Originally Posted by
JB57
Hi Yuri,
This is really good! I think that this is easly one of your best stories. I think that you have a real talent for writing in the first person and you capture the voice of your protagonist amazingly well. I was thinking as I was reading that I don't believe I've ever written a story with a first-person narrator. You've given me the inspiration to try it, at some point.
I was a bit surprised but also happy at the outcome! Hopefully, there is more to come of Gwen and Felicia.
Great work!
JB
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