Empty Arms...

[gietl21]

You?ve slept well, miles from my arms you say,

Yet the love you profess to me has never made you change your ways,

The stars bring you memories of times past,
While I?ve wasted away hours wishing on stars that you would have chosen me first, instead of last?

But sleep dosent escape me, I sleep the sleep of the dead,
Wishing that were all you were to me, dead?

But not all wishes come true, your so alive to me it makes my heart hurt when ever a thought of you crosses my mind?

My arms are empty while yours are wrapped around someone else?

[Hannibal]

I like this one...

a little rough.. but good.

[Fliptastic29]

i want more.... i think it's a decent begining but you do need more for this, give me feelings not just words...give me EMOTION!