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  1. January 21st, 2001, 07:30 AM #1
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    nice...really nice....seems to remind me of a pretty good poet i know...but he stopped writing for a while...but anyway...i like this a lot, i hope you continue posting here. the flow was good and the question at the end was a good cut. nicely done.
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  2. January 21st, 2001, 04:18 PM #2
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    The neon slips from the street lights like liquid. The road is busy with metal. Main street is a motion blur. Tonight is smirking, tonight is breathing heavy with anticipation. Enveloped in cold winds and city grind. Watch the Human sewage crawl, flowing- leaking out apartment doors and trickling down cemented veins. Absorbing it, owning it, destroying it. Are they living or are they waiting to die?
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