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    Inactive Member dwim's Avatar
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    In A City

    I want to walk the streets that you walk.
    Anywhere's better than here, where
    life is lived according to
    the whims of the days and
    responsibilities. I dwell with
    the thoughts of you and the ducks
    in the park, as you've told me
    in our correspondence.

    Now I'm writing back to say
    that I'd walk the streets with you,
    even in the pouring rain. Together,
    we'd stroll past the music store
    where you've found all the rare vinyls
    and worn out tapes of old bands
    who gave out against time and
    are now considered hypocrites. We'd
    sit for a rest on that bench where
    I'd watch you admire your
    brand new treasures.

    I'm telling you that I'd
    walk the streets with you because
    I've never wanted to end up like them:
    The unknown people from my memory
    who stood on a city corner, hunched over
    with hands in their pockets, defeated
    by this life and the system. The same
    people who stood there everyday,
    just watching the cars go by and
    I vowed that I'd never
    become like them.

    So I'd walk the streets with you,
    even in the pouring rain, if that
    would be what it takes for you
    to know that you'd never be alone
    in this bloodystupidshit world. That I
    would be the one to tell you:
    I dream of being a rich bum and
    you'd tell me that you would become
    a gypsy, telling fortunes and
    all the prophecies would come true.

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    I like this. It has a smooth rythym (at least in my mind). I especially like the verse with the record store.

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    *bump*

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