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  1. February 29th, 2004, 02:13 AM #1
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    And the silence rang hollow,
    My ears burning with the sound.
    I couldn't hear her voice anymore,
    Just curious beats and insensible vibrations.
    She was silent, and gone.
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    Very powerful with a very well put out verses. I enjoyed the fact that it was short but brought out a lot of thought. At least it did in me. Just reminded me of emptyness. A feeling of no feeling if you get what i mean. Just wanted to congratulate you on this one i really like it.
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