untitledherewith a title there

[tsilo]

u'll catch the title below everything...i guess that's why i did not write it up there...hehe

There she comes with a biscuit in her ear
A magazine in her right hand that whispers June last year,
And an ash tray on the other that everyone flicks on with their sticks
She still thinks she's an angel church statue
that delivers a bowl with holy springs on her palm's tattoo
That smile on her wrinkled forehead
is a vast water erosion at the Pacific
Nuclear devoted scientifics
stretch their necks while imprisoned behind the Manila Zoo Clinic
Typify, stereotype her leather bra
while she dances through the night
with her naked flaws
-a fool's smile

[ranter]

um...im kinda lost on it...but let me read it a few more times to try to get a grip on it. i think i may need a little background info

[tsilo]

it's got a bent kind of imagery n' if u'll imagine it. u'll see how crazy it can get...

[parch]

i like
i think that's all i'll say.

[ranter]

ill agree with parch on this one...i like it, but i cant really say why, or really anything else about this poem. but i do like reading it....just how it flows

[machinery]

i'll say that I like the rant...but it also confused the hell out of me..but I had to read it over and over again...sort of like an addicted feeling....still questioning this one..hahah

[tsilo]

u all seem to find it hard to understand this one..what makes it complicated? it's all about this insane girl..where she can't seem to fit in on this world..but she's happy with where she stands no matter how other people puts a brand on her..