Damaged

[machinery]

I like this. Short and powerful, but so far, your posts seem deep and wounded. For me, when I am down and I try to write it out, I really strive one being "poetic" and describing it best as possible. I want to draw that feeling out to the top degree. I always love short writings. This is nice, but I think that you could really make it come home by revision. Well that's just me. I revise all the time.

[zebraflames]

Healing comes so painfully,
and it chills to the bone.
Will anyone get close to me.
Im damaged, as im sure you know.