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    Inactive Member *Leo the Lioness*'s Avatar
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    i'm not particularly proud of this one, but here goes......

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    You look for an answer in his voice
    Search yourself for the truth
    but it's covered up in roses and dreams,
    music and laughter and lies

    Afraid of asking the question because
    the answer might mean the end
    You wait for him to say it
    But perhaps he doesn't know

    You're smart enough to see for yourself,
    yet dumb enough to stay blind
    If the answer is yes, then it doesnt match what's been
    If it's no, then you know it's time to move on

    Anything is better than nothing
    But what it seems to be isn't enough

    What are you doing here anyway?
    You dont belong here
    You should be superficial and shallow
    Not deep and involved

    You're just the same as everyone else
    Don't let him tell you otherwise
    You know how it is between you
    What makes you think you're so special?

    Maybe you once were, but you stuck a dagger in it long ago
    Now you're just another brick in the wall
    You're the same color as the next, nothing makes you stand apart from the rest
    Quit fooling yourself

    Time to accept things with the grace of a woman
    Not the grief of a child
    Find out what the truth is and live with it
    Or go on hiding from everyone but yourself

    The time is now



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    I don't know Leo... why aren't you proud of this?
    it's good.

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    hmm..........i dont know either.......

    maybe cuz it was just my thoughts as i typed it in without really thinking about it......i was talking to myself, basically.......it just doesnt seem like "art" to me *shrug*.......*L

    im my own worst critic, but i'll continue to put stuff out there........someone somewhere might relate........that's what i like about this board and this kind of forum setting......."say anything".....you know?

    such freedom and comfort in those two words.....

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    Red face

    I think this was beautiful. exactly because it was your thoughts... and it has an honesty to it that so much poetry lacks.

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    *LOL* thank you, you're the second person to suggest i read Kerouac......methinks i should listen! *G

    i appreciate the advice and thank you for the compliment!

    smile

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    thanks, CC..........*G

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    i have to agree... if you had read "mexico city blues" by jack kerouac, then you would know that the first thought is the best thought. because the first thought is basically honesty, like when someone passes by you on the interstate and flips you off, your first thought is, "oh how i want a gun and i'd blow his *expletive* head off!" then the second thought is basically ignoring it so that you won't go to prison, but you still wanna kill the "expletive*er!
    aww hell, go check out the mexico city blues for the spontaneous prose thingie and let me shut up here.

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    I like it a lot as well. Very nice, very honest. smile

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    again i thank you smile

    does anyone else ever fear they'll sound dorky when they write this way? (continuous, flowing thought?) *L

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    hey dwim! i bought "Mexico City Blues" today and i cant wait to get started biggrin

    thank you very much for the suggestion, i think i'm a beatnik at heart *W

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