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April 21st, 2004, 02:17 AM
#1
Inactive Member
she could dance
but the earth would never do justice to the beauty she leaves behind
each step a movement of time across her body flowing grace and guiltless love
she danced with her body through a mind of spinning colors
where do words form for a girl of selective stunning emotions?
the cold is breaking boundaries in sight of her eyes and sometimes there are mountains to climb,
and so she climbs
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April 25th, 2004, 04:00 PM
#2
Senior Hostboard Member
Adore the ending part on this one..
The last two lines just grab me.
really a kind of "getcha" that I love.
A good peice.
It required a few readings, but... it just sits well...
Everything just... "fits" *shrugs*
but the last two lines...
in the words of a friend of mine "BRILLIANT!"
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April 26th, 2004, 09:34 PM
#3
Inactive Member
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April 26th, 2004, 09:35 PM
#4
Inactive Member
where did everyone go? and when are you gonna post something?!
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May 1st, 2004, 10:01 PM
#5
Inactive Member
sarafina
its beautiful [img]graemlins/idea.gif[/img]
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