You did it JB57,

Yes it is a VERY well written story ! This is not a surprise.
It comes from you, i did not expect anything less from you. Your unquestionable writing talent is a guarantee that we will like very much any outcome of your pen.

However, here I have a feeling.
I dare to say it.
I sense a surprise. I may be wrong, I know.
But i feel that you will surprise us...
I do not know how .
Let's see if I am right.
One is for sure : either i am right or not, this story is great and i can hardly wait for more !