an attempt to do something

[Fliptastic29]

Left Eye, Blink
Right Eye, Blink
A thick haze has settled,
interupted by a loud BEEP...BEEP...BEEP.

i raise my head only to find it settled back down again,
I lift my left leg only to find it merely bent.

Everyday the circular cycle continues,
the boredum, the loss of interest, The utter need to remain entombed in this bed;
life is like a statue,
it can only last so long.

[pixxie]

I liek this little bit of something. And i must say, it captures the essence of boredom very well. I think in the beginning of the last stanza you could take out everyday, because we get the jist of that with the following lines. Good stuff.

[Hannibal]

I absolutely adore the closing lines.

Love them.