Thanks for the kind words, everyone. Glad to see people enjoyed something a little out of the ordinary like this. It's a sister story to "Meeting Your Match" (
https://www.hostboard.com/forums/sho...d.php?t=337490), but this one has the app taking a more active role. Yes, there's no sexfighting, but it felt more true to the characters to have their first private encounter remain a titfight/assfight battle as a way to finish what they started in the elevator. The idea of gradually escalating their contests each successive time is a good one. If anyone would like to continue this as a series, please go right ahead!
LOL. Chloe is more of a conservative rule-follower and Melanie is a whatever-it-takes-to-win kind of personality. That was the difference this time. Plus, it was Melanie's coming-out story...
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