A sexfight novel which i like more and i bet that soon enough i will like it even more.
Interesting plot and hot scenes (which i would prefer to last for longer though).
I hope the next chapter to be uploaded soon Jack !
Note: -All characters in the story are above the age of 18.
This is an epic sorcery and sword adventure saga set in the 5th century set in the land of Eurasia an amalgamation of 18 continents
The themes here are sorcery, intrigue, spy craft, heterosexual & lesbian sex, epic lesbian and heterosexual sexfights. This part of the saga takes place in the region of Eurasia which covers the kingdoms of Norwegia, Germania, Alexsia, Indica, Nippon, Zhang, Hangul, Northumbria.
Links to previous Eurasia Chapters -
Eurasia -An epic sorcery & sword adventure saga -Chapter1
Eurasia -An epic sorcery & sword adventure saga -Chapter2
Chapter 3 of Eurasia: An epic sorcery & sword Adventure Saga
Golden sunlight poured into a golden room through light pink tinted glass, casting a bright glow over crimson curtains. A crisp, gentle morning breeze blew in from the spacious balcony, stirring the aromatic presence of roses and bringing with it the fresh smell of oak and pine The novice maid Romanda busied herself with the task of preparing the room for her mistress Romi Von Aurelius who would be arriving from her morning ride soon.Romi Von Aurelius was a powerful businesswoman and citizen of the nation of Alexsia. Romanda had finished her morning tasks and was surveying the rooms mentally ticking off the completion of all her tasks before reporting to the housekeeper.
Her eyes locked a portrait on the wall of the bedroom, a large sized nude rendering displaying the full glorious form of her mistress and every time she looked at the portrait ,she flushed reminded of the hours of erotic pleasure that she experienced at the hands of her mistress first and her consort VolkanRomanda was a sexy beauty herself with gorgeous skin, a beautiful face w.ith full luscious lips , a chiseled jawline ,an angular face with a little and button-like nose with her blonde hair falling in waves and curls to her waist .She had a curvaceous figure which was neither on the heavy side nor on the thinner side. Her breasts were large and taut and high.
Romanda felt her pussy pulse with the first light erotic sensations as she reminisced about how Romi had tribbed her into unbearable pleasure leaving her breathless and her clit pulsing after having come hard again and again
Romi had overheard Romanda boast about her sexual prowess as she was walking in her garden with Volkan while passing the maid?s quarters in the late evening of the first day of Romanda ?s employment. Romanda had haughtily described to the other maids in detail about her sexual prowess and how she had fought with and defeated & sexually dominated a merchant?s daughter and fucked her boyfriend on the night before she started under Romi?s employ.
The blonde had boasted about making the busty redhead daughter whose name was Regina come again and again y tribbing her into a powerful orgasm in an intense sexfight Romanda had then proceeded to fuck Regina?s boyfriend who was called Kristof till his cock was sore.Romanda had wrapped her lips and tongue around his thick shaft and sucked hard. She had licked his cock with her tongue, she gently, teasingly had stroked rubbed the engorged organ with her hand. Romanda had brought him up and down the pleasure curve several times before leading him to an explosion of hot, sticky cum as Regina had been forced to watch her man moan and his body quiver in the throes of an powerful orgasm.
Romanda had found herself in Romi?s bedroom late after dinner being called upon to wait on her until Rom had found fit to send her back to her quarter. Romi had challenged her to a sexfight and had given her complete freedom to bring all her sexual aggression into the battle. Romi was a sexual alpha who loved to pit her body, mind and sexual prowess against men and women. She had been bemused by Romanda?s boasting and was determined to quickly show her that she was in the presence of one of the prominent female sexually dominant women in Alexsia.
Romanda was taught the sexual lesson of her life and Romi had licked, sucked and tribbed Romanda into submission on her large comfratble rug on the floor. As the battle progressed, however, it had soon became apparent that Romanda ?s cries and moans of pleasure were growing far faster than Romi?s were The women?s aching cunts had slid and slapped, hot cunt juice lubricated their writhing battleThe maid had to use all of her concentration to fight off the exquisite sexual power radiating from Romi?s engorged clit into her own body.
The room had echoed with the sound of taut, wet cuntflesh slapping in rhythm while Volkan had masturbated slowly sitting on the bed drinking in the sexual battle and feeling proud of his sexual goddess Romi?s sexual skills .He had known that he would get to fuck the gorgeous long into the night with Romi claiming the maid as her prize for the night.
Romi had suddenly escalated her humping into a frantic, pace and Romanda had howled like a banshee even as Romi had had felt her inner thighs soak with Yvonne?s intense sexual discharge crushed the other girl?s sexhorn back into its hood. Romanda had screamed, spreading her legs wide in absolute surrender.
Romanda was jolted from her reverie as she heard the housekeeper passing instructions to the rest of the staff in the hallway. Romi was seen riding towards the mansion and she had passed instructions for breakfast to be served in the room and that she was not to be disturbed for the next two hours
Romanda?s pussy was already dripping and she quickly walked out of the room into the hallway and down the staircase into her quarter. Her pussy was pulsing with need now and her memories of the night had led to lustful arousal which had to be satiated.
Drammen,Norwegia
A week after the events in Voorburg
Maneka was lying on the large bed watching the watching her childhood friend Aryaan. His armor had been long since discarded, he wore only his tight leather pants, no shirt, his bare, massive chest and chiseled abs out on display. The women around him were dancing closer and closer to him with each passing second, closing in on him and pressing their soft, tight bodies against him. A brunette with long flowing hair backed her bubbly ass up against his crotch, reaching up and caressing his face as she ground against him. A stacked blonde came up behind him and pressed her large tits against his back, grabbing his hips, her hands getting dangerously close to his growing cock.
The blonde?s name was Heidi who was Maneka?s friend and the owner of a large Inn in the heart of the capital. Maneka had picked her up two hours ago straight after she arrived FROM Voorburg . Maneka was scheduled to meet her dear friend Aryaan who had traveled from her homeland and couldn?t wait to dive into the hours of pleasure before her to unwind before she met Alexander for a debriefing session
She intended to give Aryaan a taste of Indican and Norwegian Pussy. Aryaan ?s consort & secretary Akaansha who was a dear friend of Maneka too would be there waiting to revel in a night of pleasure and lust satiation
The three women and man were in Maneka?s bedroom in the Indican embassy?s quarters allocated to her. The bedroom was aesthetically decorated with numerous artifacts from Indica on shelves, A couple of them were statues of the Indican Goddess Rati ,the goddess of love, lust, carnal desire.
An exquisite Indican carpet lay on the floor. There were two wooden stands on either side of the bed on which there were lit sandalwood incense sticks.The blonde under his right arm leaned up and held her face inches from Aryaan's own face, so close that he could feel her sweet breadth on his lips. Just as he was about to lean in for a kiss, she turned and locked lips with Akansha who was still thrusting her ass back against his crotch. Aryaan?s cock pulsed in his pants, pressing against her backside as he had a front row seat to the two beautiful women making out heavily, their tongues obviously dueling in and out of each other's mouths.
As Aryaan groaned and watched the two beauties, the blonde from behind him snaked her hand into his pants and grasped his now hard cock in her small hand, squeezing it slowly, teasingly. Impossibly, it grew even harder at her touch. Heidi leaned up on her tip toes and whispered into his ear, "I want to taste the renowned Indican cock ,having heard so much about it from Maneka.I will have you come multiple times tonight with each load being bigger than the previous. Norwegian pussy will devour Indican Cock tonight!?
Heidi pressed her lips against his and sucked his tongue into her mouth, sliding her lips up and down it like a cock. Akansha turned and dropped to her knees before Aryaan as Heidi behind him wrapped her arms around to his front, massaging and teasing his chest and stomach.Akansha?s mouth immediately latched onto it, sucking it deep. Aryaan?s eyes rolled back into his head in immense pleasure. Aryaan could feel the woman's tongue moving up and down his hardness, tasting every vein. Suddenly, he felt her mouth sink down to the base of his cock, her throat squeezing the head.
A warm tongue snaked out to lick the balls, then slurped its way up the shaft as her mouth twisted up his cock.
Five minutes later, Maneka decided to make her presence felt. It was she who had set the carnal night in front of them after all. She got up and walked to Aryaan, knelt down and gently eased Akansha?s head to her left.
Aryaan?s cock popped out from Akansha?s succulent mouth and entered the heavenly nymph like Maneka?s mouth as she closed those luscious lips and started working her magical tongue tricks on his cock.
Akansha meanwhile had led the reluctant Heidi away who watching Maneka?s oral pleasure giving prowess with fascination and pushed her down on to her stunning ass on the comfortable Indican rug .Akansha wasted no time in foreplay. She wanted her clit to feel the Norwegian clit?s heat. She had not experienced the hot twat of a Norwegian woman and her wanton desire had led her to forego the licking, slobbering foreplay that she usually indulged in .
?Let?s fuck, your Norwegian slut,? Akansha whispered eager to pit her hot twat against the busty blonde?s pussy and devour her.
Fueled by her desire, Heidi spread her legs, opening and exposing her tight, hot cunt slit to mate with the gorgeous, busty Indican woman
Akansha pushed Heidi on to her back and slowly ,sensually began working her whole body down onto and into Teresa?s voluptuous flesh letting her massive tits slide up and down from Heidi?s boobs down to her clit ,nipple fucking her twat for some seconds and going up and down again ,grinding her body on Heidi?s gorgeous body.
The women then locked into a long, lustful, teasing, licking kiss in which their tongues did battle with each other, that set them both on fire, a sexual fire as the rest of their perfect bodies mated and merged.
Meanwhile Aryaan had closed his eyes in ecstasy enjoying the blowjob from the best head doctor he had ever known.
Maneka?s hand gripped Aryaan?s base, squeezing it. Spit dribbled out down to his balls, slickening her hand as it slowly began to twist up the shaft. Her mouth again came up off of his dick.
She then raised her mouth up over his dick and let a big glob of spit drip slowly out of her mouth onto the head. Her hand came up and worked the warm saliva onto the length, jacking up and down from base to tip.
Aryaan could feel that load building in his balls. His hand moved to the back of her head and pulled her mouth down onto those balls, swollen and shaved. Her hand never stopping its motion, her tongue bathed his balls, licking every inch of them, leaving a slimy trail of spit. "Oh shit, that's it," Rathgar moaned. Her hand started jacking his cock faster at his confirmation.
Maneka could feel Aryaan?s cock begin to twitch in its need to cum. Once again, she draped her lips over the tip and slid her mouth down to the base, flexing her throat, milking his member. Aryaan threw out a mighty howl as his orgasm arrived, his cock swelling in Jupiter's throat before shooting a powerful stream straight down into her hungry belly.
She swallowed quickly, then pulled her mouth off and aimed the rapidly firing cock at her face. "Mmmmmm, there you go, baby, cover my face!"
Meanwhile the sound of taut, slapping flesh echoing in the room emanating from the two gorgeous busty women who were thrusting their clits into each other ,grinding hard .Akansha?s hips showcased her flexibility .She moved them hard and fast rubbing her hot clit over Heid?s who had slipped into the pace of a woman resigned to receiving pleasure and yet every five seconds Akansha moved her hips in a circular motion and then reversed it ensuring her clit gave unimaginable pleasure to Heidi from every direction possible
?FUCK, FUCK, !!!? Heidi shrieked, as she came in the most intense orgasm of her young life. Her cunt exploded with hot, thick cum
?No, no, fuck you! FUCKKK? Akansha shrieked, bucking her hips, her eyes glowing feverishly, her hips moving with Heidi?s and let her own orgasm flow fusing her cum into Heidi?s own hot cum.
After a few seconds of post orgasmic tremors rocking her body while her thighs shook with the intense aftermath ,?Did you like that, Norwegian cunt?? the busty Indican gloated, panting with effort and sexual heat. ?Did you like being fucked out of your mind, you cunt-eating slut? Do you want more??
Heidi smiled. The night was indeed going to be long and carnal The Night indeed was carnal with Aryaan fucking all three women in various positions with Maneka fucking her dear friend till his cock was sore .
She then tribbed Heidi relentlessly in very position imaginable reducing her to a giggling mass of orgasmic bliss while Akasha coaxing Aryaan for the next round with Heidi waiting to get her sample of his cock ??
Bavaria,The capital of Alexsia
Priya stared at the rising sun, basking in the sight and the quietness of her environment. Even as a kid, she loved this time of the day. It always energized her ,soothed her knowing that a fresh day lay ahead.
Priya was sitting in a comfortable chair of the verandah of an two floor mansion like house watching the sunrise and talking in the air, relaxing her senses. She looked away from watching the sun and scanned the landscape of the picturesque city in front her.
The mansion was situated on elevated ground, part of a planned locality of mansions set amidst lots of tress. The mansion itself was not too massive, it was just right for the purpose of accommodation of travelling guests, ambassadors, merchants, dignitaries, heads of state from the nation of Indica.It was tastefully decorated with artifacts from Indica as well as Bavaria, the capital of Alexsia where she was now. The Indican Queen Madhavi had ordered that all Indican owned stations across the continent of Eurasia would contain artifacts and books about the country in which it was based.
She believed that Indicans had to understand and respect the culture and history of the countries in which easy of its diplomatic stations were present.The focus apart from nurturing good relations was also to understand the country and build that information as part of its geo political and military strategy in case of conflict .Priya got up from her chair and walked into her bedroom to which the verandah led to. She had to get ready for her briefing from the Indican Ambassador Madhavi. Madhavi was a busty, intelligent, strong willed but kind woman who was steeped in foreign relations and diplomacy ever since she completed her education at the royal gurukul.
Priya closed the doors to the verandah and turned to look at herself in the mirror and a brown skinned busty woman with long black hair falling in curls which fell beyond her superb ass stared at her. Her face was beautiful with a pronounced diamond shaped jawline. Her breasts were massive and stood proud and firm.
Priya was an intelligent, kind, strong woman schooled in economics and diplomacy. She was a talented sorceress who was still learning to control and harness her power. Priya?s skills were mid-level in battle magic, high in herbology and sexual magic .She was also a trained warrior, flexible and supple. She was a sexual powerhouse with superb control of her hips.
She made men cum with her hip movements and fast paced riding of their dicks. She was a master of pace switching from slow sensuous movements of the hips to frenetic, primal fast fucking. She could go on and on often exhausting her partners who were men and women ranging on the situation.
She was well versed in the Kamasutra and practiced different positions of love making whenever she could. She was an accomplished sexfighter often sparring with her rivals in the Gurukul.She had been trained in sexual and battle magic having inherited magical powers from her parents .She knew that sexfighting along with her sharp intellect and physical battle skill would prove to be a potent combination in battling agents who were looking to resurrect the feared six rivals of Indica and the agents of Hangul, Northumbria and Zhang.
She was dressed in an exquisite brown sari with exquisite embroidery as the occasion did not require her to be ready for action. She wore graceful, beautiful sari with grace and sensuality that drove men and women to stare at her with admiration and lust.
Her massive breasts surged against the blouse threatening to pop out in glory. She was satisfied with how stunning she looked. She sat on the couch beside the bed and started once again to read the reports that Madhavi had given her to read the day before.
Ten minutes went by in silence save for the silent rustling of papyrus as Priya reread the report when there was a knock on the door .Priya stood and walked gracefully to the door and opened it to find a beautiful woman draped in a light red sari herself.
The woman called Madhavi was beautiful and hot with big boobs as well thought less big than Priya?s massive ones but they stood firm. She was fair and her silky long hair was tied in a bun. She had black silky hair which fell in a straight form just beyond the curve of her ass
Madhavi had an oval face with a nicely proportioned nose and doe shaped eyes. She looked like a divine apsara. Madhavi was an extremely sharp diplomat and negotiator which is why she was the ambassador of Indica to Germania.
She had requested for a second in command ho would assist her in matters of diplomacy yet would be Indica?s chief field spy along with her in house intelligence chief.
She smiled at Priya and glided into the room gracefully with her hips swaying sensually.
She sat on the couch and beckoned Priya to sit.
Madhavi smiled and said, ?Well, I hope you liked Germania .It is quite beautiful and the people are quite nice. It is a prosperous country with a rich, inclusive culture.?
Priya sat down gracefully and smiled back and said, ?I am sure I will. I appreciate you giving me this opportunity to strengthen relations with Germania and do my diplomatic and intelligence tasks to my King and Queen?s satisfaction and yours too.?
?Good, Now since you have read the reports on our trade and pacts, I will now brief you in a summarized way on the second half of your mission here which is intelligence gathering and countering any group which may seek to take over Germania or the world or try to create conflict between Germania and Indica. The detailed information and instructions will be given subsequently? said Madhavi
Madhavi Continued, ?As you know, after the defeat of the feared six by a coalition of nations, their network of minions was destroyed but it was also known earlier that quite a few mid-tier members had escaped.These mid-tier members would have obviously absorbed the methods of the top tier leadership which was under the feared six and will doubtless try to find a way through dark magic or try to conquer the world on their own.?
Priya nodded in understanding. Madhavi was mostly setting the context but Priya knew these facts and was waiting to absorb the pieces of information which would follow
Madhavi said, ?It is important to understand that right now there could be any no of payers interested in grabbing control. It could be the feared six?s disciples, it could be other nations, it could be another covert organization waiting and watching and intending to jump in at the last moment.
?It is important for Indica to keep a sharp eye and be fluid on situations. While we have always adopted Ahimsa, we also are the land of warriors ?
Thirty minutes passed as Madhavi efficiently gave Priya the gist of her list of possible enemies. They broke for tea and continued the discussion into the beginning of noon.
After Lunch was taken, Madhavi said, ?Now comes a very important part. Your sexual prowess. You will come across mages and sorceresses, spies, mercenaries adept in sexual magic, sexfights and often indulge in sexual combat magic as a strategy in their covert ops along with their tradecraft to defeat opponents although it is obviously used in situations where the combatants will not be disturbed.
?Sexual magic doesn?t leave any trace .Non sexual magic usage can be detected by mages or sorceress or civilians who are empaths .Empaths can view threads of magic hours after it has bene performed who know is part of most covert teams. Empaths can serve as spotters and warn their team members of the presence of mages and sorceresses of various skill levels
?Sexfight challenges issued between people of magical ability is binding on the challenged man or woman and it?s a bloodless way to resolve conflict.Non magical people cant be bound to accept a sexfight challenge but men and women who indulge in sexfighting to satisfy ther sexual needs or power needs usually accept challenges, Sexfight challenges are almost never denied except when it?s a massive critical situation for the challenged where it is a matter of life or death?
Madhavi continued, ?However, if you have the ability to judge people well and study their psyche, you can goad them into a sexual battle and set the stakes in case you want to avoid detection. It can be an effective but selective means to resolve conflict and a sexual defeat ALWAYS rankles for men and women .Spies can adopt sexfights or honey traps as one of the two primary means of obtaining information.?
Madhavi stared at Priya intently and continued ,?You will have to hit the ground running. In a month?s time, you will travel with Vikram and travel into Norwegia as an Indican liaison and work with with Maneka Gupta.
?You will be her apprentice, study foreign relations, trade with Nowegia, adapt your intelligence gathering skills according to the geography. Norwegia has a strong alliance with Indica and a critical ally in the times to come.?
Madhavi smiled at Priya and said, ?Norwegian culture also ensures that pleasure mixes with work well considering Alexsia is a continent wherein most races embrace their sexuality. You will have to practice your tradecraft and sexfight skills the next few days before you can start your mission. I will be your sparring partner and I must warn you that I will not go easy on you.?
Priya felt her loins getting warm, feeling the first tingling yet pleasurable surges of slow lust creeping up from her womanhood. She knew she had to beat Madhavi or at least draw sexfights in the days ahead
Madhavi said, ?I know you have a thing going on with Vikram, my assistant. Vikram is an amazing guy but he is my consort and so you have no chance with him but let me sweeten the deal a bit.If you beat me or at least sexfight me to a draw for two sexfights successively, you can join us for a threesome before I report to Indica for Diwali."
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Priya smiled, her lovely warm smile accentuating her beauty. She knew she was in for a whirlpool of pleasure in the coming days. Nothing was better than mixing learning with raw pleasure. She was sure Madhavi would be a voraciously sexual woman and that added to her to her whole persona of a dedicated, efficient and empathetic woman
Madhavi was known to be a solid mentor to both men and women. She was a good leader who did not look to dominate her subordinates. She was a good teacher who offered wisdom and empathy when needed
The coming days would be very interesting indeed and would herald the beginning of her learning in more ways than one and Priya intended to learn??????????..
Two Months later
Dharamshala , A strategically important province of the Kingdom of Indica
Madhavi walked slowly deliberately taking a moment to savor and marvel at the beauty of the Himalayan region she was in called Dharamshala. Dharamshala was a painter?s delight nestled among jaw dropping beauty of the hills ,streams and valleys of this beautiful Indican province . She walked towards the governor?s retreat Cradled in the laps of the Dhauladhar Hills with the sound of the nearby stream constantly ringing in her ears, the quiet environment and the cool wind soothing her in body, mind and soul.
She was here to meet Ritika ,the wife of the governor and an efficient trader and teacher at the provincial university where boys and girls leant before they were inducted into the administration and military of the entire Northern region of Indica which was massive in geographical size and of great strategic importance
She reached the mansion?s gate, gave the letter to the Gurkha warrior commander who read the letter ,asked her to wait as he turned and walked into the governor?s quarters.
Madhavi Looked around, taking in the stance of the Gurkha regiment guards watching her keenly. The Gurkhas were fierce warriors ,skilled in combat and renowned for their ferocity in battle. They weren?t bloodthirsty .They were just fearless.
Madhavi turned and watched calmly as the Gurkha commander returned and said, ?The lady will see you now.?
He turned back and nodded to a gorgeous Himalayan woman who had just walked down the steps of the quarter and walked towards Madhavi. The woman was gorgeous and wearing a beautiful ,colorful Himalayan attire with a heavily embroidered and brocaded headdress called Taranga.
She was very fair with lovely glowing skin with a button nose with a heart shaped face. She had lovely Lips with a peaked cupid?s bow. Madhavi knew she had long, lustrous black hair.She and she had held it as this woman who was called Rithika had fucked and ridded her husband and Madhavi long into the night during her previous visit .Madhavi had not been frisked this time and it did not bother her as she knew that her movements had been monitored as soon as she arrived in Dharamshala .Ritika had more than a competent defense team comprising of a mage who probably had already ascertained she wasn?t a shape shifter.
Madhavi smiled and took Ritika smiled back at her and lead her into the mansion.
There would be lots to discuss and analyse.Rithika was a trusted confidant of The indican king being his childhood friend .The indican queen had liked her and looked at her as a sister. She was also a skilled strategist and advisor to the King whose name was Abhimanyu on occasions.She was skilled in at least one martial art but mostly she was a sharp ,intelligent woman who had inherited her love for world culture from her diplomat father and that love had developed into a massive store of information that she had accumulated on the various nations in Alexsia
That interest had only blossomed further because of her husband Anirudh she dearly loved and shared a lot of interests on world culture and history .Ritika was also a mid-level sorceress .She however was not proficient in battle magic but had considerable skills in scrying, teleportation and sexual magic.
She however was Indica?s foremost researcher on magical history, research and artifacts
One hour later, Madhavi had bathed, changed into Himalayan attire and was deep in thought sitting on a couch on the verandah looking outward from Ritika?s study room ,her goblet of sherbet lying untouched lying on a table as Ritika
Ritika had delivered news that would probably trigger massive quests, espionage, intrigue and geopolitical machinations
She would need to set out to the Indican capital the next day immediately to confer with King Ahimanyu and Queen Rati Germania and the chief political advisor and spymaster Chanakya to decide the future course of action.
She sighed, knowing the coming days would be intense and would involve detailed planning, gathering of intelligence and counter intelligence.
She was up against unknown foes, forces that would threaten the very peace of the whole of Eurasia and her beloved Indica
She needed to relax and let her tense muscles relax and her mind wander away to rejuvenate herself. She smiled as she thought of the night ahead. Anirudh would be back soon from his tour and then she would doubtless indulge in a night of passion with him and Ritika.
She liked Anirudh having known him as a good friend before he became the Governor. He was a skilled, passionate, virile lover and a gentle yet strong man .She needed a night of carnal lust to relax before the hectic planning and execution of many missions to come would take place??..
To be Continued
A sexfight novel which i like more and i bet that soon enough i will like it even more.
Interesting plot and hot scenes (which i would prefer to last for longer though).
I hope the next chapter to be uploaded soon Jack !
Originally Posted by Giannis-CB
Thank you,you have been very kind.
I am writing a long epic story which is a sorcery,spycraft,geo political intrigues,quests with a large number of characters
,hence some of the chapters might not have detailed sexfights but its part of of the world building and event buildup.
This chapter has sex ,it just doesn't have a sexfight but it provides some background to the intrigue in Eurasia and it sets up mouth watering sexfight battles ahead.
I am surprised at the lack of response to this story.
That makes me appreciate you more.
Jack.
I'm REALLY looking forward how this epic tale will unfold. I'd say your writing has already improved as this part is much clearer and easier to follow than the last one. There is still some confusion with names though as Romanda is called Yvonne in one instance. I would also guess that Bavaria is the capital of Germania and not Alexsia but I could be wrong here.
Keep up the good work.
That's very kind of you.
I will ensure the two issues you pointed out are avoided in the next chapter
Thanks for the support
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