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    The Club- The Brutal Brunette vs. The Blonde Bombshell

    WARNING: This is an extreme fantasy with absolutely no founding in reality. If extremish violence and/or fatal-finish combat disturb you then do not read further, seriously.

    Before being inducted into The Club officially any woman looking to join must win an "entrance fight" with another hopeful. This fight is the only mandatory death fight a member ever has to engage in (although most members continue to do so).

    The Hopefuls:
    Christina- While this is the brunette's first official death match, it is well known that she is a practised killer. While only Club members can participate in sanctioned death fights Christina has already ended the lives of six women (three of them Club members) in private matches. Like most aspiring members she has chosen to wear very little for her first fight, entering the cage topless with nothing but pantihose and heels.
    Fun Fact: Confident of her abilities Christina already has a list of ten members she plans to see dead within her first year.

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    Carolyn- This blonde bombshell is a complete unknown to club members, chosen (like many members) only for her looks. Despite their ignorance of her history she too has killed before. When in a fight over a man she smothered her opponent for just a little too long. Enjoying the thrill, she has been trying to gain membership ever since.
    Fun Fact: Carolyn is wearing the same black lingerie panties she took off her first opponent.

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    As with all membership try-out fights the crowd got to choose the venue and like most first fights they chose the most brutal one, The Cage. No ref, no rounds, no mercy.

    Christina walked out first when the cage doors open, arms held high as if already victorious. The crowd cheered her on, the men wanting to see what she could do, the women wanting her to win so they might fight her themselves later. As the brunette entered the octagon her door slammed shut behind her.

    Carolyn entered to much less enthusiastic applause. Everyone knew her to be a sacrificial lamb. An pretty first kill so Christina might join the roster. Still, there was a small group of blondes cheering loudly out of solidarity. Her door too slammed shut, those doors wouldn't open again till one of the pugiistas was dead.

    As soon as the door shut Christina walked forward. While uncommon it wasn't unheard of for the fighters to have one last private conversation. Carolyn approached with caution.

    The two stood chest to chest in the center, Christina was the taller and stood strait backed, her hard nipples pointing strait at Carolyn's face. Christina began, "Put up a good fight, whore. I want my first 'official' kill to be memorable."

    "You're not the only killer in here, bitch," was all Carolyn responded with before retreating to her starting place.

    Christina stood, hands on hips, laughing, in the center of the cage as the warning buzzer sounded. The fight would begin in thirty seconds. Instead of returning to her starting place the brunette merely glared down her blonde rival. With no ref to force her back and the starting bell on a timer she would start the fight there.

    After a long half minute the bell rang and the fight was on. Carolyn immediately fell in to a sort of crouch, her hands extended out like claws. This was mostly in preparation for Christina snapping into a charge towards her.

    Christina had gotten used to using overwhelming force that her previous opponents hadn't expected (especially the Club members, who were expecting to fight some inexperienced whore their men had brought home), and went for this tried and true method of attack. Christina slammed into the blonde with enough force to send them both crashing into the cage mesh.

    Even though she was being crushed against the cage wall Carolyn's tactic had not been entirely unsuccessful. As soon as Christina's momentum stopped, Carolyn (with a hand on each of the brunette's perky tits) shoved back with all her might, throwing the brunette off balance and onto her ass with an audible "thump."

    Christina, screaming in rage more than pain, kicked out with her sharper than usual heels, cutting Carolyn's shin with suspicious ease. As the blonde instinctively flinched downward Christina tried to get another kick in, maybe this time in the head or one of her swinging breasts.

    Narrowly knocking the sharpened heel away from skewering her nipple Carolyn dove forward onto her already downed opponent. With Christina's legs wide open like that maybe she could pin her, smother her, and kill her quickly.

    Christina was well versed in grappling, as Carolyn dove between her legs she snapped them shut around the blondes middle, feeling soft tit-flesh squeeze between her thighs. She grinned wickedly at the surprised blonde, one pinned arm being crushed against her side.

    Before Carolyn could recover from the shock of being so expertly trapped, Christina grabbed her free hand by the wrist and held it out of the way. Christina almost started giggling as she used her own free hand (her dominant hand easily held Carolyn's weaker left at an awkward angle) to start battering the blonde's delicate features.

    Christina was used to choking or smothering her opponents, this punching filled her with a sense of power she'd barely felt before. Experiencing the squirming blonde rubbing against her barely covered pussy while she pounded away that pretty face was pure ecstasy. The only thing that came even close was when she was actually fucked from behind by a member while choking his whore wife for the big finish. She hereby decided to always make kills with her fists, smothering could be wasted on non-fatal finishes.

    When Carolyn was fully unconscious the brutal brunette finally released her, the bloodied blonde slipping off her into a small puddle of blood. Christina had hoped for more of a real fight, and was going to take out her disappointment on the blonde.

    Christina stood once again with arms upraised in premature victory. Using her foot to roll Carolyn onto her back. The crowd cheered Christina on as well as yelled encouragements.

    "Fuck her up!" screamed an ecstatic brunette that hated blondes more than anything.

    "Just kill her already!" yelled a bored looking red-head with massive tits, she too had been hoping for a real fight.

    "Get back up and fight, you dumb bitch!" came from one of the blondes who had earlier cheered on Carolyn. Her friend had been killed by Christina and as much as she wanted to kill the brunette herself she wanted even more for Christina's name to never even get to the roster.

    Christina motioned for the crowd to quiet, standing spread legged over the tits up blonde.

    As Christina prepared to make an announcement, Carolyn's eyes flickered open.

    "Ladies and..." Christina's impromptu speech (which was going to detail how anyone looking to take revenge on her should watch closely to what was about to happen to her current foe) was immediately replaced by a shriek of extreme pain as Carolyn's foot collided with her soaked cunt.

    Carolyn's head was pounding and she couldn't see out of one swollen eye but she gamely kicked out again. This time her heel collided with the side of the doubled over brunette's head.

    Christina may have felt like her head just exploded but the pain in her crotch was still somehow worse. She was barely aware that she had hit the mat and was lying not a foot from the woman she had nearly killed a minute ago.

    Carolyn reached over and grabbed one of Christina's round tits. With great effort she hauled herself upright and loomed over the crying woman, steadying herself by digging her nails into cleavage.

    Christina was knocked back to her senses as the blonde's first blow slammed into her nose. Gritting her teeth through the pain she finally took a hand from her swollen and probably bruising cunt and grabbed Carolyn by the throat.

    Carolyn reciprocated by wrapping her own fingers around Christina's neck, putting all her weight into it. Her steadying hand was digging in so hard she was drawing blood.

    Removing her other hand from her own crotch Christina started punching Carolyn in the face again, she screamed despite the hand pressing on her throat, "Just fucking die already!"

    Carolyn let go of the bloody chest she had been gripping and began choking with both hands. Shaking and throttling the brunette beneath her as the punches decreased in severity and frequency.

    As the punches stopped completely, Carolyn let go with one hand to start up with her own. Thudding a fist into a bloody tit before breaking the brunette's nose with a second blow.

    Carolyn stopped when the death buzzer sounded, as much from exhaustion as from understanding that it was over. The cage doors opened and the victory photographer entered followed by the ref who wasn't actually needed during the match itself.

    Carolyn's first victory photo showed her gripping Christina's savaged boob in one hand while raising her other arm triumphantly. The ref then presented Carolyn with Christina's bra (a common souvenir of her victory) before helping her out of the cage. Now a member, Carolyn would benefit from the miraculous Club doctors and be fine within hours.

    Alone in the cage the photographer rolled Christina over, some of the more sadistic members present laughed at the shit that stained the brunette's pantihose.

    Carolyn's name was added to the member roster and within minutes had several dozen fight requests (as well as one death challenge from the brunette that called out earlier).



    The Club takes place in a wholly fictional world. While similar to the real world it does differ in a few important ways.
    -Women outnumber men by a large degree, at least several hundred to one
    -Most men are members of The Club
    -Combat is a common way to let off steam
    -Membership in The Club is required to be allowed to fight to the death legally
    -Any victor of an official death match is given the belongings and bank account of the loser (this is why unofficial death matches are frowned upon, they mess up who gets the loser's stuff)

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    Re: The Club- The Brutal Brunette vs. The Blonde Bombshell

    Excellent tale mcgoll. I look forward to seeing more of your works in this interesting universe.

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    Re: The Club- The Brutal Brunette vs. The Blonde Bombshell

    More please. It's GREAT to see a writer who's writing and posting. Thanks

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    Re: The Club- The Brutal Brunette vs. The Blonde Bombshell

    I've been playing around with this scenario for awhile. I hope to put up a few similar stories in the future, maybe detailing different venues, fighters and varying degrees of brutality.

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    Re: The Club- The Brutal Brunette vs. The Blonde Bombshell

    Outstanding! Love the story concept and the fight description is great. Thank you

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