Nightime Cares

[Hannibal]

Sometimes, the truth escapes us,
and we're afraid of what we really are.
We hate ourselves, and we hate the world,
That allows us to still live.

[sarafina mable]

That allows us to still live.[/QUOTE]

i really like these words, seem to be something on the verge of advice.
one thing i though was that i might be kinda a stunner if you switched the last two words so it read "that allows us to live still".
just something that popped into my mind

[Hannibal]

Yah, I like it that way too!
I don't know where that came from.
It's really small, but I liked it so I decided to keep it ya know?
I figured I'd just best post it on here before I totally forgot about it and went somewhere else in my brain.
*shrugs* hehe

[Fliptastic29]

I love the point that this was a random thought. The more i read it the more i like it. I think you should add onto it and extend it into a few stanza's. But thats just me. Anyways awesome thought.
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