NEVER

[Zeik Blaine]

never felt so good
never felt so alive
never smelt so good

never cried harder
never loved so much
never hurt so much

never been so alone
never been so morbid
never hated so much

never wanted more
never dissatisfied
never useless

never cried myself to sleep
never thought of death
never thought of suicide

never felt so free
never took a life
never saw a better site

never been better
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probably needs a lot of work give me some advice please?

[parch]

advice...i'm not sure where you're really goin w/ this so the advice is difficult to give and its also irrelevant if i'm completely off...so if i seem to have no clue (which is most of the time).....just disregard this reply. the poem goes from good...to hurt..to alone..to hate...to death, freedom, life, and taking life...and i can't catch the chain...maybe if there was a progression or a structured line of events..i could catch it..but i can't really right now...
___---parch