I think this is a great idea! Please keep going.
This is the first idea i've had for a fight. It's based on a hodge podge of different things and i honestly don't know how to script an actual fight, so the set up is probably the best i can do at the moment. I'll update it with an actual fight if i ever come up with something that works.
CLONE FIGHT DEATH MATCH CONCEPT
Welcome to the Clone Fighting Arena. Here, men and women use an avatar system to fight to the death with light construct clones. These clones are complete anatomical copies of the user; blood bones, organs, and all. The user controls them using an avatar system that transfers their conscious control and sensory input/output of their bodies to their clone. They still feel all the pain as if it were their own body, but don't have to worry about actually dying due to the sensory seperation. The clone bodies are five times more physically resilient than a normal human being. This allows the action to be more like something you would have seen in Professional Wrestling of ancient times; where potentially lethal or crippling techniques like pile drivers, neck and back breakers, and even choking or smothering holds can be taken repeatedly before it's game over for the victim.
As an added bonus, the clones can be anatomically altered or enhanced. These could be anything from animal attributes like fangs and claws, sports related, like morphing hands into boxing gloves, or feet into cleats or high heels, and even more fetish oriented things like lactation and futas. Enhancements are VERY strictly monitored and anyone found cheating becomes a cautionary tale. Both parties must agree to any non-normal enhancements (anything outside of a standard model clone), and in all cases both parties get exact copies of these to keep things fair and square. After all, the house gets 10% on all gambling on these events, and rigged games make for bad business. Almost all fights are nude. It is extremely rare that any of the combatants ask for clothing, what with public nudity no longer being a social taboo. The matches that do involve clothing are usually either cultural based (Trunks in a traditional boxing match) or fetish based (can't kill an opponent until you've stripped him/her completely).
Matches can take place in any kind of venue, from a traditional wrestling or boxing ring, a barn, MMA octogon. Also in keeping with the Pro Wrestling concept, the venue can have extra stipulations like barbwire ring ropes, electrified or heated wall, timed restraints in the corners, etc.
Many matches in the underground circuit carry a bonus caveat: sexual slavery. The loser in these venues spends at least a weekend as the winners personal sex slave, then serves at least a full week in the venue's brothel with all of the looser's earnings being split between the winner and the house.
One of the most popular recent matches to take place in the underground circuit was a combination of several of these things: The Kentucky Durby Match. Two women fighting in a coral started the match dressed as jockeys with a riding crop tied to one hand. Once one woman managed to strip her opponent naked , she could retrieve an injector that could turn her clit into a two foot long horse cock which she could then used to rape the naked opponent to death. Both women were neighbors that were sick of dealing with each other. The straw that broke the proverbial camel's back being an incident involving a lawn jockey. The winner would lay total claim to all land holdings bordering their property. the looser would get thirty days of sexual servitude to the winner and then spend a full six months in the venue's brothel.
First is Charlene: The White Trash Debutant. 27 | 5'10 | 160 lbs. | 34D-28- 37
Her family had owned both estates since just before the start of the civil war. During the big financial crisis of the early 2000's, they had to sell half of it to pay off a huge debt or risk loosing it all. In recent years, her parents made it big in the fight circuit. With both of them retired, Charlene has been keeping the 'family business' afloat with her own wins and now she want's to make her family proud by reclaiming the land her ancestors lost.
Next is Monica: The Petite Powerhouse 25 | 5'04 | 165 lbs. | 40J-30-38
Her family has owned the land she lives on for well over a century now. Monica has been fighting since the day she turned 18 and could enter the circuit with out any possible legal reprecussions. She is a very refined lady and quite the business woman locally as well. Getting the neighboring property would be a huge asset to her family's local clout.
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I think this is a great idea! Please keep going.
We have enough youth; how about a fountain of smart?
The jockey uniforms consisted of a total of six pieces: boots, pants, shirt, coat, bra and panties (the riding crop couldn't be removed) { http://www.m2productions.com.au/imag...-jackets-2.jpg }. Both women's ability to recover from an attack was in direct proportion to her state of undress; the less she had on, the more time it took to recover. So long as they were wearing even one piece of clothing, they could not be crippled and could only be rendered unconscious for a maximum of 5 seconds. Once an article had been removed by her opponent, it would dissolve into dust preventing it from being put on by either woman. The corral was 5ft. tall and consisted of ten rough hewn wooden posts in a circle with four 7ft. long logs between them acting as the fencing rails.
The match was hours in length, so i'll just post the highlights for each half hour. (again, i have no idea how to script a full match)
START TO 0:30 MINUTES
Charlene was very vocal with her taunting of her shorter opponent, racial slurs and fat jokes abounded. She had tried to use her significant reach advantage to keep Monica at a distance using hit & run tactics, but was having a difficult time getting past a very silent Monica's defenses. She eventually got frustrated and went for a big kick which Monica ducked, catching the leg in the air and punishing the blonde with three rapid punches to the crotch. She then dumped the blond on the ground, circled behind her, used her riding crop to strangle Charlene whole wrapping her legs around the other woman's waist to keep her from getting away. Monica almost managed to choke her out, but repeated elbows to her ribs forced her to let Charlene go.
0:30 MINUTES TO 1:00
Monica has Charlene backed up against a fence post in a clinch and is trying to work her over with knee shots when the blond suddenly digs a thumb into the black woman's eye. As Monica recoils in pain, Charlene moves in quick and punts the blinded woman between the legs, grabs her by the hair, and slams her face repeatedly into the fence post. She then slams her face into a rail and drags the howling woman's face along the log from one post to the next. She then grabs Monica around the waist and executes a perfect german suplex, rolls her over without letting go of her waist lock, lifts her to her feet taking a step back and delivers a second one; only this time instead of the back of her head hitting the ground, she is slammed into the corral fence. Just to make sure there would be no interruptions, Charlene steadies the seated woman's head against the fence before ramming her knee three times into her face. She manages to get the Monica's jacket and shirt off, but got greedy going for her bra and got punched in the throat, forcing her to back off.
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1:00 HOUR TO 1:45
Charlene has returned to her original Hit & Run tactics, this time also using her riding crop to whip Monica's now bare arms and torso to weaken her guard. When she thinks she had the advantage, she feints a kick to the legs and goes for a big haymaker. Monica, however, saw it coming and ducked to the outside, coming in quick and burying her knee in the blonde's belly. as Charlene doubles over, Monica grabs her in a headlock and whips herself backwards for a DDT, plowing plowing the blonds head into the ground. She quickly straddles her stunned opponent, grabs two hand fulls of hair and slams Charlene's face into the ground ten times, ending the barrage of blows with a double ax handle blow to the base of her skull. Charlene is helpless as Monica repositions herself again. Grabbing the blonde around the waist straddling her head, the near topless black woman lifts her opponent off the ground upside down, jumps, and lands on her shapely ass, pile driving Charlene's skull into the ground. The blonde convulses for a couple of moments as Monica relieves her of her jacket and pulls her shirt up over the now struggling white woman's tanned arms and head before lifting her off the ground again, this time flipping the disoriented Charlene onto her shoulders and delivering a brutal power bomb. Monica holds the stunned woman's legs apart and rather viciously introduces the heal of her boot to the Charlene's crotch.
When Charlene finally managed to free her arms, she instinctively tried to curl up into a fetal position. As she does, Monica mounts the woman, trapping her arms beneath her, and proceeds to spend a good two minutes straight brutalizing the blonde with punches, skull slamming, eye gouging, and choking. She finishes her vicious barrage by lifting lifting up her own bra, letting her tits fall out and smothering Charlene unconscious. After shoving her tits back into her bra, Monica then proceeds to relieve Charlene of her boots pants and even her panties despite the blonde waking up and trying to kick her away.
1:45 to 3:00
When Charlene got back to her feet, Monica expected more of the same Hit & Run tactics again, instead, the irate blonde charged and tackled her to the grown, resulting in a good thirty minutes of the two rolling around on the ground; at first just punching, kicking, biting, clawing, your basic crazed catfight stuff, but then escalating to a back and forth of applying, escaping, and reversing submission and choke holds. The stalemate ended when Charlene managed to lock in a Triangle choke and body scissors. Once she was certain Monica was knocked out, she ripped off the black woman's bra, slid back to sit on her thighs, applied a scissor hold to her legs, crossed her hands behind her back, grabbing her wrists to restrain her. She then proceeded to spend the next five minutes using the just waking up woman's tits as chew toys.
When Monica starts getting one of her hands free, Charlene quickly scoots up into a full mount so she can use her legs to keep the black woman's arms trapped long enough to use her riding crop to choke her out again. The blond is sporting a very smug grin as she rolls up Monica into a jack knife school girl pin, grabs her by the hair and proceeds to spend the next twenty minutes humping out three good orgasms on the black woman's face. "Get used to the view whore, you'll be seeing it every day for the next 7 months!" she says as she alternates between humping and crotch smothering in order to keep Monica too disoriented to escape. She smothers out Monica on her last orgasm, but gets up a bit too soon and only manages to strip her of her boots and pants before the black woman forces her to retreat.
3:00 HOUR TO FINALE
Monica is just getting to her feet when Charlene, still a bit wobbly from her recent orgasms tries to send them back to the ground, the black woman manages to stay on their feet and the two grapple a bit before Monica gains the upper hand with twisting arm bar. she wrenches the limb a few times, swinging Charlene in a circle before suddenly yanking her into a bear hug, lifting her off her feet and slamming her naked twat across her thigh. Monica repeats this a second time, grinning at the groans of discomfort it elicits, before lifting the blonde onto her shoulder and carrying her over to the fence. She gives Charlene one more atomic drop to keep her mind on something other than fighting back before lifting her back onto her shoulder, turning around, and charging across to the opposite side of the corral to ram the blonde's back into the post.
Monica steps to the side, allowing Charlene to stumble forward a bit, her hands on her back, before lifting her up again and delivering a back breaker. Instead of simply releasing her, she pushed down on her chin and knees, bending her spine across her thigh. After forcing Charlene to suffer a bit, she simply dumps her off her leg to let her roll around trying to massage the pain away, only to jump up and land ass first on her lower back. With her hands trapped behind her, Charlene is helpless as Monica grabs two handfulls of blond hair and slams her face into the ground until she stops moving. Wasting no time, she rips off Charlene's shirt, but not her bra, opting instead to lift her up off the ground and carry her to the fence. she then drops places her astride the top rail facing a post, reaches between the top and third rail to grab both legs, and just as Charlene starts coming back around, drags her naked crotch across the log. Charlene is howling the entire trip and it isn't over for her yet. As they reach the other post, Monica releases hr outside leg, grabs her by the hip and plows her the other way for a return trip. The pain is so intense that Charlene blacks out and is dropped unceremoniously back into the corral where Monica easily strips off the woman's bra.
With no garments left, Charlene can now be crippled, but can't be executed unless by means of the earlier stipulation. She's brought back to reality by Monica dislocating her shoulder; wrenching the arm a great deal longer than needed to tear cartilage and sinew, just to hear the blonde scream. Releasing the arm, she punches the blonde as a bit of a distraction before grabbing her other arm and after a bit of struggling, gives her a matching set of dislocated shoulders. After releasing the arm she circles the woman with an evil grin, patting her hand with the riding crop. "Now it's time to teach you some manners" she says before spending the next 2 minutes chasing her around the corral, whipping and kicking the crippled woman, covering her in welts and bruises.
Eventually she decides to finish things, starting with a brutal series of stomps to her hip until she's rewarded with the sound of the blond's pelvic bone cracking. Next she strolls over to the nearest corral post, touching the top and then making the rounds ding the same to all ten which teleports the injector into her hand. Monica pulls the front of her panties down, injects herself, and gasps from the intense sensation of her already erect clit turning into an enormous horse cock in only a few seconds. Pulling off her panties and tossing them to the side to dissolve in mid-air, she strolls to the helpless and terrified blonde. Charlene struggles weakly, trying to avoid the inevitable, but this only manages to annoy Monica who promptly backhands her, rolls her face down, lifts her hips up off the ground and forces the enormous flared head of her new phallus into the blonde's already badly damaged cunt. With one hand lifting Charlene's hips up off the ground and another on the back of her head, shoving her face into the ground, Monica begins ruthlessly thrusting more and more of her equine appendage into the sobbing woman's vaginal canal while chanting "Face down, ass, up, that's the way i like to fuck!". The fractured pelvis made forcing her way into Charlene's womb much easier, and with that bit of resistance no longer an issue, she began thrusting even harder, eventually rupturing her womb and ramming into her chest cavity. By now, the blonde had gone from screaming to whimpering, to now just gurgling, drooling, and coughing up blood. The dying blonde's last moments of cognitive awareness was Monica's orgasm, which unleashed a gallon of cum from her cock directly into the blonde's torso, covering her ruptured organs and giving her the appearance of being 9 months pregnant.
With her opponent limp and dead beneath her, a grinning Monica stood up, lifting the impaled blond off of the ground, pulling her head up by a handfull of hair, and proceeded to gallop around the corral as if she were a kid riding those wooden toy horse from the 1900's, leaving a trail of blood and cum in her wake.
EPILOGUE
Monica forced Charlene to watch her family's mansion torn down (to make way for the dozen houses she's building as rental properties) on the first day of personal slavery, then had the blonde service the entire demo team and their significant others as a bonus to them for a job well done. On the last day of her month of servitude, most of which was spent eating Monica's boyfriend's cum out of the black woman's ass (she wasn't kidding when she said that's the way she likes to fuck) Charlene was taken to a stable where she was forced to fuck half a dozen horses on camera; the money Monica made off the sales of the video paid for the majority of the rental homes' construction costs.
After spending six months of turning tricks at the brothel (with Monica getting a daily rug munching), Charlene moved into one of her own rental properties and would spend the next year brutally beating the stuffing out of every one of her opponents in order to get regain face. She eventually managed to get a rematch against Monica (standard match, nothing gimmicky) only to end up loosing to her a second time.
really liking the story! not a traditional format, but it's fast and sweet in that way. the action's long enough to not feel like it's missing much either. love the scifi factor to really make some wild and violent and weird matches
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