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Thread: Umm, Ok Brief summary of my book!

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    OOoooh, nice job Sophia. I especially like your characters' names. I always tell my kids that the names should be chosen carefully because they are so important as to whether the audience can relate to the characters and the story. I, for one, would not go near "the old Johnson place!" lol Great beginning - can't wait to hear more, and see images of the characters too... Awesome!

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    I don't know if I will actually post all of my book (chapter by chapter) It will depend on if any one would read what I write.

    So anyways all dolls come with books (Doll pics will come later!) but here is a breif summary:

    Brief Intro:
    Nicole Storm is a 10 year old girl growing up in the mid- sixties, in the new gaslight addition. She lives with her Mother, Father, and older brother, Martian. Nicoles biggest dream is to become a spy just like, April Dancer. But when she discovers a big mystery in the old Johnson house, strange things start happening. Nicole is starting to belive that the house is haunted. With the help of her best friend Mary, will she be able to solve the biggest mystery ever, and will she ever figure out why who ever goes into that house dissapears, before it's to late.

    ETA: Let me know what you think. Thanks!

    <font color="#33CCCC" size="1">[ November 24, 2006 12:09 AM: Message edited by: simplysophia ]</font>

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    sounds great!!!!

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    Wow. Mabey you could make it into a book.

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    Very intriguing! Wants you to dive deeper into the mystery story to find out what is happening to the people. [img]cool.gif[/img]

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    Thanks! I am working on it, and I'm going to possibly be done with the first chapter soon.

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    Great! Which doll are you planning to use?

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    Originally posted by PrincessRuthie(Laura):
    Great! Which doll are you planning to use?
    <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">The doll is a surpise!

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