Evening Monday Jazz

[tsilo]

i think it could be wilder if u'll add some major event going on that contrasts well with your description...something that will make an evening monday jazzy...it's really jazzy already but an event..or some action or probably a conversation would create a hit into it..i don't know...i'm not sure...but i hope u got some spark out there.

[parch]

if you add an event, you have to make up an event.
right?

i don't know that that's possible..unless you add an event that did happen but that you did not record.