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Just GREAT, Rags! What more can I say?
A.P.
Re: Tangle in Tuscany Part 3
Another great chapter! If you need help with Spanish, just write me. I suck at English, but I'm great at Spanish :D
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apenman
Just GREAT, Rags! What more can I say?
A.P.
Thanks my friend, very appreciated!
(Although guess I won't feel entirely in the clear until brother Augs pronounces himself contented with the status of boob comparisons in this episode! :D)
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Anubisx
Another great chapter! If you need help with Spanish, just write me. I suck at English, but I'm great at Spanish :D
Anubis,
Thanks and I may take you up on that offer in future! I've mainly been using urban slang dictionary and translate functions as I'm not trying to do anything complex, just use the correct terms for boobs,whore etc!! But, I have little idea if the word I select might sound odd or out of context to native speakers. Your English DOES NOT suck btw!
Rags
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Ragnar0k
Thanks my friend, very appreciated!
(Although guess I won't feel entirely in the clear until brother Augs pronounces himself contented with the status of boob comparisons in this episode! :D)
Yes, I noticed that he hasn't commented yet. Could it be that he's holding out for a more, (pardon the wordplay), fulsome chapter? Come on, Rags, you're making us long-winded "mofos' look bad. :)
Just kidding. I don't really mind.
A.P.
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apenman
Yes, I noticed that he hasn't commented yet. Could it be that he's holding out for a more, (pardon the wordplay), fulsome chapter? Come on, Rags, you're making us long-winded "mofos' look bad. :)
Just kidding. I don't really mind.
A.P.
Aww, did you guys miss me? :p
For your information, I was waiting for the actual chapter. Thought that commenting on a mere teaser-trailer would've been a tad... below me, n'est-ce pas? :cool:
(No, seriously, great chapter! Looks like Victoria's big, succulent Spanish tetonas were simply too much for Vanessa's very nice but ever-so-slightly lesser pair - at least in this initial contact. You've got my seal of approval, comrade Rags.)
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I think Augur wanted to say "tetazas" (big tits); "tetonas" means "busty women" :P
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MISTER RAGS
Ya know I've never really been a big breasts man. Big breasts are nice, but I like women who are tall and athletic, with lovely unique faces and a bodacious ass! Ain't nothing like a tall wild Amazon to make me lose my dignity! But I have to admit, the big breasts battle between Victoria and Vanessa is hot and the behind the scenes psychological skirmishes between their benefactors is spicing this up nicely. I love a smart-ass, shit-talking woman and Gina looks like a cunning, slick-tongued, mind-fucking Diva. This is working for me...bring on part four!!!!!!
MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU!
Shak
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Anubisx
I think Augur wanted to say "tetazas" (big tits); "tetonas" means "busty women" :P
?Joder! Muchas gracias, Anubisx.
(I've never actually studied Spanish, just went with a word I'd come across on some, uh, video sites. Close enough, I guess... :D)
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Augur
?Joder! Muchas gracias, Anubisx.
(I've never actually studied Spanish, just went with a word I'd come across on some, uh, video sites. Close enough, I guess... :D)
See - Anubis comes to the party with constructive comments and a glossary of useful words, other regular subscribers to this thread better take note! :D
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MISTER RAGS
Ya know I've never really been a big breasts man. Big breasts are nice, but I like women who are tall and athletic, with lovely unique faces and a bodacious ass! Ain't nothing like a tall wild Amazon to make me lose my dignity! But I have to admit, the big breasts battle between Victoria and Vanessa is hot and the behind the scenes psychological skirmishes between their benefactors is spicing this up nicely. I love a smart-ass, shit-talking woman and Gina looks like a cunning, slick-tongued, mind-fucking Diva. This is working for me...bring on part four!!!!!!
MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU!
Shak
Shak,
Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you're enjoying the psychological stuff as I love it too; and you may be pleased to hear Gina's going to get her own story as well!
I don't disagree with you on the breast stuff but I think its easier to describe some of the action when they are of a size (plus it seems to be what more of the public wants these days).
Rags
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Aww, did you guys miss me? :p
For your information, I was waiting for the actual chapter. Thought that commenting on a mere teaser-trailer would've been a tad... below me, n'est-ce pas? :cool:
(No, seriously, great chapter! Looks like Victoria's big, succulent Spanish tetonas were simply too much for Vanessa's very nice but ever-so-slightly lesser pair - at least in this initial contact. You've got my seal of approval, comrade Rags.)
Thanks, and of course we always miss you when you're not here, especially to stamp the Augur seal of approval, chuckle :cool: And I tried hard to put some qualitative stuff into the descriptions as I don't always like to give one gal too much of a 'natural' advantage. As I'd missed the opportunity at the start, my brainwave was to let Gina do a 3rd person comparison of both ladies tetazas which I though worked even better than putting the job in the hands of the narrator.
Rags
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apenman
Yes, I noticed that he hasn't commented yet. Could it be that he's holding out for a more, (pardon the wordplay), fulsome chapter? Come on, Rags, you're making us long-winded "mofos' look bad. :)
Just kidding. I don't really mind.
A.P.
lol - at least his comments were suitably fulsome when they finally arrived.
Oh, and on the length thing, do remember that I'm writing this piece for an illustrated book, so need to keep the words fairly lean and pared down or the writing will swamp the illustrations. I normally do 1 - 2 page of literature per page of illustrations. That's the main reason I'm keeping it short, although another advantage is the great feedback I'm getting from you guys along the way! Like now thanks to Anubis I know the difference between tetazas and tetonas and it'll be goin' in the next part for sure!
R