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    Gah! What a good idea. We should start recording this stuff, and turn it into a publisher, see if they could publish it under the name Stranger Than Paradise. What a great thing. I know a LOT of people that i would tell "you MUST buy this book" and they would.

    oh, and i think that should be "most clever" not cleverest. heh. but i still like the alliteration...

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    Bran, you should put these in a book or something. I bet they tell a story if you put them in the right order. Correct?

    Oz, I usually don't like rhyming poetry that was written after 1850, but there are exceptions and you poem is one. I think "this college existence is kind of a drain" is vague and a little clunky, but the rest of it works just fine. Maybe you and Bran should put out a book together. Dueling poets of love and misery? I'd read it.

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    Who said I had good grammer? biggrin

    My poems are all saved already. Are other people saving theirs?

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    The one called "brain" and "brandiflakes" and....
    I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
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    "I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality"-Savage Garden

    When shall I hold my passion for you?

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    <G> I save all mine... for years and years, all the way back to the disgustingly-morbid-I-recently-apologized-to-my-old-english-teacher-for-making-him-read-them shit from junior high and high school. And I know Necro does the same thing cuz she's more of a packrat than I am. I think it's a good idea, too, as well as the "stranger than paradise" title, if only because it's so amazingly appropriate in a weird sort of way. smile

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    I really loved *Darkness I Dream*the images that this poem drew forth made me cry!! imu2



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    I would really love to do a book. That title would be great. smile

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    I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
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    "I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality"-Savage Garden

    When shall I hold my passion for you?

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    Thank you, bunny.

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    Branflakes, the ninja lesbian milk getter bunny protecting flirt.
    The one called "brain" and "brandiflakes" and....
    I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
    Life is what you make it.
    "I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality"-Savage Garden

    When shall I hold my passion for you?

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    I like those Bran.. not my normal style of poetry... I have to focus on them a bit more... and it's a slower beat... for when the signifigance of the words sinks in... and that can be a good thing. Good job hun! smile

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    Black Sunshine

    A dark, black ray of sunshine
    Walks before my vision of
    Calm and numb living.
    Splitting the gathering clouds and
    Opening my eyes
    To the beyond thinking of
    Friends and loves.
    I look now upon the world
    In different light of how to
    Move and feel.
    Instead of eclipse, I add
    Your ray into this
    New sky of my life and feelings.

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