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November 10th, 2004, 02:07 AM
#1
HB Forum Owner
I'm bleeding out the ears, literally
bleeding out the right ear and
I'm running out of cu-tips,
don't know where its coming
from and don't care
the problem is specifically my
tail lights but the head lights aren't
working great and Holly came
by to light my fire, I've always
wanted a fire, I've always wanted
a flame
shrek doubles up the score and I'm
smashed, itchy t-shirts and no deoderant,
still wearing my old girl's socks
and I really don't know why
the undertaking seems primitive, almost
unworthy but I'm doing it
one shovel at a time and the shit
keeps piling in
a friend jumped in the hole smiling
and I stuck the shovel through, threw
him out too
its getting too much and
I'm getting used to it
all my lovin'
all I eat is you
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November 10th, 2004, 05:36 AM
#2
Senior Hostboard Member
This is more the "non-contained" type works I've grown accustomed to seeing from you. However much more formatted than those of old (which seemed more of a paragraph of text, than rather lines broken up)
Wild - crazy - and..... imaginative. I say that because - I didn't catch anything about it - and although the beginning was pretty clear - by the end I was scratching my head.
Perhaps that was your intention?
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