how are we not full or words

[parch]

spitting out green mouths and time
all the time

how are we not great apes grinning
throwing our own semblance of substance

cuddling locked arms and elbows,
creamy eyes bush the pillow and swoon

how are we not buying up used cars and driving
meeting each other in wide belly deserts
laughing and spitting
there's always three beers
and nobody's gonna' split one

[thenewrant]

Upon first reading, I really like the language of this piece, and the overall "hurry" in which it wants to be read. There are some really great lines within in this piece, such as:

"spitting out green mouths and time
all the time

how are we not great apes grinning"

&

"how are we not buying up used cars and driving
meeting each other in wide belly deserts
laughing and spitting"

I really think you could elaborate on this. Like I said, I enjoy the rich language and the images it provides. I want to see more of this, if not more like it. Good work.