" Open You'r Heart "

[Jade Stone 13]

Originally posted by famveronica:
I love it LOVE it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great poem......... Go girl [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img] [img]smile.gif[/img] [img]smile.gif[/img]
Soon i will put mine on the board... Cuz i don't have the time right now.......

<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Thanks!
I have notebooks full of um..
I`ll post more later. AND they ALL are protected
(copy rights) So???? [img]rolleyes.gif[/img]

[famveronica]

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[furicchia blu]

I liked your poem, thanks for sharing!

[4Jettheads]

JD13, post some of your other work when ya get time. I like the symbolism. It almosts borderlines ambiguity in its context. I've got around 50 or 60 original works. Some serious, some for fun and all to amuse the reader. Ok, Ronnie blue-eyes, you too. Farmboy is inquisitive. How people write reflects directly on their inner person.

[4Jettheads]

OOPS, that shoulda come out JS13, not JD.

[famveronica]

EROTIC TEARS


I want to **** your dampened eyes
And kiss your grief away
But there is beauty in your searing tears


Your lips so cold
Your skin, unresponsive
your dark eyes guard a mind
Full of thoughts that are pensive

your mournful sobs rack
Your body with misery
But fill mine
With a strange ecstasy

I seek comfort
In your exquisite sorrow
And i wonder if you.....................
Will be here tomorrow


Veronica

Your mournful sobs rack
Your body with misery

[gus danger]

Jade [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img] and Veronica [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img]
You gals both write very well.
Thanks for sharing!
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Gus

[famveronica]

Thankyou Gus, but why was kiss censored out?

[gus danger]

Another auto-censor malfunction I presume Veronica.

I don't think kiss is usually censored but you just don't never know nothing for sure!

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GD

[Jade Stone 13]

Originally posted by gus danger:
Jade [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img] and Veronica [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img]
You gals both write very well.
Thanks for sharing!
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Gus

<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Thank you love!!

So,how are YOU on this beautiful friday morning?

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