DARKER SHADES OF BLACK

[DARKsyde]

On warm summer's eve, beneath the streets of what used to be East L.A. craetures began to arise in shadow's. Not known what there purpose or desire was, These Creatures began there forgooten mission.In search of food,and Shelter after the Necular fall out back in 2003 men,weman, and children moved across the baren land. In despite of everything that was lost, There had emerged some survivors. A small community of travlers in search of the same destiny had came together. the destiny of there lives was surly to be comprimsed.

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Darkness souround's you from all point's from beyond.From child birth to even death. G.O.L

[DARKsyde]

Thinking of what they as a community would do next, The travelers, Held long droopy faces as if they had no hope in there future. What would become of them many thought. So as darkness sorrunded them and they grow drowery. The discoverd that at night things began to change, Thing's began to morph into diffrent objects some not of this world......

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Darkness souround's you from all point's from beyond.From child birth to even death. G.O.L

[Katsuya]

Is there anymore?

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Can you apply the penal-code to demons?

[DARKsyde]

This is only the prelude to what's to come. I am working on what's coming next. Just give it time. I am just looking for some advise on what I have already wrote.So what do you think thus far?

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Darkness souround's you from all point's from beyond.From child birth to even death. G.O.L

[Katsuya]

I think yore futuristic story sounds vary promising and I'd like to see more. So come on!, and also check out my first story post

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Can you apply the penal-code to demons?

[This message has been edited by Katsuya (edited January 24, 2002).]

[The Reverend Dark Angel]

Your story holds a lot of promise; but you need to be careful of your wording and be even more careful of not revealing too much too fast. Always remember that Preludes or Prologues are trailers to movies, they give you a glimpse. But as some trailers do, they give away the entire plot and the rest of the movie just seems empty.

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It astounds me that everyone wants the greatest, but only a few are willing to reach for it.

SPYDER'S TALES AND OTHER FAN FIC

[DARKsyde]

Rev I appreciate some of the advise you have given to me. So here is what I have done. I have changed the whole intire plot and I have started from the begining once agian. So what i am doing is working on the story and when it is finished I will save it to a disk and upload it here later. The name has not changed, just some of the charcters and the plot.

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Darkness souround's you from all point's from beyond.From child birth to even death. G.O.L

[Suture-Chan]

This needs to be finished

[DARKsSydes]

BACK in the Saddle agian, But I can't access my other name DARKsyde. My new name is DARKsSydes. But as far as the story I just need to re start the damn thing.