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August 10th, 2002, 09:50 PM
#1
moderator
Standing on the cresent moon
gazing at a certain star
a star unlike the others that accrue
The earth below is spinning so
you'd not believe how beautiful
it all appears from this guys point of view!
Carried on celestial winds
I'm moving toward the light
from that star so far out of my reach
and as I race through velvet space
dreaming of a face to face
it's an interstellar closing of the breach!
The distance I'll be travelin'
may not get me all that far
but so long as I am closer I'll decree
I've gotta do what I've gotta do
proclaiming, thus, my aim is true
as I swiftly journey 'cross the galaxy!
[img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img] [img]wink.gif[/img]
Gus Danger
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August 11th, 2002, 12:15 AM
#2
Inactive Member
Pretty cool Gus. The more I read the braver I am getting to come up with something.
It's a nice piece.
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August 11th, 2002, 12:35 PM
#3
Inactive Member
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Gus, That is a very beautiful poem.I can see the [img]graemlins/idea.gif[/img] and [img]graemlins/star.gif[/img] 's are shining down on you.
Keep them coming Gus,I think you're a hit. [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img]
Have a wonderful day!
Team Cat1
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August 11th, 2002, 04:10 PM
#4
moderator
charlie c. I'm looking forward to hearing some rhymin' from you!
TeamCat1 you can do it too! You've done it before and I wanna hear more!
I almost called it 'star-gazer's day-dream' [img]graemlins/thumbs_down.gif[/img]
Thanks a lot my friends,
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GD
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August 11th, 2002, 08:59 PM
#5
Inactive Member
Great job Gus! [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img] - NYJ -
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August 16th, 2002, 02:15 AM
#6
Inactive Member
That was Way Cool!
I like the title you did pick.
Keep the creativity coming Gus! [img]graemlins/star.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/star.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img]
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August 16th, 2002, 03:47 PM
#7
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Thanks very much NewYorkJettster [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img] and CCfan [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img]
U2R2nice2Bsure!!!
[img]redface.gif[/img] GD
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August 17th, 2002, 12:08 PM
#8
Inactive Member
Your very welcome Gus! - NYJ - [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img]
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