Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
It looks like you will close this story with one more sexfight between Robin and the Succubus.
I admit that i expected more variety of action.
I expected to read more about Robin't friend to come to help her and to participate in friendly or not friendly sexfights, about the receptionist,... In general i expected to read about sexfights but not between Robin and succubus only.
Maybe your fruitful fantasy keeps all these "goodies" for stories to come ?
Wishful thought, i know... but a boy can dream...
Besides... i do NOT complain. Not at all.
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This chapter had a very well written description of the place the succubus lived, into the tree.
If there was an academy for writers of erotic stories, this description should be taught there !!
In order all the erotic writers to understand that to write an erotic story does not mean only to write how woman A f@cked with Woman B. It needs also a plot, a building of the characters, a building of the erotic tension between the women who keep the prime roles, to show their feelings, their thoughts...
In other words... ALL which are present in your stories !
You do not write just "another hot erotic story" JB. You write (indirectly you also teach) erotic literature !
So, keep doing your good work ! We have to find out if Robin's sexfight talent and her magic tricks will turn succubus to
something different than an evil creature she is now. And, if this turn will happen (your story, your pen, you decide) what the consequences of this turn will be.
I hope to enjoy the final chapter soon.
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