Ya know - I didn't like this poem when I started reading it...
and I was like "what IS all this - it sucks!"
But once I got to the end, it all 'settled in' and made sense. And I liked it much more when I had read the end.
I liked it a lot actually.. very cool.
it was like - a shocking ending, that wasn't shocking, but just 'made sense'.. and brought everything together.
Great work here... I like it on so many levels.
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