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September 26th, 2000, 11:58 PM
#11
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Gah! What a good idea. We should start recording this stuff, and turn it into a publisher, see if they could publish it under the name Stranger Than Paradise. What a great thing. I know a LOT of people that i would tell "you MUST buy this book" and they would.
oh, and i think that should be "most clever" not cleverest. heh. but i still like the alliteration...
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"What about him? What are you doing with him?"
"What you should be doing with me..."
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September 27th, 2000, 03:03 AM
#12
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Bran, you should put these in a book or something. I bet they tell a story if you put them in the right order. Correct?
Oz, I usually don't like rhyming poetry that was written after 1850, but there are exceptions and you poem is one. I think "this college existence is kind of a drain" is vague and a little clunky, but the rest of it works just fine. Maybe you and Bran should put out a book together. Dueling poets of love and misery? I'd read it.
take care
---jones
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September 27th, 2000, 04:44 AM
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September 27th, 2000, 05:10 PM
#14
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<G> I save all mine... for years and years, all the way back to the disgustingly-morbid-I-recently-apologized-to-my-old-english-teacher-for-making-him-read-them shit from junior high and high school. And I know Necro does the same thing cuz she's more of a packrat than I am. I think it's a good idea, too, as well as the "stranger than paradise" title, if only because it's so amazingly appropriate in a weird sort of way.
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September 28th, 2000, 09:17 AM
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September 28th, 2000, 03:35 PM
#16
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September 28th, 2000, 08:10 PM
#17
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Thank you, bunny.
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The one called "brain" and "brandiflakes" and....
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When shall I hold my passion for you?
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September 29th, 2000, 04:23 PM
#18
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I like those Bran.. not my normal style of poetry... I have to focus on them a bit more... and it's a slower beat... for when the signifigance of the words sinks in... and that can be a good thing. Good job hun!
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October 3rd, 2000, 02:00 AM
#19
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Black Sunshine
A dark, black ray of sunshine
Walks before my vision of
Calm and numb living.
Splitting the gathering clouds and
Opening my eyes
To the beyond thinking of
Friends and loves.
I look now upon the world
In different light of how to
Move and feel.
Instead of eclipse, I add
Your ray into this
New sky of my life and feelings.
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