Idea: Double Love Triangle / Four-way Rivalry

So here's an idea I've had for a while for a true 'Four-way' rivalry with maximum sexual tension and anger/lust. Let's hope I can properly explain this double Love Triangle without things getting too confusing.

The setup is that we have four women. For simplicity sake, we'll refer to them as Alice, Beth, Claire and Daphne. Alice and Beth are married and the same is true of Claire and Daphne. Both couples are going through some relationship problems, sexual tension is building and the sex between them is getting more aggressive.

At the same time, Alice has started an affair with Claire and Beth has started an affair with Daphne, so as to spite their spouses, which probably involves quite a bit of angry sex. Of course, none of the women can keep things a secret for long and when the true comes out, intense rivalries set in for all parties. Alice feels intense hate for her wife Beth for going behind her back, feels an intense rivalry for Daphne for having sex with her wife and has already been developing a rivalry with Claire. The other three women feel the same towards their respective wife, adulterer and mistress.

And this would probably all blow up in an extreme four-way sexfight with all four women trying to out-fuck each other. How it all ends it anyone's guess. Maybe they end up in some twisted polyamorous relationship based on mutual hate/lust?

That sounds like a great idea and could be the subject of a multi-chapter epic story.

Yeah, this feels like it'd need a significant amount of setup. Also, fairly complicated to write. I think I remember JB57 writing something kind of similar?

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Originally Posted by Hemmie

Yeah, this feels like it'd need a significant amount of setup. Also, fairly complicated to write. I think I remember JB57 writing something kind of similar?

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I know JB57 has done a few four-person fights, though I believe all of them were more 2-on-2 fights rather than an actual 4-way fight. I think the closest I've seen to this idea was Morton's Y Fight story. That one definitely had something close to a four-way rivalry, with each woman feeling a rivalry with each of the others, but even that one never quite fully devolved into a full-on free-for-all.

Hay

What if after all four hot women have their affairs with each others
mate and they get pack to their original partner. All four women STILL
have some unresolved issues or just - blame for the whole thing.

Alice and Beth work together and want to tit/sex fuck fight Clair and Daphne,
and they want to tit/sex fuck fight them too.

So now it's two against two.
Half way though this fuck fight, they find themselves at a stand still or stalemate.
Alice and Beth blame one another as Clair and Daphne blame one another as well.

Partners turn on one another, as they seam to tit/sex fuck fight their own partner.
After a while, another stalemate - now.
Not giving a shit any more who their partner is - it becomes every hot woman for
her self. Maybe forming a four hot woman rolling catball.

Love four-way rivalry's.

Try this spin on this story idea.

Alice and Beth are both curvy middle age women, who are bi-sexual.
Both are milf's or hot middle age cougars out for some young stuff.

Alice befriends Claire, a innocent ne'er-do-well hot curvy young woman.
And Beth befriends Daphne, also a innocent ne'er-do-well hot curvy young woman to.

Alice and Beth introduce their new friends to the joy of woman to woman sex - angry mad sex.

Some where, some how Alice meets Beth. And of course, Claire meets Daphne as well.
Alice and Beth are rival cougars, and find out about the others new curvy hot young friend, and
are jealous. As are the younger women of the others older curvy hot friend - and are jealous too.

Alice and Beth pit Claire and Daphne against one another in a tit/cunt fuck fight. Watching them fight,
both older curvy hot women start their own fuck fight. Now two tit/sex fuck fights are going on side by side.
And a little while later Alice and Beth while fuck fighting bump into Claire and Daphne fuck fighting.

Now all four curvy hot women are fighting. During all of this, the women switch up partners - not realizing it.
Alice tit/sex fights Daphne, and Beth tit/sex fights Claire now.
What the hell, all four women might get so turned on and out of their minds with all of this angry sex, that again
not realizing it. Start to fuck fighting their own partner - out of their minds fucking.

At one point it's a free for all, a last woman standing, tit/sex fuck orgy till all four pass out into one four woman pile.
With no one caring who won.
And when they wake up. form a daisy chain 6969.
Now Alice and Daphne are a couple as is Beth and Claire. Shit, the two older women might hook up. And the two younger
women might hook up

Down the road, the older women team up to fuck fight the younger women. Lets hope so lol

Had some time to kill - cold here.

I think the most basic question here is: How much realism should the idea have?

I feel that you've given a good standpoint on how we men, or a sex oriented woman would imagine the default setting, in which case it's something to entertain us. Unfortunately that's also something from the '90s, when the character trait of an LGBT person was just that, being LGBT. Two name 2 real life couples, designated Alice and co., one of the couples (at the time life partners) made headlines by suing a pediatrician for not treating their adopted daughter, citing personal belief as a reason. Part of the story is, that they've been the only open lesbian couple in town, accepted only because they were white, like the rest of the town, and that the couple know the doctor was a devout Christian, but they chose her anyway for her experience.

The other couple made headlines for an even nastier affair, as same sex marriage has just recently been made legal countrywide, a Texan native sued her ex wife for sole custody of their child, being the birth mother and in the full knowledge that in the Lone Star state such a marriage was illegal. I'm trying to allude here to the fact that characters are just as interesting for who they are, and not what they are, and mutual animosity can very well come from things that could happen to any of us. That way, scenarios are way easier, and not facilitate a fantasy within a fantasy, when people of all orientations and creed are on this very board, but these are just my mere two cents.

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Originally Posted by catfightlover40

I think the most basic question here is: How much realism should the idea have?

I feel that you've given a good standpoint on how we men, or a sex oriented woman would imagine the default setting, in which case it's something to entertain us. Unfortunately that's also something from the '90s, when the character trait of an LGBT person was just that, being LGBT. Two name 2 real life couples, designated Alice and co., one of the couples (at the time life partners) made headlines by suing a pediatrician for not treating their adopted daughter, citing personal belief as a reason. Part of the story is, that they've been the only open lesbian couple in town, accepted only because they were white, like the rest of the town, and that the couple know the doctor was a devout Christian, but they chose her anyway for her experience.

The other couple made headlines for an even nastier affair, as same sex marriage has just recently been made legal countrywide, a Texan native sued her ex wife for sole custody of their child, being the birth mother and in the full knowledge that in the Lone Star state such a marriage was illegal. I'm trying to allude here to the fact that characters are just as interesting for who they are, and not what they are, and mutual animosity can very well come from things that could happen to any of us. That way, scenarios are way easier, and not facilitate a fantasy within a fantasy, when people of all orientations and creed are on this very board, but these are just my mere two cents.

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While I certainly agree with your sentiment, particularly the unfortunate tendency to treat 'being gay' as somehow being their sole character trait, I feel like you may be over-complicating things. Ideas like these are just basic outlines for the events of a story, and there's no reason why these stories can't have well-thought, fleshed out and nuanced characters that just happen to include 'sexual rivalry' as one of many character traits. If anything, that makes any sexual encounters more interesting because the author has built up investment for the readers, given them a reason to really care about the participants as actual people.

I guess my point is that I don't think you need to create so-called 'realistic scenarios' for sexfights to have interesting characters. You just need to write them as interesting and likable characters, and not just some sexual automatons to play out a fantasy.

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Originally Posted by Adrock

While I certainly agree with your sentiment, particularly the unfortunate tendency to treat 'being gay' as somehow being their sole character trait, I feel like you may be over-complicating things. Ideas like these are just basic outlines for the events of a story, and there's no reason why these stories can't have well-thought, fleshed out and nuanced characters that just happen to include 'sexual rivalry' as one of many character traits. If anything, that makes any sexual encounters more interesting because the author has built up investment for the readers, given them a reason to really care about the participants as actual people.

I guess my point is that I don't think you need to create so-called 'realistic scenarios' for sexfights to have interesting characters. You just need to write them as interesting and likable characters, and not just some sexual automatons to play out a fantasy.

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I do certainly agree, I'm not pushing for hyperrealism or anything, for that matter. There are some characters I can identify with to the level of "what would I do in their place?" and others I totally can't but still have to, hence my writer persona and opinions are different from my personal ones. Still, what I can't really say publicly on other forums is that within heterosexuality, there's plenty a fetish to choose from, and it would be less fortunate, like say, compare my username derived from gratification of female fights as being the cornerstone to who I am instead of being a part of what I am.

Older or young, average, thinner or more curvy, if it's more than just about sexuality as a drive, it comes down to personality, and being attracted or unable to being monogamous. Take for instance just how many alleged female cheaters on Ashley Madison were fake, despite women not being less likely to commit adultery and more likely retaining decades of secreted backchannels established at a time when we expected them to be nothing short of holy. Since they exist (and unlike a male fantasy they have to, otherwise male escorts wouldn't be an industry) it admittedly does peak my literary interest. Just what is or was the female version of Fire Island?

Can two people, accustomed to live a life of secrecy, easily adapt to more openness? (Again, this is a question of concern to us as well, since Fifty Shades propelled BDSM into the mainstream, sexfight won't be far behind) How deep a rift can it drive between an older and a younger lover? Can the older women become sugar mommies? Will the image of the Madonna/whore be an issue? Can affection turn into overbearing to the point of mothering, or be rejected by someone as a conscientious objector to the "duty of progeny"? Sorry, I ran off again, I hope I could make a point. When I introduced myself in the newbie thread, I did mention wanting to give literary representation as authentic as possible. I'm far from having expertise on writing sexual combat, but creating conflict... way easier. My idea would be that one of the older ladies (if the older/younger pairing stays) has remained in the commune and is a practicing anarcho-syndicalist, while the other became a yuppie, married into an influential family and agreed to an open marriage. The younger women, one of them is an aspiring actress living out of her car, while the fourth decides to become a nun after a bad breakup. The actress, much like in a Jackie Collins or Nora Roberts book becomes corrupted by the offered wealth, while the novitia breaks her vows to join the hippie professor.

The four meet at a poetry recital and that's how long I got.

For a while I doubted between a love triangle and what I would call a love square. Eventually I went for the latter.

Here is my take on the idea, which Anubisx, Avato and Defeated worked out so well: Cheetah - New Sexfight Story

@adrock, thanks for the inspiration!