool maker and craftsman and Archana Maurya an mysterious Asian origin trader, healer and spy in chef of the clan.

    Cesar is an experienced sexfighter who has fought women in sexual battles of different clans. He however has been defeated by Archana twice and has an even record with dee but prior to being in a relationship.
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    Dee ambrosia McPherson is a travelling merchant and entertainer and the daughter of the chief of a gypsy like migrating clan which acts as cross country trading clan. She is also secretly a mid-tier member of an secret organization which keeps tabs on dark forces magical and non-magical and takes covert action assisting nations in secret to keep the peace.

    Her parents are a trader (father) and a craftsman artist seamstress mother who is also a gypsy possessing significant magical powers. Dee is a busty woman and has an voracious sexual appetite and bed a lot of men and women while passing through cities. She also has a deep sexual dominance fetish and has conquered many men and women through contests in secret battles.

    She is also a budding sorceress for hire though not for nefarious purposes and has deep ambitions to be a major player in the world although she has no imperialist agenda. She has heard through her sources of Ariella?s and Romi?s sexual prowess amongst others and two certain male sexfighers as well and intends to battle them and is honing her skills. She is a skilled tracker and is reading up on battle magic and a valuable collector intelligence because of her travels.

    She is in a polymarous relationship with Cesar a skilled tool maker and craftsman and Archana Maurya an mysterious Asian origin trader, healer and spy in chef of the clan.

    Chapter 1

    The Inn was called the captains nest and it was situated just across a across the local amphitheater kind of structure with circular slabs of stone on which people could sit and watch as every travelling entourage of musicians, exotic dancers, jugglers, wrestlers performed. There was no performance tonight and the streets were lit by the moonlight and the only noise emanating was the hustle and bustle of the inn. The city of Drammen the sprawling capital of Norwegia was just about to seep into the night with lamp lights going out across the city.

    The inn was packed to the fullest with busty skimpily dressed waitresses running to and from from the kitchen and the counter where all the wine barrels were neatly arranged by flavor with food and wine. A lone woman dressed in black sitting straight across the door of the inn was being watched eagerly by an busty waitress called Inge who was feeling hot even though the inn was well ventilated and the cool night wind kept the temperature in the room created by all the bodies in the room moderately bearable.

    The reason that Inge was hot was that she was staring at the woman drinking in her spectacular hot body clothed in all black from blouse and vest to trousers. She wore heavy black leather boots, which ended halfway up her thighs, and daggers were strapped to both boots. She wore thick, strong riding gloves. The woman had a beautiful face, with dark blue eyes and a strong, sensual mouth. Her strawberry blonde hair cascaded from her head in long waves till waist but it was her body that was her true glory. Her tanned arms were smooth and exquisitely toned. Her midriff was taut and firm, her strong abdomen well-defined, her navel a deep, tight slit. Her hips curved out from her narrow waist, giving her a classic hourglass figure, before tapering down into long, well-muscled legs. Her breasts attracted the most attention, however.

    Her breasts were magnificent, firm and round, topped with perfect brown areola and long, tight nipples. Her tits were massive and half the men in the room were already imagining their hard cocks between that chesty valley. Inge felt herself getting wet just from imagining herself going cunt to cunt with this gorgeous woman. Inge was a sexfighter apart from being a waitress and running the inn with her husband. She had just lost a sexfight to the hung male stud Gustav a ripped captain in the Norwegian army after a close match in the afternoon and her mind kept going back to the passionate hard sex that she had had.

    She was going to fuck her husband's brains out tonight and wear him out but if her husband was lucky he could get to watch her battle this woman cunt to cunt and he could watch. Inge was about to approach the woman when the door to the inn opened and the woman she was looking stared at the door and there was an fire in her eyes, a eager look as she stared at the new entrants in the inn.

    A man and a woman had entered the Inn and there was something instantly about them that changed the room. The man was tall about 6?2, blonde, handsome with a chiseled face with dimples that added charm to his face. His eyes were blue and could melt the eyes of any woman with his intense stare. He had a muscular build and rippling muscles. He was not on the heavy side though he was built more like an elite soldier. The attire suggested a travelling merchant who probably kept fit to protect his ware and money and to charm the women. Inge had already started fantasizing about a foursome with the blonde woman and this man and she felt herself getting wetter and a spot appeared in her undergarments.


    The man wore a knee-length vest worn over a linen shirt with a hooded cloak and grey boots with a purse around his waist. A silver chain hung around his neck. A sword hung at his belt and his movements across the room towards the blonde woman Inge had been ogling suggested that the man was could take care of himself. His eyes scanned the room noting the exit points to the inn and his movements were slow and deliberate with his hand never leaving the sword. The woman wore a pair of golden earrings dangled from her earlobes and a golden bracelet adorned each wrist. She was wearing a pure white blouse, the sleeves rolled up to her elbows. The blouse should have been loose-fitting, but it strained to contain her magnificent chest.

    Her thick, sharp nipples cut into the fine cloth and her firm mammoth breasts rolled and bounced with her movement. A large belt buckle, silver and jeweled, clasped a narrow leather belt which hugged her broad, rounded hips at their widest point. Skin-tight cloth pants clung enticingly to her ass and outlined her powerfully muscled thighs and calves. She wore calf-high black boots, turned over at the top. Her crystal blue eyes and full red lips perfectly matched to the flowing golden locks of her hair. Her blond lustrous hair cascaded down to her waists in curls. Her face was beautiful with a strong mouth and straight fine nose, high cheekbones and thick, full lips. Her eyes were a dark green color that seemed to shade to an orange brown in the shifting light. She looked like a viking goddess.

    The man and woman joined the sitting woman at the table and a waitress went over to take the order "Three glasses of your finest red wine,? the blonde woman said in a deep sultry voice. The waitress came back and placed three goblets of wine on the table and sauntered off ogling at the two massive breasts in proud display. She was probably going to fantasize about the two women and man tonight. The woman who was with the man gestured with a hand signal and said,
    "Easvio."

    The charm was meant to prevent anyone from eavesdropping while the women and man could chat in their normal tone.

    The woman sitting beside the man softly asked, "So do you have it?"

    The other woman opposite her whose name was Martina stared intently at the questioning woman and said, "I do and it?s in code as agreed."

    Martina took a scroll from her inner vest pocket and it over to the w intently stared at the woman whose name was Rebecca who said softly, ?I would enjoy fucking you into submission after i am done with punishing you if this information proved to be false."

    Marina flushed recalling their last encounter which ended in her complete surrender and said, "You Bitch! Watch your slutty mouth! You and I are both equal ranked members of the group and i can take you on anytime. The information is verified. I have tracked the chronicle keeper druid for months verifying that he is a member of the watchers and the timeline fights.


    "He was at the reception party welcoming the group which banished the feared six. I then seduced and fucked his trainee son and his girlfriend out of the brains and they pressed the druid for a week till he finally revealed he made a prohibited copy of the locations. I also put a truth spell on them just to be sure but i did not need to as they worship this body.

    "I rode the boy till he could not cum anymore without rest and i cuntfucked his girlfriend for hours till she begged me to stop. I own this couple's bodies just like i will own you today bitch! I challenge u to a sexfight and the code indicates that you can?t refuse a rematch. "

    Rebecca felt the fire in her loins flare to life. Her breasts bounced and swelled and tightened with arousal and began to pulse, her nipples hardened to spikes. She felt a growing wetness between her legs.

    She said softly to Martina, "Very well! But i can?t fight you tonight as i have to leave for Germania. I will be back in a fortnight if all goes well and then you can have your battle. The stakes are that you will be Rathgar's sex slave for a month cunt at his beck and call if you lose and you will not bed anyone else except for Rathgar and Shakara. Do u accept?

    "The victor of the last sexfight decides the stakes and these are mine! If you win you can have me for a month at your disposal and you can fuck both Rathgar and Shakara till then. My next assignment is with you anyways."

    Martina flushed being reminded again of her loss but she had been training for this day and she was lusting for Rathgar anyways having heard about his voracious sexual dalliances and his clit licking abilities apart from his hard fucking even though she would be in a submissive role. The prospect of her being sexually dominated by Rathgar and his mate aroused her dormant submissive side and she felt her getting more wet. She hesitated a little because she hated Shakara who was Rathgar's mate and to whom she had lost Rathgar to in a winner takes all sexfight.

    She would beat this bitch and make her cunt squirt all over her gorgeous busty body and then she would make her lick it all up but even if she lost she would have a glorious sex filled month with two gorgeous humans and the truth is being submissive fueled her desire to train sexually again. She extended her hand out and Rebecca licked her lips slowly and extended her hand and shook Martina's hand muttering, "Sealatius." signifying the bond had been sealed imposing its binding nature on the two sorceresses.

    Rathgar was watching the whole exchange with a smile and when Rebecca proposed the stakes and Martina agreed he felt aroused. He had always wanted to fuck Martina before Shakara came into his life and had beaten Martina and ordered her away from him as per stakes agreed. Rathgar had owed a debt to Rebecca for bringing him into the covert group he was working for and she was collecting on his debt. Shakara would be raging when she found Rebecca has pulled them into the stakes but she knew about Rathgar's debt and she could not argue because Rebecca was her mentor on her missions and if she had to grow she had to learn.

    The women stood up and Rebecca ended the eavesdropping prevention spell. Rebecca told Martina, "I have to send in my report now. Gather you senses, go to Alexsia as Romi awaits you immediately. Train hard as you would need it as i am going to fuck you senseless."

    Martina replied, "Bitch, I am going to fuck you so hard in so many ways that you will scream for more." and turned around and walked up the steps to her room with her ass rippling sensuously putting on a show for Rebecca and the entire inn and her long hair bouncing on her buns as she walked. Rebecca wanted to ambush her right them and hump her in a standing trib position right then foreplay be damned and all but smiled and followed rathgar outside.

    The two stepped out and walked across the amphitheater into the square towards the harbor. They reached the pier and walked around the beach towards a desolate clump of coconut trees towards an gypsy encampment. The music notes from a minstrel playing a modified gypsy version of a lyre melodiously swamped them as people were singing merrily to the tune huddled around a fire while two busty redhead gypsy women wearing a low-cut blouse with their busty firm breasts battling the blouse?s buttons straining to get free. They reached the cart parked at the farthest end of the caravan and a man clothed in black stood there feeding a large hawk chunks of meat. The man was a mercenary and an assassin bonded magically to Rebecca who traveled with her but maintaining a distance always on hand for a task that involved a sabotage or assassination. Rebecca handed over the scroll to him and he looked at it and memorized it and handed it back to her.

    The bond between them meant that no one except a skilled mind walker who knew how to navigate and circumvent magical mental barriers could extract the information and he or she would have to go in pretty deep. The intrusion however would send off a psychic trigger and Rebecca would then wipe his memories clean through a memory clearing chant. Rebecca told the man, "Leave at once with supplies, stop nowhere and this is to be delivered only to argon and his intelligence wing only." The man nodded and whistled. The hawk flew and perched on his glove. Rebecca and Rathgar turned and walked towards the inn through a shortcut while the man vanished into the darkness.

    A busty gypsy woman was walking away from the encampment towards a small inlet covered with palm trees probably to the inn to find a buyer for ganja the exotic drug gypsy trader clans were bringing up from Indica. Rebecca knew this because she had a pipe in her hand smoking it as she quietly walked towards the inn. The drug gave a rush to one's senses without the after effects. Rebecca briskly walked up to the haired dark-haired busty woman wearing a skimpy orange color blouse. Her breasts were high and firm and the large shape of the areola was visible straining against the blouse.

    The woman was caramel skinned, not skinny at all rather she was curvy with wide hips carrying a massive stunning ass jiggling as she walked tightly wrapped in colorful skirt. Rathgar was already fantasizing that ass on his dick moving in entire circles The woman looked like had absolute control on the movement of her ass The woman had lustrous straight hair lightly touched the crack of her ass.She had long lush big lips, a medium sized nose, a gorgeous face neither too chubby nor too long just the right bit .

    Rebecca caught her hand turning her around grabbed the back of her head and planted a kiss on her. Pulling her close to her body with the other the woman eyes bulged wide at first but when she saw Rebecca and felt the contours of her body tit against tit, nipple against nipple she felt a rush of lust staring instantly. She pulled closer to Rebecca, parted lips, her nipples beginning to ache with heat her pussy beginning to moisten, the wet spot on her thong growing ever larger. Rebecca was sucking on her tongue like a dick her head moving back and forth. Moriah as the caramel skinned was called felt the heat boiling in her loins.

    Rebecca pulled away from Moriah?s succulent large lips and started grinding on her body moving up and down her nipples flicking Moriah's nubs with her up and down movement. After a minute or two of this nipple fencing Rebecca reached down to Moriah's waist, unclasped the short skirt

    Moriah was wearing revealing her soft minuscule thong, quickly disposing off it and tossing it aside parted it aside to reveal her shaved slit turned around, took off her trousers and her thong in a slow teasing movement tossed it aside and placed her ass right on Moriah's now pulsing steadily wet clit.

    Rebecca slowly ground her ass in circular motions on her pussy with slow deliberate movements circular, left right up and down, twerking her magnificent ass on Moriah's pussy all the while looking at Rathgar intently. She was sure that Rathgar was fascinated by Moriah 's ass when he first saw her and Rebecca was showing off her ass control skills to him and she was not seen exhibiting her full skill as this was not a sexfight. Rebecca wanted a hard fuck with this woman and a longer one with Rathgar.

    Martina's challenge had fueled her loins and she had to have a release. Moriah saw Rebecca's smirk looked at Rathgar and understood what was going on. Moriah was the sexiest woman in the gypsy camp having bedded many men and women in each city and her eyes flashed.

    She was not going to be shown inferior to this woman in any sexual way. She gripped Rebecca's ass with one hand bent down and grabbed Rebecca's mane pulling her head slightly back and started thrusting back hard and quick, her ass jerking backward and forward.

    After a couple of minutes of hard thrusting Rebecca?s buns were slickly wet due to Moriah?s juices flowing in full flow now. She was not looking for a sexfight just for a hard fuck but apparently Moriah had a competitive nature as her thrusting indicate while looking at Rathgor who had stripped already.

    They were surrounded by foliage and would be interrupted because Rebecca had already activated the Easvio spell while walking towards Moriah.

    After five minutes of this thrust battle Rebecca suddenly rose up pushing Moriah away. Their eyes locked and the overwhelming need and hunger that both women were feeling began to boil over. They conveyed to each other their mutual, growing lust. Rebecca reached out and ran her hands along Moriah's sides, starting at her hips and slowly, gently, traced her open palms up Diana?s smooth, bare skin, up her torso to her breasts.

    Rebecca was careful not to touch Diana?s tits, only to stroke gently at the woman?s sensitive flesh, to tease without yet taking the next step. Moriah placed one hand on Rebecca?s right hip and the other on her rival?s firm, muscled belly, feeling her palm suck to the woman?s deep navel. She stroked Rebecca?s body from her hip to her arm, caressing the smooth, soft flesh. Rebecca unbuttoned Moriah's blouse slid off her body.

    She pulled Moriah towards her by the shoulders, lined up their taut, long, throbbing nipples, and brought them together, tip to tip. Moriah and Rebecca screamed as one, their howls of sudden shock and pleasure harmonizing. Their nipples seemed to seal together in a surge of electricity and pure erotic power. Their fleshy nubs fastened on each other, their milk holes sucking. Power and heat and primal lust poured into both women from the other magnificent female. The spike of sensation exploded, filling their throbbing tits with heat, hardening both sets of mammaries even more, then flowed down their bellies into their cunts like molten lava. The women shrieked again, in unison, as their powerful cunts contracted convulsing like steel traps, then gushed hot pussy juice.

    The thick, intoxicating scent of fully aroused womanhood rolled off of their bodies. Finally, after sharing their sexual power for almost 60 seconds, both women shrieked and, as if by mutual agreement, pushed each other away Moriah knew that her body needed, in some incomprehensible way, to meet and mate and fuck with Rebecca?s spectacular body.

    Rebecca and Moriah leaned into each other, both women filling their hands with the other?s tits and squeezing, squeezing hard. They fondled and weighed, kneaded and crushed together the other woman?s fantastic tits. They pushed their faces close, forehead to forehead, eyes half-open, noses touching, hot, sweet breath blasting into the other. Rebecca lined her nipples up with Moriah?s burning nips and, signaling with their eyes, the women pushed them together, tip to tip.

    As before, erotic lust raced through both women, pumping up their clits, feeding their lust, torturing them with pleasure and delicious sexual sensations. The women locked eyes and struggled to bring their raging bodies under control. Growling lustfully at each other, they held their nipples together. hoping to see the other woman?s nipples shrivel up and surrender to the greater power of the other, to show them both who was the more powerful woman. Their nipples grew harder and stronger, they fused together, but neither pair retreated from the other. Their swollen nipples held tip to tip only for a moment, then slid past each other to bury themselves in the other woman?s bumpy areola.

    Rebecca moved her tits around and around, rotating them on Moriah?s slick melons, trying to twist and tangle her hard nipples with Lorelei?s matching pair. Moriah began rotating her tits the other way, grinding back, trying to drill down into Rebecca?s orbs. They pressed their bodies harder together, keeping their eyes locked and their faces pushed close. Their hot bellies crushed and rubbed, deep navels sucking and then popping apart as they shifted.

    The women?s firm, warm thighs pushed and struggled against each other, occasionally slipping between the other woman?s legs, encouraging hot pussies to rub and suck against the smooth, taut flesh, prompting both women to raise their thighs into the other?s wet cunt provoking each woman to ride the other's leg. Their naked, wet pussies rubbed into each other?s thighs, their thick pussy lips sucked to the smooth flesh, sending waves of lightning heat flowing up through their bellies and back into their tits.

    After about two minutes of sensuous thigh riding the women stepped back breathing hard. Rebecca would normally now get into a 69 position with Moriah and lick her into multiple orgasms but she had to show this Carmel skinned cunt a quick lesson in who was the alpha sex queen here She would enjoy licking Moriah 's clit to a frenzy later in the night after claiming he prize.

    ?Enough, I want to feel your cunt, feel your clit. Meet me woman to woman,? said Rebecca dropping on the soft grass on the ground on her ass and, bracing her voluptuous body with her powerful arms behind her back, spread wide her wet, muscular thighs.

    Her naked cunt glistened in the light, dripping with arousal, its pink slit radiating heat, pussy lips fat with desire. Her long, thick, marble clit protruded enticingly from the top of her swollen vulva. Moriah imitated her stance and reached down between her thighs and used her right index and middle fingers to spread her sopping wet pussy lips, coaxing her clit out She stroked it lightly with her finger, and jerked with shock at the jolt that raced through her body, pooling in her erogenous zones.


    Moriah replied, ?Let me feel your womanhood and we shall see who is the better woman." She reached between her legs and used her fingers to spread her cunt a little wider. Moriah was tapping into her fierce gypsy blood determined to challenge Rebecca. Moriah had not sex fought before but she had heard about the league and was contemplating entering in the league in the next city her map traveled to.

    She was a novice with no knowledge of the various techniques or strategies and counter strategies that sexfighters employed but she was determined to fuck hard and fast. She decided hard sexual aggression was her only tool and she would go with the flow and see what transpired. She humped the air eyes blazing with lust without saying a word

    The two women slid along the fur rug towards each other, legs spread wide, a constant trickle of pussy juice running down from their fully-aroused twats. Their powerful bare legs slid against each other and smooth skin caressed as the women assumed a scissors-position, right legs over lefts, as they pushed up close and prepared to mate, to fight cunt to cunt to the finish, to finally consume each other.

    A small gush of pussy juice shot from Moriah?s twat and splashed into Rebecca's gaping fuckhole. A moment later, Moriah felt an answering splash of juice and her mind almost exploded with the erotic buildup of the moment.

    They would fuck each other until one submitted, until they both exploded with unbelievable pleasure. The women braced their bodies with their powerful arms, pulled back their hips, then thrust their gaping twats directly into each other with a hard, wet splat of moist, thick fuck lips. Their massive clits squashed tight and sent an explosion of erotic heat roaring through both women, filling their cunts, flowing from their bellies up into their engorged tits, filling their incredible bodies with raw ecstasy.

    Their voracious cunts sucked tight to each other, their gaping fuckholes sealed and locked like hungry mouths. They slammed their burning, ravenous cunts together again and again. The inlet room reverberated with the sound of taut, wet flesh slapping in rhythm.

    Their labia merged into one, as they rubbed and bucked their hips, driving, grinding into each other, seeking to violate each other in the deepest ways possible. Moriah already felt on the verge of the greatest orgasm of her life and yet she and Rebecca had barely started fucking .. She kept thrusting, determined to join her body with Rebecca's in the most intimate ways possible.

    The women?s cunts slowly worked into each other, juicy, engorged pussy lips spreading and flattening against each other with their slow, powerful thrusts

    Hot pussy juice squeezed out from their interlocked cunt lips with each powerful thrust. They began stroking, thrusting, grinding their nerve-rich, swollen clits together in earnest.

    ? Fuck, fuck, you dirty little bitch!? Moriah screamed
    Began to feel an intense pressure on her pussy and realized that Rebecca was using her vaginal muscles to squeeze and eat Moriah's throbbing twat.

    She was taken aback; she did not know how to match this incredible feat groaned, her hips matching the slow, hard rhythm of Rebecca's thrusts, the sexual power in her body slowly building to the point of explosion.

    After several minutes of fighting in this position, Rebecca reached out and grabbed Moriah?s right thigh, shifting her body so that she and Moriah fit together like two interlocked clothespins. Moriah grasped Rebecca s right thigh and answered the sorceress? thrusts with her own. Hips and asses rocked into a swaying, pumping frenzy as they rubbed clits vigorously, settling into a hard, delicious, grinding rhythm.

    ?Whore, fucking whore?!!,? Moriah cried, her head thrown back in joy and lust as her body experienced sensations she never thought possible. Her tits rocked furiously, bouncing in concert with her driving hips.
    Rebecca gasped, ?You little cunt, I will break you so easily. "

    Moriah?s body was shuddering with pre-orgasmic tremors and she knew she was only moments away from exploding. Part of her just wanted to relax and enjoy it, but a stronger part needed to win.

    As their cunts locked and fused with each micro touch spending feelings of amplified lust, Moriah was stunned to feel Lorelei?s powerful clit suddenly swell up like a balloon. The engorged nub grew bigger, longer and harder, as though a sexual dam had suddenly been released
    Rebecca threw back her head and laughed, smiling with joy. She rejoiced in the feeling of Diana?s clit being driven back beneath her own


    Moriah gasped in sexual thrill and in that moment, Rebecca thrust forward pushing Moriah on her back getting on top and grabbed her left leg and raised it hip and placed it on her shoulder.

    She mounted the red-haired bitch and rolled her hips, drilling Moriah?s pussy with her cunt. Rebecca s powerful hips thrust--slowly at first, then faster and faster Her saxhorn was huge, swollen and hard, throbbing with heat. Lorelei smiled and teased her equally huge, sensitive clit out of her cunt. The women?s eyes locked, heat and rage flowing between them like electricity.

    Rebecca slid her slick pussy up and down against Moriah?s cunt. Moriah rubbed back but she was losing control. She had equally fucked men and women but it was always a passionate fuck fest hard yes but towards the end of the act. Her body was on fire and her mind was just screaming to give in and enjoy the huge orgasm building up. A small part of her mind assured her that she would learn the sexfight skill in time and then she would conquer women and she would challenge this bitch who was fucking her in a frenzy

    Rebecca smiled crazily. She knew Moriah was losing control. She guessed Moriah had never sexfought before and she would enjoy ravishing her She began her own rolling of hips guided by many years of practice pushing hard, then rolling back soft and Bending Samantha's clit in all directions. Rebecca's clit bent Moriah's clit left and right and up and down. She suddenly went into a frenzy with her hips blurring in motion riding Moriah like she rode Rathgar when she felt dominant and she felt dominant now

    The sudden frenzied bucking pushed Moriah over the edge her eyes rolled back into her head, and her toes began to curl and her hips began to tremor uncontrollably Rebecca screamed,? Yes, yes, yesss, oh Fuck, YESSS!!? her voice rising to a shriek of delirium as she worked her cunt harder and harder into Moriah's delicious twat and Moriah?s orgasm seemed to last forever.

    Rebecca ground two smaller orgasms from her and then finally came shrieking, "AAaaaahhhh, Fuck, Mitra, FFFuccckkkk!!!" Small orgasms continued to ripple through her and they kept crushing each other?s cunt driving Moriah to further little orgasms


    Rebecca pulled Moriah up and stuck her tongue in her mouth indulging in a mini tongue battle feel and probing her tongue for about fifteen seconds. She then turned to Rathgar who already had stroked his hard dick to orgasm at the exact moment Moriah gave in spraying the grass with his thick loads of cum. She turned back to Moriah putting her right hand on her neck chocking her slightly and said, "I am now going to fuck my man while you watch. I am going to drain his balls and claim his cum as my prize and you are to watch every drop of his cum spraying out. Do you understand?"

    Moriah nodded sensing that Rebecca was a powerful sorceress having a moderate magical skill herself. She knew she was in the presence of a sexual alpha and she had to take her punishment .Ragnarok was already hard .Rebecca's skill as a sexfighter had always turned him on and yet he knew that she would fuck him too mercilessly as he had lost a sexfight to her and she had imposed a condition for the next three months that she would fuck him anytime as a dominant victor and he had to suppress his instincts to grab her and fuck her hard.

    The sexfight code was to be respected and he would have his chance once the three months expired until then he was to submit and he would gladly grateful at this moment to let this sexual goddess of a woman to fuck him senseless .Rebecca?s loins were bursting with lust as she loved this part of humiliating Moriah, She knelt in front of Ragnarok's hard thick cock and Her mouth immediately latched onto it, sucking it deep.

    Rathgar's eyes rolled back into his head in immense pleasure. He could feel the woman's tongue moving up and down his hardness, tasting every vein. Suddenly, he felt her mouth sink down to the base of his cock, her throat squeezing the head. A warm tongue snaked out to lick the balls, then slurped its way up the shaft as her mouth twisted up his cock. The wet tongue then swirled around the head as the lips suctioned their way off the tip of his cock with a loud pop. Rathgar's eyes flashed open upon feeling this; he had only known one woman to use this move when sucking his dick. He knew he was in for one of the nights of his life.

    End of chapter 1

    Coming up in chapter 2 :-A fierce sorceress warrior, diplomat and spymaster who is a kind loving woman married to a trainee diplomat and head of Norwegia's spy network receives important intelligence about mysterious artifacts vanishing from the city of Indica and attempts to investigate. A mysterious busty Indican traveling trader hears whispers of a secret covert organization with nefarious purposes and attempts to investigate. Some light is shed on the terrible background of the feared six. An Indican Trader prepares to train to challenge the local sexfight champion of the Norwegian capital

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    I'm surprised this story isn't getting a bunch of comments. I love it! The background is excellent, with a whle new universe I can feel in every sentence, characters are great and it seems this is just the beginning to something huge. Congrats and thank you for this awesome start!

    P.S. You may want to take a detailed look at the story, there are some typos here and there (for example, there's a few "Lorelei", which I assume it was the prior name of one of the characters). Thank you again for this story!

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    Quote Originally Posted by PalomaJara View Post
    I'm surprised this story isn't getting a bunch of comments. I love it! The background is excellent, with a whle new universe I can feel in every sentence, characters are great and it seems this is just the beginning to something huge. Congrats and thank you for this awesome start!

    P.S. You may want to take a detailed look at the story, there are some typos here and there (for example, there's a few "Lorelei", which I assume it was the prior name of one of the characters). Thank you again for this story!
    Firstly,

    Thank you so very much.I am a first time writer and i spent time fleshing the first set of characters.

    I went through Literotica's writer resources to get the punctuation right and the art of making characters talk.

    I love medieval fantasy and i am a voracious reader and that is why i fleshed out my characters first and listed them out i love my characters being intelligent hence the focus on educated,strategic ,sexual characters.

    I love strong,sexual,intelligent women and that is why the female characters are srong and empathetic and intelligent
    They are merchants,spy masters ,economists etc.

    I loved the sorcery elements and the espionage genre.

    Every one needs encouragement and in the future ,i will always value that you commented.It means a lot,honest.

    Of course, as a first time writer ,i know there will be some mistakes and i am grateful for your feedback.

    I was also wondering why there arent any comments.

    Regards
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    Dear Jack,

    This is off to a really good start and you have clearly done some work in fleshing out the characters. Your world-building is great and I look forward to seeing where this is going. The outline of the characters is interesting and some of them are really intriguing. I look forward to meeting them and seeing how their worlds develop in later chapters. Your interest in D and D and the whole fantasy, medieval setting is evident.

    Some constructive criticism: As Paloma wrote, you need to do some proof-reading. "Moriah" is, at different times, "Diana" and "Lorelei." Also, there is a point where the women are on a rug - I don't know how that happened, since they began fighting in a forest. In terms of description, you generally do a good job, but there are several parts in the sexfight where I cannot visualize what is happening because the positions of the women, what they are doing, and how they got there is unclear. In terms of writing, there are many places where I recognize my own phrasing and style. That is absolutely fine - we all need to find inspiration/models on which to base our work- but try to find your own voice as you go along.

    Overall, this is a really great start to an erotic fantasy world. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.

    Good luck!

    JB57
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    A very promising start !
    It looks to have a good intriguing plot and it is well written. It also looks to contain some of adventure and spy action as you also noticed.
    The erotic scene was hot.
    Let us enjoy ch. 2 soon !

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    Quote Originally Posted by JB57 View Post
    Dear Jack,

    This is off to a really good start and you have clearly done some work in fleshing out the characters. Your world-building is great and I look forward to seeing where this is going. The outline of the characters is interesting and some of them are really intriguing. I look forward to meeting them and seeing how their worlds develop in later chapters. Your interest in D and D and the whole fantasy, medieval setting is evident.

    Some constructive criticism: As Paloma wrote, you need to do some proof-reading. "Moriah" is, at different times, "Diana" and "Lorelei." Also, there is a point where the women are on a rug - I don't know how that happened, since they began fighting in a forest. In terms of description, you generally do a good job, but there are several parts in the sexfight where I cannot visualize what is happening because the positions of the women, what they are doing, and how they got there is unclear. In terms of writing, there are many places where I recognize my own phrasing and style. That is absolutely fine - we all need to find inspiration/models on which to base our work- but try to find your own voice as you go along.

    Overall, this is a really great start to an erotic fantasy world. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.

    Good luck!

    JB57
    Sir,I absolutely value your feedback.

    Every point is noted and i will action on it.I am a first time writer and i think in my excitement,i miss to get the first chapter and the characters out ,missed some amount of due diligence.
    i actually am business analyst and have no creative writing education but i am a voracious reader and have a VERY vivid imagination in the mainstream space

    i am sure as i read more about writing skills ,i will eliminate the occurrence of the points you mentioned



    As for the style,it may be subconsciously embedded in myself since i am a massive fan and also since we all look up to you since you are the gold standard ,how do we go about that bias ?

    You would be the best person to give us a clue.

    The other problem is ,because your descriptions are brilliant in the sex fight scenes and you cover all sorts of positions ,i think some similarity ill be visible.

    Its like a cricket batsman/batswoman who day in day out plays all the shots.,Everyone looks like they are trying to emulate him or her

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    Dear Jack,

    I absolutely understand and I cannot really offer too much advice on how to get beyond the "imitation" stage. When I started writing, I'm sure I imitated or drew on the people I admired, like Morton. In my case, however, I specifically wanted more detail (both physical and psychological) in the sexfights I was reading and so I focused on that aspect of the storytelling.

    I think that, as you go along, write more and think more about what you want to do, you will begin to develop your own way of writing and expressing ideas. I would recommend that you draw deliberate inspiration from some of the other great writers on the board, like A. Penman and AngelDawn (as well as Morton) to diversify the descriptive language and ideas you are putting forward.

    Again, great start and I really look forward to whatever is next.

    Take care,

    JB57
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    Re: Eurasia -An epic sorcery & sword adventure saga -Chapter

    Quote Originally Posted by Giannis-CB View Post
    A very promising start !
    It looks to have a good intriguing plot and it is well written. It also looks to contain some of adventure and spy action as you also noticed.
    The erotic scene was hot.
    Let us enjoy ch. 2 soon !
    Dear Giannis,
    Thank you for your comment and your positive feedback.

    It is very encouraging for a first time writer

    Cheers
    Jack.

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