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    I've come across a well
    In this endless desert
    Overjoyed, I pump the handle vigorously
    Because I'm dry in all the 5 senses
    The faster I pump
    The faster my hopes rise
    A faint gurggle sound comes out
    The well is dry and vacant
    My hopes mirror the same image
    Divine thirst
    I reach for water
    But nothing is available


    ~Truth 187~
    Fragments of the mind
    Frozen in time

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    good idea...tragic...like a lot of your stuff...but good . i don't like your use of hope..i do enjoy the concept you put into being dry . ....in all the 5 senses. that was interesting.
    ___---parch

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