Sory rewriting
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Sory rewriting
Hello, and welcome.
To start things off, your fanfiction actually partially fills a void left by stories not being created about this lore. That being said, while I'm thanking you for the offer, I'll pass on trying it, my brother played it and a lot of MOBA players have a short fuse. Wonderful material for catfights, not so much for teamwork.
As for the language, it's actually very close to Vernacular American English, so if you hadn't brought it up, I'd just thought the author is using everyday text.